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Published: 2011-06-14 05:20:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1681; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 12
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Description Aside from MAYBE a name change, this should be final (Note: that is not a reason to give me alternate name suggestions).
Changes:

-Small details on Clean Man, Tortoise Man, and Deepfry Man are changed.
-Small details on some mugshots are changed.
-Ghost Man's armor now has shine (it actually had shine to begin with, but I removed it for some reason)
-Parasol Woman is replacing Pierce Man.
-Small pallette changes.

It's also worth mentioning that all RMs are available from the start again.

Thoughts?

EDIT: Seems as though I forgot to mention names. From left to right: Desert Man, Clean Man, Ghost Man, Parasol Woman, Shrub Man, Tortoise Man, Deepfry Man, Neon Man, Disco Man.
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Comments: 21

JKN-Infiniti [2015-06-26 03:46:08 +0000 UTC]

I had my own Neon Man I was gonna use for MegaMan AutoGenesis!!!

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JKN-Infiniti [2015-06-26 03:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Is this a game?

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gokou-sama [2012-08-21 08:07:25 +0000 UTC]

I always love seeing other people's Mega Man boss ideas, and I think Robot Masters are my favorite to see. I think my favorite of this set is a toss-up between Ghost Man and Shrub Man.

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Arceusrules98 [2011-10-21 13:19:45 +0000 UTC]

I like them

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Phen01 [2011-09-23 01:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Ghost Man could use a face, even two floating eyes would work.
I think my favorites out of this bunch are Shrub and Deepfry, in terms of how well they are drawn. Desert looks pretty nice too.

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leduc-gallery [2011-09-17 17:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I like Shrub Man and Neon Man best.

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Crapcarp [2011-08-22 03:39:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry to say this, as it's obvious you've put in some effort in these, but they kinda suck. Here are some ideas of improving them, on at a time now:

Desert Man: Looks rather dull, use some contrasting colors to give him some much-needed life.
Clean Man: Umm, doesn't really look threatening. I know you're going for an unusual robot master and that's good(not everyone does that) but you've got to make him look at least a little bit intimadating. I suggest giving him a broom-sword or something, or perhaps a spiked-up floor cleaner as his bottom. Give him 'something' to make him more of a threat.
Ghost Man: Not bad, make him leaner and he'll look meaner.
Parasol Woman: Y'know, I might do a redesign for her myself since I'm getting something good in my head with her. That aside, she looks pretty good.
Shrub Man: While the mugshot is pretty cool, his design in general is a bit lack luster. Y'know what would be great? Red flowers. Red's compliment is green, so they would pop out, not to mention make him look more threatening.
Tortoise Man: I don't know, something about his design makes me laugh. Sorry, it just does, I can't take it seriously. I suggest looking at Rainy Turtloid for ideas on his design.
Deepfry Man: His shape is rather dull. I think you should try again and look at kitchen tools(mainly deep-frying one, of course) for ideas.
Neon Man: Pretty cool. He's like a badass version of Bright Man.
Disco Man: Nice and fitting, looking forward to seeing how he fights.

Well, that's my . I'm not trying to offend you or anything, just giving friendly criticism.

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Zero-Janitor In reply to Crapcarp [2011-08-22 03:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Desert Man: Perhaps, but I still need him to look like he's made primarily of sand.

Clean Man: He's not really supposed to be threatening, as he's fighting out of fear.

Ghost Man: Perhaps a little bit less bulk wouldn't hurt.

Parasol Woman: Well, that sounds interesting, I look forward to it.

Shrub Man: He's not a flower shrub, he's basically lettuce.

Tortoise Man: I think he looks plenty threatening. Unless you're looking at his helmet as his face, then yeah, it's pretty laughable.

Deepfry Man: That's probably a good idea, since I came up with the design before assigning his element.

Neon Man and Disco Man: Thanks. Disco Man fights like a harder version of Centaur Man.

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Crapcarp In reply to Zero-Janitor [2011-08-23 03:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Desert Man: Of course, go with a monochromatic color scheme and you should do fine.
Clean Man: Ooooh, sorry about that then.
Parasol Woman: I'll have a redesign up for you probably before you even read this comment.
Shrub Man: Okay then, you can still make him look a bit more interesting though.

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Sexyboiy1 [2011-06-14 16:37:47 +0000 UTC]

not bad, not bad at all. i really like discoman's mugshot

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Rockara [2011-06-14 15:40:58 +0000 UTC]

you should change neon man's name

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Zero-Janitor In reply to Rockara [2011-06-14 20:12:03 +0000 UTC]

I thought about it, but given that his power is literally the element Neon, there isn't a lot of wiggle room. Besides, I don't think the other people with Neon Men seem to care.

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ZarelTheWindDragon [2011-06-14 14:42:29 +0000 UTC]

My suggestion for the second-to-last one who I would guess is either Watt Man or Bulb Man.

He kinda looks like he doesn't have a full head...maybe you can give him something kinda like what Plug Man has?

Also for the first one, Shell Man, I presume? It appears he has a mouthplate in his sprite, but none in his mugshot.

Besides these, I like these looks. Parasol Woman looks creative. I hope my criticism was helpful and not too offensive!

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Zero-Janitor In reply to ZarelTheWindDragon [2011-06-14 20:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, I have another reply explaining why Neon Man will probably keep his name. Although, I could probably give him more of a head rather than just a face in a bulb.

And Tortoise Man isn't supposed to have a mouthplate, it's the lower jaw of his tortoise helmet.

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ZarelTheWindDragon In reply to Zero-Janitor [2011-06-14 20:24:02 +0000 UTC]

No, I mean the first on the left. The tan, pyramid looking one.

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Zero-Janitor In reply to ZarelTheWindDragon [2011-06-14 20:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Desert Man? Well, he has a mouth, but it isn't visible on his sprite because it looks weird.

Some examples of this are Quick Man, Tomahawk Man, and the Mega Man Killers (GB).

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ZarelTheWindDragon In reply to Zero-Janitor [2011-06-14 22:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well, I think there's room for it. Or at least make the face skin colored.

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Phen01 In reply to ZarelTheWindDragon [2011-07-23 18:46:40 +0000 UTC]

The face IS skin colored.

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Kackebango [2011-06-14 05:34:31 +0000 UTC]

I personally prefered Pierceman.

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Zero-Janitor In reply to Kackebango [2011-06-14 05:36:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, then, have him.

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Dimensional-Expander [2011-06-14 05:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Heh, they're pretty cool, dude. ^^

I especially like Shrub Man, Clean Man, Parasol Woman and Ghost Man.

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