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Published: 2008-11-20 16:15:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 36229; Favourites: 173; Downloads: 81
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Description Author's Note: This story contains implied vore and large bellies.




She shifted uncomfortably in the unyielding metal chair while the two officers whispered to each other right outside the door. Her meat packed belly groaned and gurgled. Normally at a time like this she would be relaxing in a bath, taking the weight of her belly off her back. Yet here she was, sitting in interrogation room 3, her hands manacled behind her back, keeping them from exploring her rounded form. Her long brown hair kept falling onto her face only for her to blow it off again. Her rounded middle gave another groan and she burped, expelling some of the rather sickly sweet smelling gas. One of the officers looked over and glared at her as the scent reached his nostrils; the other appeared not to notice.  

She knew all too well what they were discussing. Her bloated middle confirmed it. She had almost been caught. Aside from several bones, they had no case. Everything had been documented legally, especially her keeping the bones. And that of course was the crux of the matter.

"Look at her belly, she must have done it..." she heard the taller of the two say.

"Yes, it would appear she ate quite a bit, however aside from the bones, which she has the permits to own and display in her home, we have nothing to prove she ate him." The shorter one replied, inching towards the door. "Unless the DA decides to press charges, we are gonna have to let her go."

"Not until the CSI's are done going through everything with a fine tooth comb... Which could take several days with the size of her place."

The two moved to the door, leaving her alone. The single incandescent bulb flickered, barely holding the darkness of the room at bay. She groaned again as her stomach churned. She was so uncomfortable. She didn't mind being handcuffed when it was part of some role play or she was being force fed, but this... This was unbearable. The metal was starting to cut into her back and her fingers were going numb.

She burped again as her stomach churned in protest to the treatment it was lacking. She ached to rub it, to feel its tightness with her fingertips, to remember each bite, the feeling of eating more food in a single sitting than she would normally eat in two weeks. She closed her eyes, willing her stomach to calm down. "Shhh baby, I know, I'll take you home soon." She cooed, not caring who was watching from the other side of the one way mirror.

The officers watched her, hoping she would make some sort of spontaneous confession. That is, until her lawyer arrived...

"What is she doing manacled like a common prisoner? Do you not have any feelings for the poor girl? She appears to be over due with twins? Would you treat your own wife this way?" In her no nonsense pant suit and with her strong face, the female attorney bulldogged her way through the police, getting her client released in a matter of minutes.

"Now then... Dinner at your place or mine?" She asked, leading her client to the car. She patted the ripeness of her clients belly for a moment before licking her lips. Sliding into the car she locked the door. "I just have some papers for you to sign about this release..."

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Comments: 25

orochiraki [2009-12-20 15:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Just...WOW! I love how you didn't have to go full out and describe things to create a mental image...it's short and quite amazing!...but the ending...now that makes me wonder and long for more!

This is truly some writing I look up to

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zewhatcher In reply to orochiraki [2009-12-21 16:59:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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MageMoon [2008-12-16 21:25:53 +0000 UTC]


This is very good. I like how you imply things, but don't go on to describe it. Too much description makes it horrable, don't you agree?

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zewhatcher In reply to MageMoon [2008-12-16 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have to agree. )

Glad you enjoyed it.

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MageMoon In reply to zewhatcher [2008-12-16 21:42:00 +0000 UTC]

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CosmicGrounds [2008-11-22 23:25:57 +0000 UTC]

I really love reading your stories. I hope that one day my written work will be as great as yours. Many people attempt to write stories like this and fail, however, you have talent.

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zewhatcher In reply to CosmicGrounds [2008-11-24 15:59:08 +0000 UTC]

All it takes is hard work, dedication, patience, practice, more hard work, more dedication and then, you guessed it, more patience.

Thank you for the nice compliments. ^_^ They mean a lot.

To write stories like this it takes what I listed above. Most people want to get straight to the vore or inflation or whatever. I am trying to be a bit more... subtle.

Thank you for reading and for the great comments.

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TheFutureIsNow2000 [2008-11-21 10:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely one of my favorites! Wonderful pacing, great, sexy tension, I could go on and on. Write more, please!

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zewhatcher In reply to TheFutureIsNow2000 [2008-11-21 14:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I may write more to this one, or I may just leave it as is... I'm not sure yet.

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Kisame17 [2008-11-21 02:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Woah.

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zewhatcher In reply to Kisame17 [2008-11-21 14:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Woah?

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Kisame17 In reply to zewhatcher [2008-11-21 20:46:58 +0000 UTC]

I was speechless.

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zewhatcher In reply to Kisame17 [2008-11-21 20:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Good. ^_^

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OmeQuicksilver [2008-11-21 01:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice concept. ^^

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zewhatcher In reply to OmeQuicksilver [2008-11-21 14:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^_^

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22Bigbelly22 [2008-11-21 00:52:56 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good, maybe you do a drawing to go along with it. Burp!

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zewhatcher In reply to 22Bigbelly22 [2008-11-21 01:01:30 +0000 UTC]

My drawing sucks. However thanks for the compliment!

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Vorenoob [2008-11-20 18:18:15 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Short and sweet. Still she got pretty lucky, you have to wonder what would have happened if those cops had ordered an ultra sound

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zewhatcher In reply to Vorenoob [2008-11-20 18:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Or X-ray.

I may do some more about this subject. I dunno yet.

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Vorenoob In reply to zewhatcher [2008-11-20 21:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Heh ok so this might save you a lot of time

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zewhatcher In reply to Vorenoob [2008-11-20 21:25:49 +0000 UTC]

What might?

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Vorenoob In reply to zewhatcher [2008-11-20 21:35:42 +0000 UTC]

This

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zewhatcher In reply to Vorenoob [2008-11-20 22:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Read my comments on the story. ^^

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Vorenoob In reply to zewhatcher [2008-11-21 02:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Done and thank you very much for the criticism, I honestly missed a lot of little things, next time I shall strive for total perfection Man if I can keep this activity roll going I may actually finish that other story I've been writing, ya know what the funny thing is we're talking about two nights of work with massive gaps in between, if I just put one more night in it would finally be done

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zewhatcher In reply to Vorenoob [2008-11-21 14:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Then get to work! I'm sure I have a newspaper I can smack you with that will keep you motivated!

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