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Published: 2010-08-02 02:45:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 787; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 12
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There are two awesome puns my round.
catch them in revel in hilarity.
The panel with all the wittle hearts was made by
Also they dont die maybe. Just now Marlins gotta worry about it and i dunno maybe they make it to the hospital maybe not? Does Big Ben even have a hospital?
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I hope you choke on your knife,
Little Simon Manger,
Pray that someone takes you life
As soon as you're truely in Danger!
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"I will end you. On this I'll be bettin'. Threats get you no where, learn this lesson you cretin. "
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If you think knives will work on Hellen, Think a lot twice!
Her body can reshape with air, and Kry will hit you thrice!
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"Knives weren't what i had in mind c;"
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And if you ever tried to catch her
I bid you a lot of good luck!
Her ram can fly high above yer,
And they won't ask that for a buck!
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"No matter what happens, i'll be sure to be kind."
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If you think your kindness will fool them,
Better think of another tactic!
Kry has been created by greek gods, some of 'em,
He'll learn about you very quick!
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Good entry. It was full of terrible. So much terrible. c:
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well Simon=terrible so that makes sense
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Man that pure genius
great job c:
Oh gosh Marlin really want to put Simon into a time out
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Marlin is kinda like Simon's dad
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Hot damn that was clever. I'm here wondering how such a simple, but well executed plan left me feeling near horrified. An excellent use of resources, though; I'm left heavily impressed by Simon's tactic. But part of me would've liked to see Simon give Holt a nasty stab or two, haha.
Really, though. I love this. It's so well structured that you can't help but feel genuinely scared for Holt and Keiza. Mind, Keiza had some sense of intelligence and tried to keep the idiot back.
The expressions in this are simply fantastic. From scared, angry and just downright crazy, you always conveyed the emotion brilliantly, while also using a very limited amount of lines. I think the simplicity of your style can really help to add a raw emotion to it when you start using more lines and dark tones. But I ramble, just well done.
I have to sincerely apologize for my lack of actual competition this round. I feel like a massive tool for it, especially since you put so much effort into this. But life really definitely got the better of me, between work and social problems that arose. Some things just had to take priority, even though I did want to complete this round; but hopeful thinking on my part, considering I barely got it started.
In all honesty, and I'm not saying this as empty flattery, I think you would have won even if I'd finished my round. Yours was a lot more clever and better executed than what I had planned. Not to mention funnier. I definitely enjoyed reading this, despite the almost certain death of my characters, hah. Thanks for doing them so much justice, you captured them perfectly.
Best of luck in the next round, I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
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Ive practiced a lot to get my style to where i like it, and unfortunately, because of how busy i've been this summer, i've become really out of practice. Im doing something a little different with my rounds this time though. By telling it through the eyes of my opponent's characters, i feel that multiply the creepiness factor.
Ive gotten a lot of compliments on my expressions here and im so happy they came off that good. Gammel was actually a hard character to draw because his eyes cant be seen. Eyes are really important in drawing a character i feel.
And I understand how shit comes up and youre left with no time on your hands. I almost didn't make it myself and a lot of it getting posted was based on luck.
If it would ease your tormented soul, i would love to see a simon/holt interaction in the future c:
thanks for reading!!!
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Holy crap. It was like a twist within a twist within a gorram twist. How about that.
Absolutely gorgeous work here, zombiesensei. Maybe our evil douches will face each other some time.
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were like the two fluffy-on-the-outside psychotic-on-the-inside chars lololol
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THE MOST CLEVER THING I'VE READ IN A LONG LONG TIME
i love this so much :'>
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thankyouthanksyou
i managed to pull it out of my ass
and im glad you think its clever!
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...Yes.
MAN. This kid. THIS KID.
;u; You write wonderfully.
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thank youuuuuu
im glad you like Simon
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I love how he is sitting all dirty on the piano chair while saying "kidding"
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hold on though, how did the chick die of arsenic if only her robot hand touched it. Also your oc touched it as well so shouldn't HE be dead (well for him I guess it could just be it didn't get into his veins)
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well theres a small panel were the girl's breast gets cut so that happens.
And yeah Simon did not cut himself on the wire so he's good.
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ok, thanks for explaining, I'M SORRY FOR JUST NOT SUSPENDING MY DISBELIEF
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thank you you kind kind stranger~
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haha thanks c:
i liked your round too
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I love this kid, so cool, so evil, so well planned 8D
I enjoyed the round greatly x3
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Thanks!
And yes watching Simon is a lot like watching Dexter mixed with Kira.
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That was super dastardly XD I like this guyyy <3
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That's so engeniously evil brilliant.
I like this kid :3
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yup, his serial killer mind is always on different levels scheming different things!
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That's really kicks ass.
I like your entry :3
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Thanks!
It only came up late because ive been busy this weekend
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I have also a busy week :3
That's our GREATEST burden.
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That was CLEVER.
And dickish.
Cool round, dicklever.
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dicklever
seems more insult than compliment >8C
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