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Published: 2015-05-11 04:05:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 500; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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Description These constellations grasp at my eyes,
tugging me away from this magnetic earth,
and I soar through the air like a comet
with no tail
as if I’m sailing back towards the
Kuiper Belt where I was born.

But I am no comet, no.
I am nothing more than
interstellar dust, drifting
between stars and planets,
quite like that earthy dirt
beneath your feet,
but me? I am LUMINOUS.

Or maybe I am nothing but
a meteor—meteorite?
Careening towards the Maria
of the Moon to make my own crater
where the lava used to flow,
and call it home.

I am magnetically bound and
I am magnetically found.
This lithosphere anchors my heels
and I gaze up, up, up
at those iridescent lights
and I wonder.
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Comments: 14

Ripplingwaves [2015-07-11 11:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Stunningly fantastic!

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19seconds In reply to Ripplingwaves [2015-07-24 00:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (:

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FridgePoetProject [2015-05-12 02:25:06 +0000 UTC]

This made me feel like a shooting star out to discover a universe of possibility!  Loved the ending -- "I gaze up, up, up / at those iridescent lights / and I wonder."  Beautiful piece!

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19seconds In reply to FridgePoetProject [2015-05-12 20:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! I was iffy about the ending so I'm glad you enjoyed it. (:

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shep4life [2015-05-11 21:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Love love loved the last stanza

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19seconds In reply to shep4life [2015-05-12 20:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (:

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shep4life In reply to 19seconds [2015-05-13 17:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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oviedomedina [2015-05-11 14:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Astounding!

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19seconds In reply to oviedomedina [2015-05-11 16:24:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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RoseScarlet [2015-05-11 07:51:10 +0000 UTC]

wow.

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19seconds In reply to RoseScarlet [2015-05-11 16:25:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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RoseScarlet In reply to 19seconds [2015-05-13 01:43:43 +0000 UTC]

<3 thank you.

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angelserum [2015-05-11 05:18:51 +0000 UTC]

The imagery that this piece creates is lovely! I love the line "this lithosphere anchors my heels" -- such a powerful image right there. The last line is gorgeous, completes this wonderfully!!

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19seconds In reply to angelserum [2015-05-11 16:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I wrote the last line on a whim, I'm glad you liked it.

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