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Zihilism In reply to NarutoUzumaki00 [2014-09-29 13:22:39 +0000 UTC]
Will I ever reach the end of this charade... That should be my goal.
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NarutoUzumaki00 In reply to Zihilism [2014-10-01 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]
'Tis not a charade but a masquerade
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Zihilism In reply to NarutoUzumaki00 [2014-10-02 02:17:41 +0000 UTC]
'Tis not a masquerade... But a Tale of Three Tails.... And a A Beard.
...I need to work on that.
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OfaMightDivine [2014-09-28 04:52:39 +0000 UTC]
My curiosity is kinda itching...but what's Charlotte's job or why does she have so much food O: ?
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Zihilism In reply to OfaMightDivine [2014-09-28 05:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Well...
Charlotte is your classic cutthroat and hired gun. She's a loner, but gets called upon by the same client who is aware of her extraordinary skills of hiding and sniping. A perfect assassin for anyone, because she asks only for food and things quintessential to her survival.
Don't worry, this doesn't ruin any part of the story.
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binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:03:18 +0000 UTC]
"As such we lead a solitary lifestyle" <--- existence adds more gravity; lifestyle sounds too casual
"To prevent others from falling prey to our harmful ways"
"...And by others" <---- I don't see the connection between line 2 and 3; grammar error or am I just not lucid yet?
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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:19:41 +0000 UTC]
"...that also include ourselves"
Line number 4?
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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:22:22 +0000 UTC]
Add a "..." to the end of line 3 and start of line 4.
Also, make line 4 bigger. I actually didn't see it.
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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:44:47 +0000 UTC]
Much better; desn't blend into the food anymoer.
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binkibonsai In reply to Zihilism [2014-09-27 00:45:00 +0000 UTC]
Fuck my spelling is retarded this morning.
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Zihilism In reply to binkibonsai [2014-09-27 00:52:03 +0000 UTC]
You know you can edit comments on dA now, right?
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