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EM54 [2020-01-14 01:54:48 +0000 UTC]

The line art and coloring is very nice, however, there are a few problems with your artwork.

    ·         The head seems squished and unnatural near the horn on the left side

    ·         The whiskers seem too close to the eye making it seem less like its squished

    ·         The hair doesn’t seem to communicate whether it’s supposed to be fire or hair as it looks like a fusion of hair and fire

    ·         The hair also doesn’t look like it’s attracted to the body with the white on the head and on the darker paw the hair seems to float with the orange being separated with the lighter color.

    ·         The hairs have obvious brush marks that don’t blend in well the hair, especially with the darker part making it really obvious.  The back hair and front paw are done well as it looks more like fire.

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