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Published: 2007-07-16 20:49:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description Redlines please? Or bluelines, whatever suits your fancy. Go all out on the (constructive)crits and redlines, don't hold back. My anatomy needs to be better if I want to make it into SRON.

102 minutes, Paint BBS, SSO

I can never figure out what category anything goes under anymore...D:

Psstt...Download for full view...

Will probably be scrapped later...
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Comments: 19

Scrawffler [2007-07-21 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

I think the third one looks really sweet! It's back right foot seems a little too high up, but it's hardly noticable. I really like how you posed the second one!!

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Zhellana In reply to Scrawffler [2007-07-22 15:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!

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T-VR [2007-07-18 20:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Okay, finished.
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I figured that #2 was a Siamese, or similar to in breed, which would explain why it's slender, the long legs, etc. #3 I went with a stockier breed.
For the hind leg by itself, I was.. Really confused because I am HORRID at hind legs. The blue line was more a guide, the green is more accurate I think.
For the bottom cat stretching out, the position of the hind legs was a bit unnatural I think. For the front paw to be raised, the other front leg must balance it out, so it's placed in between the back legs in position. The hind legs should be set fairly wide apart for balance as well. That is, unless the cat was reaching for a bird or something, but anyways...

So, yeah. I've just realized how bad I am at poses and cat anatomy. I really struggled redlining because I wasn't totally sure what was right and wrong. So these are very sketchy, but I think most of it relatively okay.
Anyways, hope I could help somewhat.

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Zhellana In reply to T-VR [2007-07-18 21:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Ohmigawd, thank you so much!! I really appreciate this, you have no idea how much I do! ILU!

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skitty-nya [2007-07-18 02:16:50 +0000 UTC]

XD Aww, great poses~ told ya you're much better than me with animal anatomy.

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Zhellana In reply to skitty-nya [2007-07-18 15:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you! <333

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Shika-Shika7752 [2007-07-17 16:43:51 +0000 UTC]

#3 is soooo cute!
The tail is so fluffy!

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Zhellana In reply to Shika-Shika7752 [2007-07-17 23:14:32 +0000 UTC]

like Sophie's!

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Shika-Shika7752 In reply to Zhellana [2007-07-19 14:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Sophie's is too poofy!

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Zhellana In reply to Shika-Shika7752 [2007-07-19 14:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes, way to poofy c:

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T-VR [2007-07-17 00:41:51 +0000 UTC]

I'll redline, but it'll have to be tomorrow.
But this looks really good. I LOVE #1's pose! ~<333

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Zhellana In reply to T-VR [2007-07-17 12:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ~

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ZeroKins [2007-07-16 23:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Your anatomy looks pretty good to me ;D I can't blueline cause I have no cat anatomy sense, only dog, and it's pretty horrid xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Zhellana In reply to ZeroKins [2007-07-17 13:00:13 +0000 UTC]

XDDD S'all right.

Thanks

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Argai [2007-07-16 23:36:34 +0000 UTC]

oouwaah! I love your kitties! >XD so kawaaaii

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Zhellana In reply to Argai [2007-07-17 13:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks yous!!!

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dragonluvr2217 [2007-07-16 22:53:42 +0000 UTC]

omfg #1 and 3 are lovableplz!!!! <3333333

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Zhellana In reply to dragonluvr2217 [2007-07-17 13:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Kitsuka-san!

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dragonluvr2217 In reply to Zhellana [2007-07-17 14:00:35 +0000 UTC]

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