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Published: 2014-09-23 13:13:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 384; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 4
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Description Just gonna leave this here. Critique would be awesome c :
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Comments: 9

WoodSpider [2014-09-27 04:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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zimatrix In reply to WoodSpider [2014-09-27 07:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Art-Eli [2014-09-25 15:52:00 +0000 UTC]

wonderful style, i love your clean edges! aksi the values are beautiful, you did a wonderful work

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zimatrix In reply to Art-Eli [2014-09-25 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Glad you like it

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firebird145 [2014-09-24 03:02:32 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work here.
Although in my opinion. As it works well here. Staring at it for a while, it feels like the nose looses its shape toward the upper left.

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zimatrix In reply to firebird145 [2014-09-24 12:42:53 +0000 UTC]

It does but I found that drawing either a shadow or a highlight there just ended up looking like a line which I was trying to avoid thanks for the critique though

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firebird145 In reply to zimatrix [2014-09-24 23:53:25 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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Fedodika [2014-09-23 14:32:29 +0000 UTC]

i think you're doing fine really, you can add little speculars on the rims of the muzzle on the mouth (if your character has a muzzle) try to analyze the planar structures of faces by doing studies from photos. also try adding a little more light in the mid tones of the eyes, that should bump it out more

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zimatrix In reply to Fedodika [2014-09-23 15:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tips I think you're right about the eyes, they do seem a little dim. I'll give some photo studies a go too

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