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Published: 2017-08-13 15:24:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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"I have waitedDined on ashes
Swung from chandeliers
And climbed Everest
But none of it's gotten me close to this"
Little Ravenpaw boi
I would appreciate feedback!Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) Me
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Comments: 14
UM EXCUSE ME? teach me how to draw background :0
this looks AWESOME
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I might make a grass and sky tutorial ^^
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RavenPaw! Hello my little cutie! <3
I'm in love with this piece, bro!
The pose is awesome! The expression is so well done!
The BG! Ahh look at the BG! I... I adore the grass! Teach me how you do grass! ;w;
But in my vision, the detail of the grass on the end of the first ground (what I said doesn't make sense x'3) i's a little too bright. It make us to look at the lightning (the brighter point in the drawing), and after that grass instead of us to look at the lightning, then RavenPaw and after not only that part of the grass, but all the BG. But anyway, I'd sugget you to make those details where the lightning supposedly "touch" the first ground. You, of course, don't need to do it, I'm just saying ^^''
The sky so! It looks so simple (no offences ^^'') but at the same so powefull!
The effects give us an fantastic feeling! Great job! ;3
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Thank you so much! (Thanks for the criticism, I need it lol) I'm still practicing clouds, and it does look really simple 
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No worries! ;3
Oh I see! ^^
Mind me asking another question?
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I don't have I computer or a drawing pen xD
I use my iPad and an app called Procreate
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Ahhh I see... So, you draw with your fingers?! O-O
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