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Published: 2018-04-28 05:17:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 228; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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kylerainbowdash [2018-04-29 23:11:04 +0000 UTC]

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F R E A K I N G. F A N T A S T I C. Does there need to be anything else said? Does the 100 word max critiques require even matter? All that I need to say is that this is 10000000000000% AMAZING!

I love this picture. It shows that you are an incredibly unique artist, and I already knew that. You think that the last critique I did made Candy amaze me as an original character? This is not just only badass, super cool, and well-done in general, but just artistic in so many ways. Five stars and ten out of ten for this. 100% and A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and keep up the fantastic arts.

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fluffygaykitties [2018-04-28 07:12:31 +0000 UTC]

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Hope you don't mind me dropping a critique here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

The anatomy on this peice is very nice! I really like the chibi sort of look to it and It's clear you know what you're doing when it comes to this area. The eye does look sort of out of place though ; the outline to it seems very thick in comparison to the smaller lines everywhere else. The feet also seem boxy and undefined, it's not really a major concern but something to think about.
Apart from that there's really nothing else for you to improve on anatomy wise good job e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Moving onto the linework it's very clean and consistent which is always good. I especially like the fact you didn't make it a solid black colour. There's no places where it's shaky and the white outline around everything helps it stand out against the background.

Lastly the shading and lighting. I can see you went for a sort of soft shading. In my opinion cell shading would age looked a lot cleaner ; it can be tricky to get the hang of but it would make your peices look a lot better. The yellowish lighting on the hair and tail seems kind of unnecessary and distracting.

Overall I like this peice e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I hope my critique can be of some help to you!

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CoffeeqCats [2018-07-06 01:52:43 +0000 UTC]

The puns ;3

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SleepvBear [2018-04-28 17:16:08 +0000 UTC]

why do you do this Zohto?

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Zohto In reply to SleepvBear [2018-04-28 20:52:35 +0000 UTC]

can't help it uwu

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TheSpooke [2018-04-28 12:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Oooh my God that pun

I LOVE

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Zohto In reply to TheSpooke [2018-04-28 20:52:50 +0000 UTC]

sAME
I just had to use it here :'D

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TheSpooke In reply to Zohto [2018-04-29 16:46:40 +0000 UTC]

It was worth it

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