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zphoenixdownz — a seethrough heaven
Published: 2003-08-06 23:20:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 33
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Description lured in
to fetal sleep
on the car seat

waking with
the rhythm
of raintaps

meteor drops
streak across
a speckled window sky

a thousand dark stars
stare back
craven eyes
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Comments: 4

etoilerose [2003-10-18 17:30:27 +0000 UTC]

Bravo.

This goes into my s. Reminds me of last night.

Anywhoo, your descriptions are beautiful. Well done.

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zphoenixdownz In reply to etoilerose [2003-10-18 20:59:19 +0000 UTC]

aw... shucks.

thanks for the fave.

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livingbyair [2003-09-20 18:06:21 +0000 UTC]

short and sweet indeed - the power of a moment, great title!

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shadowassassin [2003-08-06 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Short and sweet. Goes with the whole "brevity is the essence of wit" idea. I reallly like it.

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