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Nimbus Alric Olórin the XII

Born: December 15, 1998

Age: 14

Height: 5' 2''

Weight: 119.5

Body Type: very lean and slender

Hair Color: Dark Blonde

Eye Color: Amber

Race: Caucasian; Incubus Warlock, European descendants

Associations: The Beta League

Number: W01

From: The Outer rims of Metagate City, Pa(Pennsylvania)

Lives: Metagate City Apartments

Enrolled at: Metagate Academy

Siblings: Deceased

Parents: Father; Deceased, Mother; Christine Florence, succubus witch: Alive

Teammates: Amari Tinibu, Christina Lam, Lance & Eliza Lotus, and Alex Thorn

Headquarter Leaders: Pyra, Static Jolt, and Monturuba

Longest Friendship: Damien Ross and Christina

Sexual Orientation: Homosexual

Love Interest: Damien(Hero Alias: Crow(for which Nimbus has no clue that Damien is Crow))

Powers: Warlock; dark magic mostly(can do some light magic but it is harder for him to control it), spells(on of his spells in invisibility, but it's kind of like Miss Martian's camouflage mode), and telepathy

Weakness: If he tries to do to many hard spells in a row, he gets a nose bleed. If he continues after that he will pass out or possibly die(he will find this out later while reading an old dairy of a wife to one his ancestors)

Special Things: He is the twelfth person in his family line to be called Nimbus. He can contact his father through a special button on his neck cuff. His family line is the direct cause of creating the shadow Svenghouli in the times of old. For his family, only the first born son is supposed to receive the name of Nimbus. Nimbus knows any spoken language. When his hood is up, his expression is blank. The irises of his eyes vanish and only the sclera is only visible. With the hair that is visible, it fade to grey and only parts of his skin is visible. His frowned mouth, and just above his neck cuff. While his hood is up, he cannot speak. He talks through telepathy(to better conceal his emotions from the enemy(ies) and teammates) He is part Incubus thanks to his mother being the female counterpart, the succubus

Favorite Color(s): black & grey, Family Color; Green

Attire: Cloak; green hood and dark grey bottom, button, one-piece suit, belt with pendant, boots, and gloves

Favorite Food: vegetarian food

Favorite Drink: half coffee/half chocolate milk(or hot chocolate)

Likes: Reading old things, talking to Damien& his father, being alone, dark areas, practicing spells, and doing yoga

Dislikes: Seraphine, octopuses, hard spells, when his opinion isn't heard, nightmares

Fascinations: When Damien makes him feel happy

Personality: Nimbus is a very sensitive character, but dark& mysterious at the same time. He rarely smiles, laughs, or speaks to people he doesn't know well. Nimbus is very tense around new people. It takes a while for him to get used to you(and you getting used to him). But when he doesn't perceive you as a threat, he will start opening up to you, he is very shy and stutters a lot, and is easily embarrassed. But when the topic is about a serious matter, he will speak normally.

About him: Nimbus is a very knowledgeable. People who know him always ask him for help(but he doesn't help them if he knows that they can solve it themselves(which is most of the time)). He will only speak his mind if he thinks it will better the situation(s) at hand. He is also very quick on analyzing things, finding the important information. For the Beta League, they send him out to find information with Christina. Since Christina and him go on a lot of small missions together, he opens up to her more easily. He comes to her for his personal problems(he tells Christina, and only Christina about liking men and she helps him understand his emotions/feelings the best that she can) He sees Christina as a big sister. He feels protected when she takes charge over Jason when they are on missions. One thing about him though is that he flinches/cowers at sudden movements when people use their hands.


When Alexia is brought in, he is quite on edge. He wants nothing to do with her. He makes that very clear when she tries to talk to him. He will use his dark magic on her and throws her away from him.(he feels bad latter on) Once he sees her legs, and hears about her past, he instantly bonds and drops his grudge.

About his past: Nimbus's family consisted of his father, mother, two elder sisters, and him. On the night that Nimbus was conceived, his mother pledged her allegiance to Svenghouli, a dark shadow that haunts Nimbus's family from a long time ago. But what his mother didn't know is that Ghouli changed the gender of her child. Nimbus was supposed to be a girl. Ghouli changed Nimbus's gender for his own sick benefit later on in his life. Ghouli didn't reveal this information to her until she was seven months into the pregnancy. After that moment, Nimbus's mother despised him for many unknown reasons. After Nimbus was born and almost a year old, his mother began beating him. His father and sisters would never have known because they were at school/work, and she would only beat him when it was just them. When Nimbus finally turned four, his father and sisters discovered what was going on. His father, Nimbus Alric Olórin the XI, was very displeased and seething with rage. That day he took Nimbus and sisters away from her, and he divorced her. For a year and a half, Nimbus had a normal, happy life... but that all changed in heart beat. One night, werewolf servants of Svenghouli came and murdered his father and the servants devoured his sisters. They never raised their claws to do him harm during the whole ordeal. He watched his father, the only one who brought him happiness die a slow, painful death. With Nimbus's fathers last breaths and power, he gave Nimbus a button, the one that he wears on his neck cuff, and told him, “I-if you ever need me... just mutter, 'pater I indigere,' and I will be there. I lov-.”After that, Nimbus took the pendant on his fathers cloak and wandered until he ran into Metagate City, the crime and drug part. Only being five years old and alone was a bad idea if you were in the crime part of Metagate. He ran into a gang of drug dealers who wanted to get his fathers pendant and sell it. Nimbus became frightened and used what little magic he could summon at will to ward off the gang. He ran away from them but into on coming traffic. He was about to get his by a truck but was rescued by a young, new vigilante by the name of Crow. Once Crow rescued him, he brought Nimbus to the hero of Metagate, Pyra. From there, Nimbus lived under the watchful care of Pyra and later on Static Jolt. He doesn't see Pyra as a motherly figure, he see her as a caretaker. Someone he can go to if he is having trouble in school
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Comments: 3

HoneydewSapphic [2012-01-22 17:53:22 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh! I'd say this is a definite improvement from the last time I saw this guy!
I like the improvements you made to his costume too

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Ziggyomgplz In reply to HoneydewSapphic [2012-01-22 18:04:50 +0000 UTC]

yay! thanks! ^^ i try. yet again i can't thank you enough for the insight that you gave me.

what do you think of his biography? >< i really thought about it and i think it fits him.

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HoneydewSapphic In reply to Ziggyomgplz [2012-01-22 18:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, since he's not my character I can't really tell if you've left anything out, but it looks really really developed. And even if there are some loose ends it's okay, because it sounds like even though you've had this guy for a while you're just NOW starting to flesh him out

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