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Zhoid — I can't give up

Published: 2009-08-15 19:57:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1069; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 14
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Description My entry for s contest

It was an another ordinary evening at the volcano range. Cyndra was checking out the area, smiling to herself. Nothing could spoil this wonderful, beautiful evening.
But then suddenly, she heard someone shouting her name. As she turned her head, she saw Coal running towards her, face twisted in fear.
"Cyndra, come quickly! There's an unknown dragon that's attacking our younglings by the lava lake!"

Cyndra was stunned. Attacking children? Whatever was the intruder's reason, it could NOT be forgiven. "Hurry now, Volcra-sama is fighting it already!"

As Cyndra and Coal arrived to the fight scene, they saw the intruder. A big purple dragon, bigger than Cyndra and Coal together, was on the ground, snarling at Volcra. Volcra had collected all the children behind her wings, and roared, " How DARE you to attack these children!!???!? How twisted your mind is to do something that cruel!??!?" The intruder just grinned, and said "I'm hungry."

Indeed, the dragon looked skinny. "I've been travelling for three months in this pitiful volcanic wasteland without a single meal. Now that I finally found some prey, Im going to feast." A grin spread to the intruders face as it crouched and sprang towards Volcra and the children.

Cyndra and Coal could just watch. Volcra sprang towards the dragon, but with a powerful sweep, she was thrown aside. A ball of acid-green flames burst out of the dragon's mouth, and to the surprise of all, as the flames hit the rock pile next to Volcra, they burst into flames too. She tried to attack once more, but with an another slash, she was knocked unconcious.

Cyndra was furious now. Even when Coal tried to prevent her, she charged head first towards the intruder. Caught by surprise, he wasnt able to dodge Cyndras attack. Cyndra hit her teeth to his neck, biting as hard as she could, and feeling something warm drippling between her teeth. A deafening roar filled the air and Cyndra could feel that her feet were no longer touching the ground. The dragon tried to rip her off, but she just held on and slashed, punched and kicked him as hard as she could.

Finally she couldnt hold on any longer, and she felt how the dragon grabbed her neck and held her away from itself. Seeing its blood-red eyes, flaming from anger, she knew that she wouldnt last much longer. But she couldnt give up. Not now. Even as she saw the acid-green flames rise higher from the ground, and saw the greenish ball of bare energy forming on the hand of the dragon, she knew that she couldnt give up. For the sake of her fallen leader, for the sake of the children, for the sake of her homelands...


...For the sake of her family.



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...Again, one of my so called "alien-stories" Of you read the whole thing, respect for you. If you didnt, shame on you >:^

Cyndra, Volcra, Coal and the volcanic wywerns (c)

Senka and art (c) aka me!
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Comments: 57

Zhoid In reply to ??? [2010-01-08 07:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha, this is actually an old piece and well, I tied to first place in the contest with this.

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kalamadae [2010-01-05 03:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Looks like a delicate situation indeed. Nice work

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Zhoid In reply to kalamadae [2010-01-05 08:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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CyndraofShadowClan [2010-01-05 00:42:34 +0000 UTC]

i was looking back on this and it got me thinking. I still love the picture and story up to now and it would be cool if you finished the story. I know some things aren't exactly in place, but it doesn't really matter
Just saying it as a suggestion. your picture, your story and idea XD you do what you like :3

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Zhoid In reply to CyndraofShadowClan [2010-01-05 08:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Well, I actually dont even know whats happening next I just left the story hanging. But I can try to make up an ending of some sort

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CyndraofShadowClan In reply to Zhoid [2010-01-06 03:24:38 +0000 UTC]

it's up to you ^^

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13DarkRoses [2009-09-18 18:29:04 +0000 UTC]

woahhh looks sooo cool! Can't believe it!

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Zhoid In reply to 13DarkRoses [2009-09-19 09:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Awh, thanks

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ViscountDevil [2009-08-17 03:26:20 +0000 UTC]

UUUMUMUMUMUMUMUUUUMM.......llluuuurrrrrrrrrRRR

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Zhoid In reply to ViscountDevil [2009-08-17 06:21:50 +0000 UTC]

XD thaaaanks!

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ViscountDevil In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-17 06:23:09 +0000 UTC]

....m...my heart just skipped a beat....

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Zhoid In reply to ViscountDevil [2009-08-17 06:27:55 +0000 UTC]

XD OH NO, DONT DIE!!!!

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ViscountDevil In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-17 06:29:26 +0000 UTC]

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Rubyiner [2009-08-16 18:03:29 +0000 UTC]

beautiful dragons

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Zhoid In reply to Rubyiner [2009-08-16 18:10:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Falgor [2009-08-16 14:12:11 +0000 UTC]

oho..onpas se kovin nätti kuva. O.O
hahmojen asennot ovat kerrassaan kauniit ja tausta on kiva ja väritkin mahtavat. <3

Favi tulee kyllä ^^

ps. et muuten haluaisi joskus piirtää jonkun siun hahmon ja jonkun miun hahmon (siis lohikäärmehahmon) tapeplemaan?

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Zhoid In reply to Falgor [2009-08-16 14:43:44 +0000 UTC]

kiitos

kyllähän sen voin joskus tehdä, sitten kun oon saanu tuota to-do-listaa vähän lyhyemmäksi

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wenilnawin [2009-08-16 09:02:09 +0000 UTC]

woooow, interesting... I want to know what happens next! The pic is a beauty

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Zhoid In reply to wenilnawin [2009-08-16 14:44:40 +0000 UTC]

thanksieeeesssss

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wenilnawin In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-17 09:36:31 +0000 UTC]

you're welcomieeeesssss

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Ada-888 [2009-08-16 07:43:28 +0000 UTC]

wow wähääkko hieno mä tykkään tost Senkan tukast

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Zhoid In reply to Ada-888 [2009-08-16 07:52:14 +0000 UTC]

kiitos!

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Elsku93 [2009-08-16 07:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Uskomattoman hieno!

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Zhoid In reply to Elsku93 [2009-08-16 07:52:24 +0000 UTC]

kiitos paljon.

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Inghelene [2009-08-15 20:18:56 +0000 UTC]

What an interesting story oO

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Zhoid In reply to Inghelene [2009-08-15 20:19:59 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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Inghelene In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 21:19:50 +0000 UTC]

I want to hear the rest! >w<

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Zhoid In reply to Inghelene [2009-08-16 06:06:42 +0000 UTC]

haha, that's all there is for now XD

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Inghelene In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-16 06:55:16 +0000 UTC]

why ... ? D:

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Zhoid In reply to Inghelene [2009-08-16 07:51:32 +0000 UTC]

well partly because I didnt get the story completely right according to ~CyndraofShadowClan and because I have no insp for it anymore...

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Inghelene In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-16 07:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Do you write another one then? >.<

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Zhoid In reply to Inghelene [2009-08-16 07:53:09 +0000 UTC]

well I write stories now and then, might come up with a different picture and characters.

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Aqunis In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-17 02:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Or just more Senka and Tsuki stories as am so attached to them and read them over and over again looking forward to the nest part

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Zhoid In reply to Aqunis [2009-08-17 06:28:44 +0000 UTC]

haha, well there will be more soon

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Inghelene In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-16 07:53:58 +0000 UTC]

okay! 8D

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Axxread [2009-08-15 20:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Hyaaaawn!! O___O
Kuinkas jaksat värittää nuin paljon, nuin tarkasti.

Änd me is goin' to feivi thiss.

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Zhoid In reply to Axxread [2009-08-15 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]

heh, no kyllähän siinä yhteensä meni sellanen 6-7 tuntia kun tän tein tyhjästä paperista valmiiksi asti mutta kyllä sitä jaksaa kun miettii että millanen siitä voi tulla kun se on valmis OwO

Kiitus

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CyndraofShadowClan [2009-08-15 20:11:38 +0000 UTC]

This is great! There are a few mistakes here and there (like Cyndra's bottom jaw being purple. That might've been my fault with shading black with purple and blue). This should be finished ^^. Also, what are the relations between Cyndra, Coal, the children, and Volcra? I got a little confused.

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Zhoid In reply to CyndraofShadowClan [2009-08-15 20:13:02 +0000 UTC]

ah well, Im sorry about the mistakes my bad.


Well, from what Ive read from your gallrey, they all belong to same clan, no?

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CyndraofShadowClan In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 20:19:44 +0000 UTC]

it's ok. They're more my fault.

as for the clan thing, Cyndra does arrive at the Volcanic Wyverns island wich hold them. This was the time she ran away from her godfather, Gryphon, since she was putting him in too much danger. But Volcra and Cyndra are not related but she was a sort of mother/protector for her along while her real mother (former Queen of the Shadow Clan) was killed by Gala. But they are of different Clans. Sorry about that . As for Cyndra and Coal, they're siblings (if I hadn't put Hiamovi as Cyndra's mate it would've been Coal anyway lol). I'm posting my story on this account ~ClashoftheClansClub if you want to read it and/or join

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Zhoid In reply to CyndraofShadowClan [2009-08-15 20:24:18 +0000 UTC]

ah, sorry about that I knew that Volcra and Cyndra were not related, thats why I call Volcra "leader" in this.

Well, at least I got it partly right...

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CyndraofShadowClan In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 20:27:13 +0000 UTC]

it's fine ^^ it won't harm your chance in the contest . You still left with a cliff hanger

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Zhoid In reply to CyndraofShadowClan [2009-08-15 20:28:06 +0000 UTC]

XD

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CyndraofShadowClan In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 20:30:13 +0000 UTC]

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SkulblakaSaphira [2009-08-15 20:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Great pose and scene ^^

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Zhoid In reply to SkulblakaSaphira [2009-08-15 20:09:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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SkulblakaSaphira In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 20:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^^

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mitzuliina [2009-08-15 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]

sa todellakin runosielu lienet, taiteilija vertaansa vailla.

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Zhoid In reply to mitzuliina [2009-08-15 20:09:04 +0000 UTC]

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mitzuliina In reply to Zhoid [2009-08-15 20:10:26 +0000 UTC]

miiiitä? mitään en oo tehny... *grin*

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