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Zoiby — Dawn Painting

Published: 2018-02-10 15:47:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1133; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 5
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couldn't decide which one i liked better

if you're leaving a comment then please say which bg you prefer because if more people prefer the picture one then i'll change it
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Comments: 6

Favoriz [2018-02-10 18:42:48 +0000 UTC]

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Your outline of the character looks way too crooked and noisy, which appears to be very off. I don't which program you have used for this, but try to use stabilizers or a lineart tool to make it look smoother.

Aside of that, I absolutely adore this piece! The mixture of warm colors and cold lighting gives a gorgeous look. You really seem to know much about shading and if the outline would have been smoother, then I'd call this artwork perfect for what it is meant to be.

You did an amazing job on this, your admirable shading skills have convinced me to watch you! But you need to work on your outlines so you can aim for perfection e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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Zoiby In reply to Favoriz [2018-02-10 19:20:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you! but the outlines are supposed to be shaky in this pic

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Favoriz In reply to Zoiby [2018-02-10 19:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Owwww, now I feel like an idiot xD

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Wolflllia [2018-05-21 23:33:42 +0000 UTC]

thats flippin bootiful

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OMadHatterO [2018-02-10 23:41:06 +0000 UTC]

To me, this one just makes an itty bitty more sense. Unless the alt also shows the same blue, cold lighting from the side as the character, then I would prefer that one.

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oddkiid [2018-02-10 16:00:05 +0000 UTC]

The alt one

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