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AaronBrawnstone — Venus's Story (Chapter 4) by-nc-nd

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Published: 2019-01-31 06:52:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 307; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Warning: This story contains dark content. Please read with caution.

Damn it, if I knew it would be THIS cold out here, I would’ve brought my sweater.

But I’m still greatful that I’ve got fire magic to keep me warm.

My phone vibrated. It was a text from Your Secret Admirer.

This needs to stop. I’m NOT interested and I’m NOT in the right mood to deal with this.

I ignore the texts as usual and looked around to see if there’s any place to get dinner.

There are a few restaurants opened but they are good choices.

Ugh..why does life you so many decisions?

I decided to go to the cafe.

As I walked in, a lot of people turned their heads toward me and whispering to each other.

Like acted like if I don’t belong here.

But whatever, I’m starving.

I looked at the menu.

I wonder if they have steaks here.

I looked around the menu, and they do. Of course.

I made my order and the waiter asked what kind of drink I want.

Mmmm….I would choose water or soda but this might be my only opportunity to try out the other drinks.

So, I chose tea.

Everyone in the dining room continued to stare at me and whisper to each other.

But it really dosen’t matter, I’m here to eat, not make enemies.

Half an hour later, my food arrived and while I was eating, I heard something from the TV that caught my attention.

“Our top story is about the President’s daughter that went missing last night. Here’s a picture of her, if you see a lady in her late teens that look like this, its her. In other news, the hooded figure strikes again. The survivor who saw the culprit, said that the weapon was a gun this time and has stolen a cellphone. Let’s hope the President’s daughter won’t be the next victim. Back to you Paul.”

Well…that ruined my meal time…

A man stands up and points at me “Oh my God, its her! The President’s daughter!”

“Aw crap…” I mumble.

I decided to run out of there with the last piece of steak in my mouth and left my money on the table for the bill.

“AFTER HER!!” They shout.

I ran as fast as my legs can carry me, but of course, I’m wearing high heels.

I took them off and went back to running.

I’m not gonna lie to you, but some of them are pretty fast to even get close to me.

I have no choice but to use my fire magic to give me a speed boost.

This really surprised everyone.

I finally gave them the slip.

This is what it feels to be the President’s daughter.

Constantly chased by strangers.

Okay, “stranger” is a little demeaning, but I mean….I don’t even know these people.

At first I was okay with it, but after that experience I gone through during the Magical Island tournament, I realized that I’m letting random people take pictures of me or ask for my autograph.

They don’t love me for being myself, I’m only loved because I’m wealthy and the President’s daughter of course….

Speaking of my stepdad, I knew he’d spread the word about my disappearance.

I don’t give a two rear ended horse about him! I’m finally putting my foot down.

But for now, I just need to avoid the police and find mom.

Suddenly another text appeared saying

“Dear President’s Daughter. So you’re a fire elemental? Noice! Fire is the most tsundere of all elements and it really suits you. That’s why I love you! Stay hot you beautiful flame. Love Your Secret Admirer.”

I…..tsk….ugh…

I’m just making noises now.

I’m gonna go look for a hotel, there’s NO way I’m sleeping out here.

I summoned a small flame to keep me warm and to roast anyone who dares to mess with me.

To Be Continued


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Comments: 9

dragondoodle [2019-02-03 20:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. That's going to make it tough to hideout

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AaronBrawnstone In reply to dragondoodle [2019-02-03 21:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! At this point Venus dosen't care anymore, she is kind of testing on who's brave enough to rven face her. X3

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Chemlord [2019-01-31 12:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Alright I understand why she didn't block the guy before, cause she had too much on her mind and he didn't seem like a threat, but now he's made it pretty clear he's stalking her. Why doesn't she block him? Granted he might get a phone with a new number, but she should at least try to block him since at this point it's clear it's getting to her and he's shown he knows things about her that he would only know if he had been stalking her. If I'm missing something please let me know. Also is the news reporter the same girl from "Your Waifus" with the short light pink hair or just someone that looks like her?

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AaronBrawnstone In reply to Chemlord [2019-02-01 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]

That could be one interpretation of Venus' stalker situation. I'm so happy you have the time to tell me your thoughts about the story and characters.

Also, now that you mentioned it, she DOES look like an older Amari.

Sorry I took so long to reply and thankyou for the question. ^v^

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Chemlord In reply to AaronBrawnstone [2019-02-01 02:49:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Thanks for taking the time to respond. I have one more question. This isn't a critique more just something I was wondering. Why do you have around half of the stories being told at once instead of the full roster or focusing exclusively on one character's story and not moving onto the next one until the first one is finished? Again I'm not against the way you are doing things currently, it's more just something I was wondering

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AaronBrawnstone In reply to Chemlord [2019-02-01 03:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Its because the main characters live in separate parts of the (well their) world. I couldn't think of another way to explain each characters problems without trying to make the chapters too long. I wanted each character to get their fair share in the spotlight. I might cut out Doll's story since it dosen't have much of an impact on the story as the others. I'll just make one more chapter of Doll and it ends there. The others are having a built up to meeting each other again as well as trying to learn things along the way, not to mention trying to stay aware of the Chaotic Army. I hope this helps. ^v^

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bluewingfairy [2019-01-31 10:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Good morning Luis, good story, wow, Venus have a crazy night!!!!!.

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AaronBrawnstone In reply to bluewingfairy [2019-01-31 19:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Good morning, thank you so much and Venus can never catch a break in public.

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bluewingfairy In reply to AaronBrawnstone [2019-02-01 02:01:39 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!!😊.

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