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Still Grounded. Be back soon.

She’s a pirate, Ein!!! This is my SECOND CG. FULL CRITIQUE PLEASE!!!! I utilized
the critiques I gained from the first CG, and from a professional artist I am going to work for this
summer. I went in with my dad to fix an exposure machine, and he asked if I was still into art.
Yes, I said. Piece made it into all-state for artists, I said. Good, he replied. Painting? No, I said,
laughing. Drawing, I said. Pencil. I can’t paint, I mused. It’s just painting a surface one solid
color and then adding your lights and darks, he advised. Nodded, I did. Took his advice, I did.

I drew this in Spanish last semester. This time around I don’t have time to draw in Spanish;
it’s my third semester, and I MUST start doing well in Spanish–no more of this B bullcrap.

I CG-ed it at home, and I really like the result. I still can’t get the clothing to look right. Too
much light, I think, and not enough blending. Tell me what I did wrong, again. I’m begging
you–full critique!!!!

I was terrified to do the hair and skirts, so I stopped in the middle and thought of a title and other
stuff. I didn’t want to screw anything up. That, and I tried the white skirt and failed miserably at
making it look anywhere close to real.
This is a character in a piece I’m writing. About pirates. And she’s a necromancer, too, and stuff.
Her name is Firenze Memphis Mustang. And she’s pretty awesome. Not as awesome as my
cousin, ~intangiblereverie ’s, character. Which I have yet to draw. And by character, I mean
that she thought up a character for me. Anyone who wants to think up a character for me, do it.
Just send the description to my notes.

If anyone actually reads this whole thing, kindly put a “couch” emoticon at the bottom of their
critique. Like this: : couch : Without the spaces. See?

Thanks!!!!

Description
Still Grounded. Be back soon.

She’s a pirate, Ein!!! This is my SECOND CG. FULL CRITIQUE PLEASE!!!! I utilized
the critiques I gained from the first CG, and from a professional artist I am going to work for this
summer. I went in with my dad to fix an exposure machine, and he asked if I was still into art.
Yes, I said. Piece made it into all-state for artists, I said. Good, he replied. Painting? No, I said,
laughing. Drawing, I said. Pencil. I can’t paint, I mused. It’s just painting a surface one solid
color and then adding your lights and darks, he advised. Nodded, I did. Took his advice, I did.

I drew this in Spanish last semester. This time around I don’t have time to draw in Spanish;
it’s my third semester, and I MUST start doing well in Spanish–no more of this B bullcrap.

I CG-ed it at home, and I really like the result. I still can’t get the clothing to look right. Too
much light, I think, and not enough blending. Tell me what I did wrong, again. I’m begging
you–full critique!!!!

I was terrified to do the hair and skirts, so I stopped in the middle and thought of a title and other
stuff. I didn’t want to screw anything up. That, and I tried the white skirt and failed miserably at
making it look anywhere close to real.
This is a character in a piece I’m writing. About pirates. And she’s a necromancer, too, and stuff.
Her name is Firenze Memphis Mustang. And she’s pretty awesome. Not as awesome as my
cousin, ~intangiblereverie ’s, character. Which I have yet to draw. And by character, I mean
that she thought up a character for me. Anyone who wants to think up a character for me, do it.
Just send the description to my notes.

If anyone actually reads this whole thing, kindly put a “couch” emoticon at the bottom of their
critique. Like this: : couch : Without the spaces. See?

Thanks!!!!