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Description
A fruitless search turns up something else.

Mature Content

Story Notes:

1. Kristina's hand holding up the sword should be moderately unsteady. It's position in the last panel is mostly about it being easier to carry that way.
2. The camera should follow her behind the greenhouse display so the viewer sees what Kristina sees.
3. Panel #3's POV from the other side should be brief or not used at all, but showing the injured glass (stress shows in how reflection is not even) supports the dialog's point about it being fearful.

Description
A fruitless search turns up something else.

Mature Content

Story Notes:

1. Kristina's hand holding up the sword should be moderately unsteady. It's position in the last panel is mostly about it being easier to carry that way.
2. The camera should follow her behind the greenhouse display so the viewer sees what Kristina sees.
3. Panel #3's POV from the other side should be brief or not used at all, but showing the injured glass (stress shows in how reflection is not even) supports the dialog's point about it being fearful.