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Published: 2005-01-13 02:04:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 35
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I closed my eyes and for a second you were thereMaybe I wasn’t dreaming, maybe you really do care
My eyes opened and you were gone in a flash
I then swerved to the right and got into a crash
I stood up off the ground and looked straight ahead
I saw the great horror of me being dead
My heart felt frozen and I could not speak
I was unable to walk and my body felt weak
As I saw the people crowd around my car
I saw a bright light, what I thought was a star
It turned out to be such a wondrous sight
As I began to panic with sadness and fright
I looked up with horror and concern as well
I knew I had no chances to say my farewell
The object told me it was time to leave
But I wanted to stay, I was so naïve
I wanted so bad to go back into my life
To have you as my husband, and me as your wife
The object said “Such a thing could not be
For you are dead, now please follow me”
I had no way out, no any other choice
I had to leave you with just the sound of my voice
As I walked into a new world, however
I said to myself, “I’ll love you forever”
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Comments: 19
spiritsighs [2005-02-16 04:34:30 +0000 UTC]
hey lovely! This is so angelic! I love the sparkles and how you through the brush work together to make the backgrounds! The poem is beautiful too! You did such a lovely job!
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Soul-Of-Fire [2005-01-28 03:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Awesome job! I wanna do a collaberation, but I'm not sure how it'd work, so....I'm just going to leave it alone for a while
Awesome, once again. Tell your other partner in crime that I said they kick ass
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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6-Simplicity-9 In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2005-01-28 03:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Lets do itttttttt message me on something and we'll get that shit started
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Soul-Of-Fire In reply to 6-Simplicity-9 [2005-01-28 03:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Hmm....I have no idea. Really
Note me with anything you can think of, and we can work with that Midterms have taken a toll on my mind.
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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selva-amarga [2005-01-15 13:13:32 +0000 UTC]
the poem is beautiful, and the image is very touching, sweety!!
love you!
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6-Simplicity-9 In reply to selva-amarga [2005-01-15 16:34:50 +0000 UTC]
thanks beautiful. Love you too
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lifelessrose [2005-01-15 01:15:07 +0000 UTC]
beautiful. i love the feeling, very dreamy, i think its that blue tint and just the way you put the images together, beautiful simply beautiful.
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leopardivory [2005-01-13 17:56:26 +0000 UTC]
This is totally cool! Nice work done by the both of you.
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JenniferStarling [2005-01-13 15:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful; every aspect, the gazebo (or tempple?) the stairs the model the twinkling and fog the flowers just everything. Wow.
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6-Simplicity-9 In reply to JenniferStarling [2005-01-18 02:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Heaven so I guess temple. Thanks a lot.
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rhymesayer [2005-01-13 07:53:35 +0000 UTC]
very nice picture. The border is a bit big for my personal preference, but still a lovely picture.
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jerzchick16 [2005-01-13 03:20:53 +0000 UTC]
I love this piece!!!! I want to thank you sooooo icredibly much for showing me this piece and allowing me to use it as my poem "my love part I"'s preview!! This piece is so beautiful and the effects are so magnificant!!!
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