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zorro-zero — Breaking Point: Chapter One/Runaway

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****THIS FOLLOWING WALL OF TEXT IS ALSO PART OF THE STORY, PLEASE ALSO READ IT IF YOU WANT TO KEEP THE TRAIL*******

"No one heard a single word she said
They should have seen it in your eyes
What was going around your head
Ooh, she's a little runaway..."



A very nice lovely girl, with such a gentle and warm smile. A hard worker at the ranch, with talent to handle the horses like nothing you've ever seen before. It's just like she could talk to the animals. Reserved, she prefers to live by herself, even if that mean a more expensive rent. And also a very good looking lady, which makes it kind of weird that she hasn't a boyfriend yet, right? But mostly, a good worth-trusty person. That was what her neighbors would have told you if you ask them what they thought about Jenny Rowell.


How were they supposed to know that the girl next door was, in fact, the most wanted cosmic criminal in the whole existence? She was a dangerous fugitive of the pandimensional justice, hiding among them undetected. Powerless, Jennifer just hoped for the best that she could have finally found a place to call her own, on the plains of the american mideast. That beautiful calm landscape reminded her about the place where she came from, they both were very alike in some sort of way. It would be very nice to finally settle down after being a pinball bouncing all across the multiverse. 


Jenny wasn't certain about where she was born, but she was raised among the royal high class in a world full of magic and wonder, studying very hard to become a powerful sorceress some day. But, young as she was, she couldn't understand a lot about herself and the alien world that surrounded her, which led her to house dark feelings as resentment, wrath and self-despise... it was in such a state of mind that Jennifer dared to do the unthinkable for her teacher and fellow students. 


One lonely  sad night, she summoned something. Something from way beyond, with the hopes that her sorrow and pain would be put to an end. That gloomy night, Jennifer Rowell, a simple student of the magic but with a tremendous potential and skills, awoke the Nothing from his eternal slumber. And then her entire life was brought into chaos, and nothing would ever be the same again.


Casted away, she bounced from one alternate universe just to another, dragged into a chain of senseless events, until one day, she could put an end to them, or so it seemed. Unable to return to anywhere else she could call home, she had to settle on the rural U.S. from this world in she was stranded, prevented to use her powers any long unless she was ready to face the forces that were looking for her to bring her to justice for her crimes.


It had been a very good time, after all, all those quiet months working as an assistant in a horses' ranch. For the first time in her whole life, Jenny Rowell felt like she fit somewhere. She arrived to the house she was renting, after another hard day at work. She now had to ready herself for her upcoming date. That's right, she was also willing to start again and try to find someone that could be with her. She was giving love just another chance. Maybe it was too soon to talk about love, anyway. She would settle with just some action, after so many time without nothing. If Thomas would played his cards right, tonight she would end again all sweaty and tired, so she was almost seeing taking a shower like a time waste.

But just when she was ready to go upstairs, she was frozen in place. A sudden cold chill paralyzed her whole body. Has she been found? No... NO!!! IT COULDN'T BE HIM!!  She recognized instantly the feeling of being trapped in her own body, being a prisoner inside her own mind. But... something was different... something was... out of place.. it wasn't... it wasn't him, but someone else... who..?

"Fall" simply said a gloomy voice that echoed inside her blurry thoughts, and then everything went dark for Jennifer.


She awoke, who knows how much time later. She didn't know where she was, it was a place where she never have been. Dark and cold. She was kneeling, unable to move much, restrained. She somehow recognized the bounding spell that held her captive, but without her powers that did make little difference to her. Her head still felt light and kept turning around, disoriented.

"Welcome back, Jennifer" said the voice that gave her the chills on her bones. "You've rested enough, child, now there's no more time to waste. We have an entire multiverse to save. Such a noble task will surely redeem yourself from all your past faults. I know you will gladly help me in such case. You will serve me, without any hesitation. This... this is your destiny, coming for you. You must accept it, must embrace it..."

Just as her last remnants of free will vanished on the dark, Jenny could see a glimpse of the dark shadow coming closer to her. The one that were holding her leash, claiming her as his property. Ashamed of herself, she recognized that she enjoyed that intense feeling that gave her quitting to everything she was in that last brief moment of self-conciousness and surrend herself... to her new master.

"Y- yes, Master... I will obey, as your loyal devoted slave..." she said in monotone, having no more thoughts of her own. Once again, she was empty, deprived of her own mind and any kind of emotion that wasn't blind submission.


"Now, my lovely slave, we have a whole lot to do... We're about to go in a Holy War, to save everything that there is. But first things first: I need to know: where did you hide them? Where did you hide the Celestial Shards?"


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TO BE CONTINUED!!! 

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Thanks to
for allowing me to use her character in all this mess... ^^


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Comments: 111

zorro-zero In reply to ??? [2018-04-30 21:42:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! really appreaciated!

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sweetdreams125 [2017-06-08 23:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Hello Master~ how may I serve you

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zorro-zero In reply to sweetdreams125 [2017-06-09 16:11:19 +0000 UTC]

you may start by the begining...

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sweetdreams125 In reply to zorro-zero [2017-06-09 16:12:09 +0000 UTC]

the begining of what..?

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zorro-zero In reply to sweetdreams125 [2017-06-09 16:13:09 +0000 UTC]

the begining of the start, of course...

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sweetdreams125 In reply to zorro-zero [2017-06-09 16:13:31 +0000 UTC]

okay master

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zorro-zero In reply to sweetdreams125 [2017-06-09 16:14:02 +0000 UTC]

*pats your head*

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sweetdreams125 In reply to zorro-zero [2017-06-09 16:15:00 +0000 UTC]

*purrs*

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El-Terror-Negro [2016-10-02 21:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Yo queria ver a hipnoraptor TT

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zorro-zero In reply to El-Terror-Negro [2016-10-04 00:56:13 +0000 UTC]

ups, lo siento! promero que hypnoraptor estará de vuelta después de unos cortes comerciales xP

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El-Terror-Negro In reply to zorro-zero [2016-10-04 15:01:49 +0000 UTC]

\nwn/ Viva!

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White0wlsuperheroine [2016-08-16 10:18:59 +0000 UTC]

I know you asked me about this series and I forgot to follow it.  Good start

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zorro-zero In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2016-08-16 22:49:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I really appreciate it, coming from such an expert like you! I'm very thrilled to know that I coud catch your eye....

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EriHypno [2016-07-29 17:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Love the unbuttoned shorts~

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zorro-zero In reply to EriHypno [2016-07-29 19:28:52 +0000 UTC]

it's too hot in there! D:

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EriHypno In reply to zorro-zero [2016-08-01 04:18:47 +0000 UTC]

I can see that ;3

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SubliminalBo [2016-07-02 19:23:39 +0000 UTC]

Love this start and your art is great as always! I'll be watching this story closely!

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zorro-zero In reply to SubliminalBo [2016-07-02 21:43:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, I appreciate it!! ^^

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Cracoviia [2016-06-30 19:11:53 +0000 UTC]

This looks mysterious and interesting. Alternative universes, hypnosis...wondering where this is going to go

Great drawing too, I like the details like the loose thread on the shorts. Her hair looks great too and her face is a mix of worried and 'yes master'.

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zorro-zero In reply to Cracoviia [2016-06-30 21:43:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for paying atenttion to all those little details, Pani Olá, I really appreciate that kind of gesture!! I really hope I can deliver you an entertaining story, just like yours! ^^

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The90sDoggo [2016-06-30 15:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Buen trabajo man

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zorro-zero In reply to The90sDoggo [2016-06-30 21:39:14 +0000 UTC]

gracias, qué bueno que te gusta!!

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The90sDoggo In reply to zorro-zero [2016-07-01 03:53:17 +0000 UTC]

de nada man

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Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 03:49:56 +0000 UTC]

i like the way this is all set up and specially the glasses girl X3

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zorro-zero In reply to Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]

yay for the glasses girl, join the club!! x3

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Xenozilla1998 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-30 21:47:20 +0000 UTC]

All Girls with glasses are always welcome for their sexiness and cuteness specially my Girlfriend is one of them for only me >:3

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zorro-zero In reply to Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 21:54:44 +0000 UTC]

you lucky dawg!! D:

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Xenozilla1998 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-30 22:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Indeed Mr. Zorro im sure you will get yours like mine  

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zorro-zero In reply to Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 22:43:36 +0000 UTC]

nuuuh, I'm fine like this, but thanks! xP

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Xenozilla1998 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-30 22:51:31 +0000 UTC]

lol im fine being hypnotized by my babes glasses but yeah XD

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zorro-zero In reply to Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 22:52:12 +0000 UTC]

oooh, that's entirely another thing! and it's great! x3

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Xenozilla1998 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-30 22:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Indeed quite a best thing happening to a man haha

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zorro-zero In reply to Xenozilla1998 [2016-06-30 23:01:02 +0000 UTC]

at least one of the bestest xPPP

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colts316 [2016-06-30 01:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Es bella, inocente y buena persona...la perfecta esclava

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zorro-zero In reply to colts316 [2016-06-30 21:38:31 +0000 UTC]

bella y buena persona, sí.... inocente? pues ya veremos... ¬u¬

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colts316 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-07-01 02:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Eso si...a espera :3

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Mezzberry [2016-06-29 21:50:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested to see where this all goes.  I may already know the general premise, but it'll still be a fun ride getting to that point ^^

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zorro-zero In reply to Mezzberry [2016-06-29 21:54:16 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if it'll be a fun ride, but it will be a veeeeeery loooooong one, that's for certain!! ^^' 

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Mezzberry In reply to zorro-zero [2016-07-02 12:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, if the ride's that long there's bound to be some fun at some point

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FantasyRebirth96 [2016-06-29 21:34:38 +0000 UTC]

oh? well this is certainly fascinating! fantastic job doing this seriously!! :]

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zorro-zero In reply to FantasyRebirth96 [2016-06-29 21:41:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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FantasyRebirth96 In reply to zorro-zero [2016-07-01 16:11:59 +0000 UTC]

oh no its not a problem! you are oh so truly welcome overall good person! i encourage you to keep doing what you've been doing^^

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SomnowalkerX [2016-06-29 19:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Fascinante como siempre!

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zorro-zero In reply to SomnowalkerX [2016-06-29 21:41:36 +0000 UTC]

gracias amigo, qué bueno que te guste!

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xFurret [2016-06-29 19:05:51 +0000 UTC]

pobrecita uwu solo queria una vida tranquila, buena suerte con tu proyecto :3

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 21:41:20 +0000 UTC]

ya seeeeeeeeé, pero no se puede tener siempre lo que se quiere, además Jenny es un imán para toda clase de disparatadas aventuras.... xDD

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:46:13 +0000 UTC]

bueno supongo que tienes razon o3o

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 21:49:07 +0000 UTC]

es una de las desvantajas de ser una chica tan linda... xP

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:50:41 +0000 UTC]

si tu lo dices -w-

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 21:54:39 +0000 UTC]

así es, YO lo digo!! ¬u¬

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