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Alamort-Blatherskite — Revolution Tale Chapter: 1 (Pg-25)
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Published: 2018-04-27 20:36:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 5990; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 0
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Thank you everyone for your support! I did push myself to finish this page, I don’t know how well it turned out. But thank you for your encouraging words.First: alamort-blatherskite.deviantar…
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Typo in last frame. You mean "Commotion." not "Comotion"
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I sometimes forget that information given on my tumblr ask blog doesn't reach my DA passengers. AskBlog here is a link just in case you would like to check it out.
To answer your question, in the words of Sans:
"nah, we all gotta wear these things, first name, last name, number. it would be to 'card' to control us without em' i guess."
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In this AU, was Flowey born as Flowey, or was he born as little goat Asriel, and somehow was transformed? Just curious.
Also, I've noticed a few spelling errors, if you don't mind me pointing them out. On page 21, you spelled "please" as "pleas", page 23, "knock" is spelled as "nock", page 24 you accidentally put an "e" at the end of "sweet", and on this page, "eachother" should be "each other". If there are others, I didn't notice them. ♥
Not meaning to sound rude, I just know that I appreciate when people point that stuff out for me.
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
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on the topic of Flowey: Maaaaaaaaaaybe you will just have to wait and see (^~^)
on the topic of spelling: I don't think you are being rude, I can not get any better if no one points out my mistakes. Thank you for your support! I greatly appreciate you!
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