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Published: 2007-06-11 00:16:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 5769; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 166
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Now we know a bit more about ol Shino...Another CF page (done quickly in pencil)
Well, we all know what shino's weakness is don't we?
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*evil laughter*
any thoughts on the block and structure? i need a lot of help on those...
Thanks ^^/
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Hmm, the panel on ther upper right could use a better touch up on perspective, as the large dark area is a bit too much. Since this is a sketch up of the idea for the page, things can be different once you add in the other effects. This is my opinion.
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Lol -^^- Thankyou~!
Hmmm, your name, which Shino is it actually supposed to mean?
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Shino Aburame...... hehehehe...... *hides behind a tree as Shino walks by* X3!!! I effing love him.....
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If this is in pencil, I can only imagine what you could do in pen. I still say you're far better than me! Just let me know if I'm complimenting you too much. XD
Good thing I know Shino's weakness...
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No no no~~!
TWT' i can't use the pen~!
Ah, whe also has another one, Her ego....
^^"/
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'tis an honor
ah memories? ^^? of what *makes dreamy face*
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idk much about panelling and layout, but i think it flows well
i really like the concept/characters
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Thanks!!!
>W< the guy belongs to a friend of mine, i forgot to mention
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If you're about to change the panel arrangement, then maybe the view of each panel should be changed as well.
Maybe I can give the suggestion, but I have to draw it, and it can't be now. I have my first final exam paper tomorrow... T^T But if you want, I can draw that again according to what I want to suggest you later, in a form of a detailed rough draft maybe. ^^
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Yep, how would you go about this page? what would you change?
Good luck! how did you do on those tests?
wish you A's and A's
ah, don't really need to be detailed ^^"/ don't want to trouble you too much, just a sketchy storyboard would be great!
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Um, let's see... perhaps I'd add more panels to enhance the flow of the panels, and draw some panels at different angles to add the impact. But that's my rough planning, I need to experiment as well.
I just finished one paper, and I'm still eager to draw in the 2 hours before the start of the exam! >_< I can't control my hand... T^T But I think it's at least half-well, I don't think I'll get an A for that paper though. :/
Umm, but maybe it will still be quite detailed, because I usually never leaves a sketchy drawing, even for a doodle. 
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i love your paneling and the way it flows, keep up the great work ^O^
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Guess we may expect some fan service from the next page.Anyway,look forward to the inked version eventually.
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not actually... ^^"it gets given away later on.
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SHE'S IMMORTAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ZD
*stare
............err
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oh noes!
....
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...er what?
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I know I love it! I do think you did a great job.
Would like to have something better and more helpfull to say, but to be honest, I am horrible ate paneling myself. ><
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TWT" i agree with you pocky, it's really hard TWT"
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Wow, Shino is an incredibly cool character. It would be great to see this comic!
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she's mostly cool ^^"
*sighs* let me improve a little more ^^/
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love the panelling on this one~ 
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Thankyou~!
ah, it's actually a quick pencil comic, so the quality level is different to the professional mangas, no it's barely in the Doujin category~...
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XD well no probs! when it comes to manga, we need to fix stuff like this in the drafting period before we put in the ink~ "D i say it looks pro~
XD nice to meet you too~ i'm ryu~
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See? You can do it. :] My only suggestion is that perhaps you could add a background on the last panel?
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True....
where can i get screentones?
(omg i'm so laazy)
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lol
To be honest Fuyu,
it wasn't intentional TwT"
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lol, i wish i can just magically creat them TWT"
Thanks Tangerine~
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