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leonfisk [2015-03-21 07:40:45 +0000 UTC]

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Alright so I've never really done a critique, but hey I'll try. I'll only be critiquing your technique, because everything else is fine! (Sorry if I'm nitpicking, too!)

First of all, the way the light works in this picture is somewhat odd, since the light source seems to be coming from the upper left corner, but it comes from either both sides or the side opposite to the light source on the actual characters. However, there could just be multiple light sources, I dunno.
Next, the characters and background can be somewhat difficult to distinguish from each other, so I'd suggest darker lines so that their shapes are clearer, I guess. Also, the colours of the characters look very bright/light in contrast to their surroundings, which can make them look slightly out of place. Maybe darken the colors/shading, and do both of these things so that they sort of pop but still don't look out of place???

All in all this is a really great piece, jand some slight revisions could have been made to make it better in my opinion
(Keep in mind that I have little to no idea what I'm talking about)

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StarlightLore [2015-06-26 16:27:04 +0000 UTC]

How did I miss this, the composition is amazing. 
All your Siren babies are love. 

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theWeaverofTales [2015-04-05 07:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, you've got some lovely siren babies! Those teeth are fab o.o

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P1zzaWhale [2015-03-21 08:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work as always

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