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Published: 2010-07-01 17:21:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 8504; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 53
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Myeah so... sorry I broke my streak of submitting one page every day..... I was busy dealing with Facebook fraud. ~
bleh...but anyway, next page. One of my favorites. ONE MORE PAGE TO GO, FOLKS. THEN IT'S ALLLLLL OVER.
Until next round, if I make it.
The grass in panels 3 and 4 was a PAAAIINN to do...and yes I messed up on Norge's blood in panel three...looks like a plate...tch...
I think this is my favorite page of this whole round though. X)
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Norge (c) AND ONLY CROW.
Sadi (c) AND ONLY ZERNA. ON DEVIANTART.COM. No where else. -___-
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I like that last panel. Especially those claws. It inspired me to create/imagine a new character.
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Well, apparently you don't have a fanfiction (D
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He gets tagged a lot... O_o
Sadi, she is a awesome little Sadist.
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She should try it,it's bloody gory fantastic!
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Tagg'd. Betch.
Alas, poor Norge. We knew him well. I think. Did we?
Nice detail on his wounds in this one. Just goes to show just how homicidal Sadi can be.
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xDD
I feel that I got to know him. :3
ohhh yes...~
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well I like this page,yet I have to say that I'm a LITTLE disappointed
You didn't really make him fight back and that made him look way to helpless and the "fight" itself is off screen so we can't really know what's going on in there.
The previous pages looked like it was meant to go somewhere,yet it just stopped out of sudden.
But I do like Norges slashed up body on panel 4
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thanks...and sorry again, looking back on it I guess I was aiming more for actual blood and gore and backgrounds and color than story...dude I fail. |D
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xDD that's why I always write scripts,to not get carried away
Well,I bet ya'll win anyway xDD
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I do little mini comic pages first. Each page takes up about a 1/4 of a piece of paper.
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fffff |D I don't have patience to do those and my sketches are too messy for it
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I think that's easier than script, because then you draw something twice and you can tweak it the second time to make it better. C:
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I'm always too lazy to do things twice XDD
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very very gruesome! love the perspectives too! X3
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hehehe~ blood~ hehe~
I don't think I would want to play tag with Sadi~
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*squeals like a hyper cheerleader* omg yay!! Noge's dead XDD and Sadi is in her crazyness stage! 
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lol aw XD ah well X3 this was the best thing to see after coming back from being stuck at camp for a week >< 8D
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lol yep but it was my first and last time going there since they're not doing a high school camp anymore XD lol how ironic
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I'm holding my breath for the final decision.
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You will enjoy the last page. |3
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Hmm...I think..you should have shown a bit more fighting between them..seems more to..one sided
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Too late now. 
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yeah, well just watch how you do it. Cause it seems like you did kinda...copy yourself from the first time. Do look more at each other's strength and weakness and combine them so it has a bit more action in it then..one, two hits Sadi gets then she goes slaughtering the other and then boom she wins
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I know... I'm still sort of getting this comic thing figured out. And... I only added Norge's attempted escape because a couple of guy friends of mine at school said she killed him too fast. |3;;
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just a bit there it seems. but it should be ok since it is only second round. but you should do what enigmatia is doing. She had her friends and people from DA to real to help put it together. Like with her comic right now. Though we had a bit of a conflict with the ending XD
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oohh. 
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Go Sadi
Great job
It looks awesome really awesome
Sadi is cute when she is angry, ok she looks all the time cute
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thank you very much. XD I wouldn't say she's cute all the time though.lol
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You're welcome
Ok that she is, is a kinda different but she looks all the time cute
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