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NarutoUzumaki00 [2014-09-29 00:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Yay so much goodness and story

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Zihilism In reply to NarutoUzumaki00 [2014-09-29 13:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Will I ever reach the end of this charade... That should be my goal.

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NarutoUzumaki00 In reply to Zihilism [2014-10-01 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]

'Tis not a charade but a masquerade

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Zihilism In reply to NarutoUzumaki00 [2014-10-02 02:17:41 +0000 UTC]

'Tis not a masquerade... But a Tale of Three Tails.... And a A Beard.


...I need to work on that.

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NarutoUzumaki00 In reply to Zihilism [2014-10-03 01:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes you really do

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OfaMightDivine [2014-09-28 04:52:39 +0000 UTC]

My curiosity is kinda itching...but what's Charlotte's job or why does she have so much food O: ?

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Zihilism In reply to OfaMightDivine [2014-09-28 05:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Well...

Charlotte is your classic cutthroat and hired gun. She's a loner, but gets called upon by the same client who is aware of her extraordinary skills of hiding and sniping. A perfect assassin for anyone, because she asks only for food and things quintessential to her survival.

Don't worry, this doesn't ruin any part of the story.

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binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:03:18 +0000 UTC]

"As such we lead a solitary lifestyle" <--- existence adds more gravity; lifestyle sounds too casual

"To prevent others from falling prey to our harmful ways"

"...And by others" <---- I don't see the connection between line 2 and 3; grammar error or am I just not lucid yet?

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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:19:41 +0000 UTC]

"...that also include ourselves"

Line number 4?

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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Add a "..." to the end of line 3 and start of line 4.

Also, make line 4 bigger. I actually didn't see it.

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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:43:16 +0000 UTC]

....And fixed!

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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Much better; desn't blend into the food anymoer.

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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Good idea.

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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Fuck my spelling is retarded this morning.

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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:52:03 +0000 UTC]

You know you can edit comments on dA now, right?

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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:52:30 +0000 UTC]

...sorcery...

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