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GirlNauto [2018-03-23 12:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Also here 4 Project comment and from what I see she looks adorable!! There is just 1 thing to help you build (please take in mind that this is not saying that it makes it bad, but they are things I noticed!!) The hand wouldn't go that way. Like I said simple. Now I had to look hard. Good work!!!!

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Kamiken1 [2018-03-23 02:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Hi!
I'm here for

This is a great piece! I like it, this is very lively!
As for the composition, it is mostly great but, beware of tangent lines. Like the nose of the fox and the tree, the tree on the foreground and the tree in the background. Same thing with the girl legs at the ankle. Also, there is a tree that disappear behind the fox tail. It should be better to see where the tree end or just remove it. Also, the foot of the girl is somewhat too much on the frame. It would be better just to put space between the foot and the frame. I would also suggest to darken the front tree and lighten the back ones to give a better perspective.

Great work!

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TigRaidoXXX [2018-03-19 08:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I've seen your work in thematic commenting folder in ProjectComment!

I agree to the previous commenter that the focus on characters is nicely done.
I want to add that now, even though it works as a portrait composition as it is, I feel that it lacks space around the characters. I would suggest to add more space, while keeping the canvas proportions the same - like, make it 10% bigger on both dimensions, with characters still remaining close to the bottom.
And it's a bad practice to cut the foot of a character, unless you have a purpose to do so (as is making the objects stick right to the border). So, if you were to make the canvas bigger, I'd suggest moving things just slightly up, to have the girls foot and a little space below it fit into the picture.
Also, the trees seem to be falling to the left now. Better to straighten them up

Apart from this, the composition is nice, and does a clear focus on the smiling fox face and its tail, as well as highligting the girl's eyes. All these elements show the happy, cozy atmosphere of the picture, and the feeling that both of the characters enjoy themselves. I like the fox, it turned out really cute and happy

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Tears-of-Xion [2018-03-10 17:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm here from ProjectComment for their Thematic Commenting . :3

Since the theme is composition, I'm going to focus on that.
I honestly think that, overall, you've done a great job! The piece centers around the human and the fox, and does a great job of pulling attention towards the two, rather than away from them.
The background is done very well, too! It doesn't leave any space too blank. Perhaps the only suggestion I would have would have been to add maybe some bushes around the bases of the trees, or maybe some darker shadows around the base. Maybe also some extra trees in the background a little farther away, unless they are supposed to be at the very edge of a forest. Other than that, you've got a really good grasp of how the background should be placed, and, for this picture, having too many other details in the background would draw away from the focus of the picture. A couple of the beams of light do look a little out of place, though, but overall they don't distract from the main goal of the picture.
While you do have a couple of portioning and positioning flaws, your overall composition is really good and really interesting to look at, even with the flaws! And that's a great place to be in as an artist. ;3 I hope this comment was helpful~!

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KokoKiero [2018-03-04 22:01:06 +0000 UTC]

I really like the lighting that you've achieved in this picture, the sunlight streaming through the leaves makes this scene feel so warm and fuzzy. 

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SweetflameofMC [2018-03-01 15:19:31 +0000 UTC]

*tips fedora prepared for defeat*

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xHinkax [2018-03-01 10:28:04 +0000 UTC]

She looks really cute!

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MoonBerryBat [2018-02-28 18:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god this is so cool! ;w;!!! Angie looks so happy and that fox looks so fluffy!!! *w*

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ERA-7 [2018-02-28 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Keep it up! And have a nice day! Oh! And btw! If you will need a help you may always contact me in Notes

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