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Published: 2012-01-30 09:00:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 659; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 7
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Description WOO! this took HOURS to finish, but I am so pleased with the results!! I think the entire time was about... 8 hours for the coloring, about an hour for the original sketch. You can see that here: [link]

Anyway, I really like the poses and the perspective and especially the coloring. This is the best thing I have ever done and I am extremely proud of it. As this is the case, I am requesting critiques. Since a lot of you aren't premium members, a comment critique would be lovely too. Thanks so much in advance and stuff!! >w<

Edit: I forgot his dog tag D:

Kid (c)



Pages for Round 1:
page 1: [link]
page 2: [link]
page 3: [link]
page 4: [link]
page 5: [link]
page 6: [link]
page 7: [link]
page 8: [link]
page 9: [link]
page 10: [link]
page 11: [link]
page 12: [link]
page 13: [link]
page 14: [link]
page 15: [link]
final: [link]
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Comments: 20

FrouFrou-chan [2012-01-31 01:47:22 +0000 UTC]

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Alright! My first Critique, LET'S DO THIS! xD

First off, I would like to say your attention to detail here is stunning. The poses and the movement of the clouds around them looks so dynamic, it's easy to imagine them in action. You managed to make the folds in the fabric and the texture of the hair look so natural. It's like it's cartoonish, but it's believable.

As cover art, this piece more than serves it's purpose to offer a glimpse at the main characters involved in this tale. It's enticing, an invitation to the reader to witness for themselves an epic clash of these two opposing forces. Who will emerge victorious and move on to the next adventure that awaits them? This promises to be a wild ride, a gripping read, and I certainly wouldn't want to miss out on seeing how this battle reaches it's conclusion.

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to FrouFrou-chan [2012-01-31 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]

*squee* thank you for your critique!!!

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FrouFrou-chan In reply to ABloodyPrincess [2012-01-31 04:20:19 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!
I couldn't resist this, it looks like you put so much thought and effort into it. ;D

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to FrouFrou-chan [2012-02-04 19:36:28 +0000 UTC]

^_______^ I did

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GrimzyRaider [2012-02-04 08:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the late comment! I blame WORK!

I LOVE this Rae! You did a kick as job! I love the perspective!! You put loads of detail on Kid, love the HAIR! The background works really well with it, it doesn't take away from the characters, which is of course, very important. It looks like a cover, which it is, so kudos to you!

Overall amazing! You should do all the pages like this!

Keep it up!

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to GrimzyRaider [2012-02-04 19:38:48 +0000 UTC]

XD We'll see if I can maintain that level of detail!

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GrimzyRaider In reply to ABloodyPrincess [2012-02-04 19:47:29 +0000 UTC]

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Crow1992 [2012-01-31 16:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Seconding swiblet D it looks kickass <333

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to Crow1992 [2012-02-04 19:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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Steampunk-Fairie [2012-01-31 00:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Two words. FREAKING AMAZING!

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to Steampunk-Fairie [2012-01-31 01:39:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3

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Corrupted-Mooch [2012-01-30 13:05:40 +0000 UTC]

I guess I don't have to write much, Swiblet and ProjectHalfBreed have said just about everything I wanted to! It's a really fun picture to look at: the colours are bright and your perspective is beautiful!! Absolutely well done!! And I really like how you did Kid's head, and Lyra looks very threatening coming from above!
I've really been debating if I should make a cover... everyone else is!

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to Corrupted-Mooch [2012-01-30 16:51:11 +0000 UTC]

MAKE A COVER LIKE THE REST OF US. *peer pressure*

Thank you. >w< My first attempt at mad perspective has turned out to be a success! Now, to make the rest of the comic dynamic like this. :3 Thank you so much for your comment!

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ProjectHalfbreed [2012-01-30 09:55:27 +0000 UTC]

I love you...

The picture is simply amazing, especially the perspective. The colors are extremely beautiful and I like the shading as well as the colorful background... When I saw this in my inbox. I thought I was gonna faint because I was blown away from the sheer epicness of the drawing...

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to ProjectHalfbreed [2012-01-30 16:51:52 +0000 UTC]

>w< Thankies!!

Your words have made me a happy person. :3 Thank you!!

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ProjectHalfbreed In reply to ABloodyPrincess [2012-01-31 02:17:23 +0000 UTC]

yup this pic is so awesome its currently my desktop background... I keep aweing everytime I look at it...

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to ProjectHalfbreed [2012-01-31 02:24:06 +0000 UTC]

8D! now THAT makes me happy!

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ProjectHalfbreed In reply to ABloodyPrincess [2012-01-31 08:08:58 +0000 UTC]

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swiblet [2012-01-30 09:49:09 +0000 UTC]

This picture looks amazing and might be one of your best drawings to date! 8D The perspective is fantastic - I couldn't really nitpick much about anything. I especially love all the little details you put in, like the shadows under the carrying bag handle and stuff. The coloring is very vibrant, but not unrealistically so. And Lyra looks SCARY :C I wouldn't want to pick a fight with her! Great job on this one, Meggo, I really hope your comic turns out this way too :3

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ABloodyPrincess In reply to swiblet [2012-01-30 16:52:52 +0000 UTC]

If you hadn't pointed out the fact I missed the shading, it wouldn't look that way. I will try my best to have this amount of detail in it. Though that means that every page will take at least 5 hours. @_@;

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