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zorro-zero — Breaking Point: Chapter One/Runaway

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Published: 2016-06-29 06:42:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 20783; Favourites: 270; Downloads: 224
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****THIS FOLLOWING WALL OF TEXT IS ALSO PART OF THE STORY, PLEASE ALSO READ IT IF YOU WANT TO KEEP THE TRAIL*******

"No one heard a single word she said
They should have seen it in your eyes
What was going around your head
Ooh, she's a little runaway..."



A very nice lovely girl, with such a gentle and warm smile. A hard worker at the ranch, with talent to handle the horses like nothing you've ever seen before. It's just like she could talk to the animals. Reserved, she prefers to live by herself, even if that mean a more expensive rent. And also a very good looking lady, which makes it kind of weird that she hasn't a boyfriend yet, right? But mostly, a good worth-trusty person. That was what her neighbors would have told you if you ask them what they thought about Jenny Rowell.


How were they supposed to know that the girl next door was, in fact, the most wanted cosmic criminal in the whole existence? She was a dangerous fugitive of the pandimensional justice, hiding among them undetected. Powerless, Jennifer just hoped for the best that she could have finally found a place to call her own, on the plains of the american mideast. That beautiful calm landscape reminded her about the place where she came from, they both were very alike in some sort of way. It would be very nice to finally settle down after being a pinball bouncing all across the multiverse. 


Jenny wasn't certain about where she was born, but she was raised among the royal high class in a world full of magic and wonder, studying very hard to become a powerful sorceress some day. But, young as she was, she couldn't understand a lot about herself and the alien world that surrounded her, which led her to house dark feelings as resentment, wrath and self-despise... it was in such a state of mind that Jennifer dared to do the unthinkable for her teacher and fellow students. 


One lonely  sad night, she summoned something. Something from way beyond, with the hopes that her sorrow and pain would be put to an end. That gloomy night, Jennifer Rowell, a simple student of the magic but with a tremendous potential and skills, awoke the Nothing from his eternal slumber. And then her entire life was brought into chaos, and nothing would ever be the same again.


Casted away, she bounced from one alternate universe just to another, dragged into a chain of senseless events, until one day, she could put an end to them, or so it seemed. Unable to return to anywhere else she could call home, she had to settle on the rural U.S. from this world in she was stranded, prevented to use her powers any long unless she was ready to face the forces that were looking for her to bring her to justice for her crimes.


It had been a very good time, after all, all those quiet months working as an assistant in a horses' ranch. For the first time in her whole life, Jenny Rowell felt like she fit somewhere. She arrived to the house she was renting, after another hard day at work. She now had to ready herself for her upcoming date. That's right, she was also willing to start again and try to find someone that could be with her. She was giving love just another chance. Maybe it was too soon to talk about love, anyway. She would settle with just some action, after so many time without nothing. If Thomas would played his cards right, tonight she would end again all sweaty and tired, so she was almost seeing taking a shower like a time waste.

But just when she was ready to go upstairs, she was frozen in place. A sudden cold chill paralyzed her whole body. Has she been found? No... NO!!! IT COULDN'T BE HIM!!  She recognized instantly the feeling of being trapped in her own body, being a prisoner inside her own mind. But... something was different... something was... out of place.. it wasn't... it wasn't him, but someone else... who..?

"Fall" simply said a gloomy voice that echoed inside her blurry thoughts, and then everything went dark for Jennifer.


She awoke, who knows how much time later. She didn't know where she was, it was a place where she never have been. Dark and cold. She was kneeling, unable to move much, restrained. She somehow recognized the bounding spell that held her captive, but without her powers that did make little difference to her. Her head still felt light and kept turning around, disoriented.

"Welcome back, Jennifer" said the voice that gave her the chills on her bones. "You've rested enough, child, now there's no more time to waste. We have an entire multiverse to save. Such a noble task will surely redeem yourself from all your past faults. I know you will gladly help me in such case. You will serve me, without any hesitation. This... this is your destiny, coming for you. You must accept it, must embrace it..."

Just as her last remnants of free will vanished on the dark, Jenny could see a glimpse of the dark shadow coming closer to her. The one that were holding her leash, claiming her as his property. Ashamed of herself, she recognized that she enjoyed that intense feeling that gave her quitting to everything she was in that last brief moment of self-conciousness and surrend herself... to her new master.

"Y- yes, Master... I will obey, as your loyal devoted slave..." she said in monotone, having no more thoughts of her own. Once again, she was empty, deprived of her own mind and any kind of emotion that wasn't blind submission.


"Now, my lovely slave, we have a whole lot to do... We're about to go in a Holy War, to save everything that there is. But first things first: I need to know: where did you hide them? Where did you hide the Celestial Shards?"


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TO BE CONTINUED!!! 

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Thanks to
for allowing me to use her character in all this mess... ^^


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Comments: 111

xFurret In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 21:59:52 +0000 UTC]

que bueno -3-

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

lo bueno cuesta!

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:04:19 +0000 UTC]

oh no, los refranes de nuevo D:

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 22:09:15 +0000 UTC]

segundas partes nunca fueron buenas

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:11:01 +0000 UTC]

x-x

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 22:16:24 +0000 UTC]

cruz, cruz, que se vaya el diablo y venga jesús

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:20:00 +0000 UTC]

-3-

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 22:41:42 +0000 UTC]

aunque la tercera es la vencida!

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:42:22 +0000 UTC]

es porque es el tercer refran o por la carita? -3-

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 22:46:41 +0000 UTC]

duda siempre de ti mismo, hasta que los datos no dejen lugar a dudas

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:51:00 +0000 UTC]

ok ok ya entendi ;w;

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 23:00:36 +0000 UTC]

hablando se entiende la gente

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 23:10:38 +0000 UTC]

ya me aburri -3-

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 23:12:23 +0000 UTC]

el ocio es la madre de todos los vicios

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 23:14:37 +0000 UTC]

se te tienen que acabar algun dia >:C

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 23:21:54 +0000 UTC]

el final es sólo otro comienzo

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 23:22:42 +0000 UTC]

x_x

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-29 23:29:39 +0000 UTC]

cuando el tecolote canta, el indio muere

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 23:41:31 +0000 UTC]

bueno ya, tu ganas :C

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zorro-zero In reply to xFurret [2016-06-30 00:02:21 +0000 UTC]

ganar no lo es todo en la vida

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xFurret In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-30 00:41:26 +0000 UTC]

como digas nwn

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MonsieurChuchote In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 15:52:37 +0000 UTC]

I am intrigued by your ideas, and look forward to how they progress.

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zorro-zero In reply to MonsieurChuchote [2016-06-29 21:40:03 +0000 UTC]

glad to hear that, thanks for the support!

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Tsar777 [2016-06-29 15:24:23 +0000 UTC]

A very beautiful slave and an intriguing story.  You're off to a brilliant start!

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zorro-zero In reply to Tsar777 [2016-06-29 21:39:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks! I don't know how bright it is, but I do as best as I can, that's for sure!

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pizzanerd1 In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 15:18:57 +0000 UTC]

Love the story & artwork

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zorro-zero In reply to pizzanerd1 [2016-06-29 21:38:52 +0000 UTC]

well, thank you so much! it means a lot to me, coming from you ^^

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TsundereAquaria In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 15:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Already loving it :3

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 21:36:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy to hear that, thanks!

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:37:44 +0000 UTC]

I love a good story with MC in it :3 keep it up

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 21:42:54 +0000 UTC]

ok, I will!! ^////^

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:44:16 +0000 UTC]

:3 I have faith in you

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 21:49:16 +0000 UTC]

^///^

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Anyway, I won't take anymore of your time away :3

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 21:58:56 +0000 UTC]

no problem! I'll be around for a quite a while....

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 21:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome :3

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 22:01:38 +0000 UTC]

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:02:24 +0000 UTC]

So, can I get any hints as to where the stories going next or will I have to wait? :3

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 22:07:23 +0000 UTC]

no spoiling!! so, yeah, you'll just have to wait... right now, it's just going to be to collect the celestial shards... what are those thing, and what use do they have, it's something yet to be seen... xP

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:08:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested still ^^ can't wait

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 22:12:26 +0000 UTC]

I would do my best to not disappoint... ^^' 

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:13:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure it's gonna be a fun ride :3

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 22:16:56 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if fun, but certainly it will be a very loooong one... xP

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:17:48 +0000 UTC]

I like long stories ^^

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zorro-zero In reply to TsundereAquaria [2016-06-29 22:19:35 +0000 UTC]

so do I! or at least it seems... 

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TsundereAquaria In reply to zorro-zero [2016-06-29 22:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah xD

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EriHypno In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 14:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for this :3

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zorro-zero In reply to EriHypno [2016-06-29 21:36:20 +0000 UTC]

hehe, well, I do it as fast as I can... which still is very slowly...  xP

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FairyPrincessJess In reply to ??? [2016-06-29 10:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice one! This project is looking great!

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zorro-zero In reply to FairyPrincessJess [2016-06-29 21:35:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I'm so glad to have your support! ^^

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