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Jumjum-Bean [2018-03-14 03:47:39 +0000 UTC]

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Hey, I'm here to critique you.

First off, I'd just like to mention that I quite like the overall effect of this art, the lighting is very well placed and the color scheme is wonderful. However, the major flaw I find this piece to have is the mouth, I feel like it is sort of misplaced, perhaps it is a stylistic choice, I don't know. Again, this might be a style but I feel like the shine on the cloak is unnecessary and makes it look plastic, perhaps adding more texture to it may help.

I find that the shading, yet well placed, is quite blurred, especially in the right hand side of the face, the figure's right hand and in a couple places in the hair.

A tip for the future: When coloring, instead of having one main color theme, try mix it up. Like, not drastically but maybe making the eye blue, or a color that stood out more may help draw attention to the character. Here is a color chart that I found helpful for selecting colors.
www.pinterest.com/pin/39807605…

By matching opposite colors, you bring diversity and if these colors are well placed it should really help make the art feel complete and alive.

Overall, great work on this, you obviously are quite talented.

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Cumulusnubes [2018-04-08 11:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Very good!

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sleer40k [2018-03-15 07:05:59 +0000 UTC]

don't know much about chibi, so can't make a Critique
but I would like to say that I like this one little cutie here
You're awesome. Wish you any luck!!

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BlueSnowfire [2018-03-13 22:00:11 +0000 UTC]

AHH, I love it! she looks so cute, thank you for drawing her! ^^

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