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AetheriumDreams — Criminal Minds Unsub OC

Published: 2010-07-09 18:55:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2667; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 43
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Description An OC I came up with, an Unsub. Her name is Lenore.
I won't reveal her backstory just yet, I'll just state her MO. She likes to wait along an empty highway pretending to have car trouble at night. Then when someone stops to help or investigate, she abducts them by drugging them and takes them to a secret place, where she forces them to "be her friend". If they defy her Rules or are unkind to her, she kills them.
Hint: the Reaper, with his love of stopping to "help" people with car trouble along abandoned highways, is in for a trip...
I tried to get across her demented smile, while preserving her almost impish looks and otherworldlyness. And yes, her eyes are blood red.
She isn't physically strong but she uses other methods to get her prey to comply, no matter how imposing they are.
Oh, and she needs a name. Like "Ghost" or "Phantom" or something? Gah I'm trite.
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Comments: 13

kidashuu [2013-07-11 12:55:14 +0000 UTC]

mwahahaha.....

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Planeta-Starlight [2011-04-28 23:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Is she Albino? I am saying this because she has really pale skin, really white hair, and red eyes.

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AetheriumDreams In reply to Planeta-Starlight [2011-04-29 00:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Yup, she is

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Shinjite-san [2010-11-30 02:43:29 +0000 UTC]

She's so cute!!!
How about " The Poe Girl"?

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Draconicat [2010-09-05 00:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this idea! And she's eeriely beautiful, in a very creepy way.

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Yani-Senpai [2010-07-10 15:06:02 +0000 UTC]

add it to the criminal minds OC group!!

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Mafer [2010-07-09 19:15:55 +0000 UTC]

yay an unsub OC. she looks good.

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AetheriumDreams In reply to Mafer [2010-07-09 19:17:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks! She be a little twisted... actually a LOT twisted... and I intend to do more art of her, most likely her when she's kidnapped Foyet.

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Mafer In reply to AetheriumDreams [2010-07-09 19:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I have a unsub OC too ! and he hates Foyet so muuuuch.
I'm writing a fanfic with my friend for fun with out Ocs + foyet XD

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AetheriumDreams In reply to Mafer [2010-07-09 19:31:23 +0000 UTC]

mwaha!
Lenore kidnaps Foyet to be her "Friend" but he can't follow her Rules so he tries to figure out how to escape before she kills him. It'll be one of those fics where you can't side with either character because they're both evil! Only lenore is more of a tragic character so people might sympathize with her a teensy weensy bit...
what do ur OCs do to Foyet? *evil grin*

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Mafer In reply to AetheriumDreams [2010-07-09 19:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Well I always side with evil characters so yeah lol...
I'm actually a Foyet fan. Nice story btw.

Well I have one OC who is a Foyet groupie. Foyet manipulates her to get to her best friend which is an unsub called The alley killer, and they'r kind of nemesis.(that's my friends OC.)

In the other hand there is Keith my unsub OC, and he wants to kill Foyet, because of a Foyet crime they blamed Keith's father of it, and he is in jail.So Keith wants revenge on that.
But he is pretty messed up too XD.
Usually kills teeneager girls that look like sluts lol. ( 80% of teens lolol)

those are keith and maf [link]
keith [link] [link] [link]
and my Ocs with my friends OC [link]

I hope you understand something,my english isn't very good lol :]

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AetheriumDreams In reply to Mafer [2010-07-09 20:42:47 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. I actually have three or four friends who are from Mexico, so I am used to it lol.
And very nice storylines!

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AetheriumDreams [2010-07-09 18:56:46 +0000 UTC]

btw her hair is white and her eyes are red because she is an albino... forgot to mention that!

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