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This is an illustration presenting the Lehulns Race for the still in progress game 'Trinity Reign (c)'.
The game will be an MMORPG.
It is one of the 4 chose-able races in the game.
More will come.
Want to join the production team?
Have a look at www.trinityreign.com
or contact easton@trinityreign.com
We are currently searching for almost any form of game designers (artists, 3d modelers, 3d animators, riggers, script writers, Programmers, developers etc. etc.)
As for the painting, critiques please!
I want serious critiques, things I can learn from!
Z
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Hey man, sorry that I didn't logged in on IRC any more.
I just didn't had that much time any more 
Glad to see the drawings are put to good use
how is the game going?
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Oops. I need to come here more often. Game is rolling along. The website got completely redone, but is still using your art to a large extent. See for yourself at [link]
I have been working on a new map. It is looking pretty nice so far, as long as my PC doesn't choke on the file size in the process.
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Making good progress now. Three new coders just joined, the terrain system is almost done, and we have a new 3d guy who is pretty good and makes a mean procedural wood texture. Within a few week, we should have a working platform to start testing things on.
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Glad to hear that
I hope to see some good results, sorry for my lack of time
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hmm, critique? I think the girl pose is not quite balance lol, and her arm is a wee bit long?
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Thank you
yeah i noticed the legs are in an impossible unbalanced stance 
The arm is semi out of anatomy to make dynamics, at least that was the intention behind it
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I'm not good on giving critiques, but I'll just say this piece is wonderful 
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Thanks bro
still have a lot of anatomy to learn though x_X
i love drawings colors and light
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No problem
Hey, I think you've improved a lot in human anatomies! 
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Thanks man, loads to learn though x_X
Knowing almost all the photoshop short cuts helps a lot
I usually work on 1 layer and with a brush on 20-50% opacity. and I use left Alt to pick colors while im drawing. It's really handy
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Oh, wow... There are also shortcuts? 
But thank you so much for the tips!
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I hope it helps
its easier to work on 1 layer, you can pick colors better
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Very nice! You've done a great job with this piece especially the mountains. I would suggest using some stronger darks on the foreground, especially on the characters to give them more contrast. This will help draw the viewers eye to them. I really like the pose of the female, but the male looks a little unnatural, I think it's the arm. Taking life drawing classes can really help improve your poses and anatomy. Hope this helps a bit. Keep up the great work!
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Thank you
The mountains were the most fun part to draw!
The both have a little uneasy pose, but you are right the hand is very off.
I was thinking about taking them!
but i think i will also get it at my next school
Thank you, for you goes the same
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Whoaaa...coming back with (sorry) my eye that sees only tiny details... clouds are like AMAZING here!!! I definitely love them!
Oh and I love the woman's shoes, cause they look like there were muscules under them (I don't know if that's how it should be sorry if not).
If you want any critique I think leafs on the tree are too blured as the item in the foreground. But that's just my opinion.
That's really great painting if you asked me. I'd like to see more of yours soon
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Thank you
muscules? what are that?
Hmm yeah i was quite lazy with that, because i didn't really had any ideas for a leaf
Thanks
haven't started serious drawing yet :/, just some sketching
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muscles* sorry...language mistake
No prob ^ ^ I hope to see more updates soon
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Dank je wel
ik neem een kijkje
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wow. This one is a winner dude. Awesome detail and that background is killer!
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Thank you very much bro
still got a lot to learn though 
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You should check out glen vilppus anatomy course, that is absolutely great.
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You're welcome dude!
We all have a lot to learn man, you're not the only one 
If you plan working on anatomy then I suggest forgetting everything you know about drawing and starting from the basics. Basic forms, figure drawing then muscle structure. It will be hard, but its the best way to go I think.
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Great picture zevenstorms. You really did a good job with the large storm cloud in the background. The cloud plus the combination of how you painted the mountain range definitely expresses the large distance of the landscape you were probably going for.
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Thanks bro
Thanks
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yeah it definitely moves the eye
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the cape isn't moving right its too stiff you know, you could fold it more to make it more realistic, the colors are nice, you could make the right are of the male elf more relaxt that would loosen the whole thing up a lot.
the clouds are great btw
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Yeah you are probably right about the cape. I was looking to put the entire image in a flow, but i think i lost grab on reality and made the cape flow unnatural.
I know some part of the anatomy aren't right, i am still learning
Thanks bro
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Love the environment you have going on. Very dramatic <3 The poses seem to be a bit off, but barely noticeable so don't go bald over this. Overall this artwork is wonderful
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Thank you very much, it was the most fun part to paint
Yeah I realized, but I am still learning I guess
Thanks, i am also asked for an FPS 
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wonderful environment, very epic and dramatic
the figures poses seem to be slightly off, but i couldnt do better then this
you are very skilled and i enjoy your work
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Thanks
Yeah, some parts of the anatomy aren't right. Still learning anatomy x_X
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Altijd vet om jouw werk te zien gozer, en je word telkens weer wat beter!
Het is al verteld, de anatomie is wat off, maar voor de rest een prachtig stuk werk.
Veel succes met Trinity Reign!
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Dank je wel
Ja ik moet nog meer op anatomy oefenen x_X
nog veel meer :/
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Ik weet het man, ik teken ook fucking veel maar het kost zoveel tijd om alles ook nog eens in te kleuren enzo, dus ik heb veel onafgemaakt werk en ik word maar heel langzaam beter.
Jij bent al zwaar pro hoor, gewoon door blijven gaan en dan heb je de smaak wel perfect te pakken.
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the anatomy is a little off on both of the characters and i have read that someone already told you about that so i won't continue with this subject. i don;t like the females pose. she looks like she is in between actions. she is not standing nor sitting. she actually looks like she's falling on her back. the best advice i could give you is to use reference. i also think that the weapons are to simple drawn. you could do so much better with them
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Yeah i am still learning :/, should have seen it but guess i looked over it
The upper leg should have leaned more on the lower leg but the are off each other that's what is making it look uncomfortable.
The weapon and the skin tone are both written for the game already, but i guess i could have done it better than i did right now.
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De rechterarm van die kerel lijkt wat groot, desalniettemin een mooie plaat
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Dat klopt, ik had het wat meer in de diepte moeten maken. Nu ik z'n arm uitgerekt.
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Ach, het mag de pret eigenlijk niet drukken
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good stuff, thugh your anatomy still needs a bit more work
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true, still learning big time x_X
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Nice! Hun outfits en de achtergrond zijn echt goed gelukt.
De speer-arm van die elf ziet er alleen nog wel een tikje stijfjes uit, maar da's dan ook gelijk het enige kritiekpunt.
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Dank je
De speer-arm is uitgerekt en niet anatomisch correct
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Tja, daar loop je wel meer tegen aan.
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Wonderful work, great to see how you're improving
Just one little thing, the man's left arm (right for us) seems a bit off.
I think the capes, the woman's face and the mountains in the background look really nice. Great job!
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