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Alamort-Blatherskite — Revolution Tale Chapter: 2 (Pg-42)
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Published: 2018-07-27 18:14:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 6330; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 10
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I know I ask for critiques at the bottom of all my posts but I’ve been working on my style and its changed a lot so really let me have it, I mean lay into me here guys, I can only improve if I know what I’m doing wrong. Thanx in advance.
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Okay, let's see, you're artstyle is verry beautiful and please teach me just how you are able to draw hands pls!
But, from time to time, your facial expressions and poses can look a little stiff, ESPECIALLY the poses. You're anatomy is great and on point, but the picture doesn't really seem alive. And sure, what's alive about a picture, am I right? But it's smore satisfied when something loks a little less stiff and more natural and alive.
Hope this helped ^~^
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THANK YOU! I will work on my poses, and expressions. Thank you again for the critique and the support!
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You are so very welcome! I really love to chat with people that like the same stuff that I do. It's relaxing. Quick question: Do you know Hamilton? If yes, do you like it?
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I do know Hamilton actually, Its what inspired me to write this comic. I was listening to the music and sans dressed in a paper boy cloths popped into my head and I had to draw him.
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Name your Fav. song!
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Thats a hard one. I really like Helpless and satisfied. But I also like Dear Theodosia. Which ones your fave?
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Almost all of them to be honest. But I am rather good at rapping Alexander Hamilton, Aaron Burr sir and My shot. Currently working on getting the Shuyler sisters right and Farmer refuted. I think I'm pretty good at You'll be back, asides for the rather high notes. Can you rap/sing any of the songs?
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I'm not really much of a singer i must admit. I prefer to sit in the corner of my room and quietly draw. The rest of my family is musical, I'm the odd one out.
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My Mom's a singer and my dad owns the "Tischler veranstaltungs technick". It's basicly a place you can rent for things like weddings. But they allso have a house band with my mom as their lead singer. I grew up with music, it's basicly the blood in my veins. And ever since I got into Hamilton I would make a refference when ever I saw a good opertunity. My mom actually (Even though Hamilton is anoying to her and thanks to me she also allmost knows the entiredy of Alexander Hamilton and Aaron Burr sir) just got my attention onto something, she said, to a friend of mine, "I bet in archery training she'sbeing like *Makes bow-drawing motion* I'm not throwing away my *Makes releasing motion* Shot!" I'm defenitly going to try that out next week! Do you have any other hobbies?
(Also, I don't remember if I ever mentioned it but, I'm german)
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Thats really cool that your family is musical too! You should totally do that at archery (^~^) it would be awesome!
My oldest sister just visited Germany this summer to work at a camp, I really want to visit but I am a poor alien.
Besides drawing I don't really do much else. I mean I fiddle with doll customization, and I write stories, but I really don't have a lot of interests. I like to read. But I don't do archery or music or anything cool like that.
do you have any more hobbies?
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Yeah, but my mom can get really aboying because she wants me to keep playing piano but I don't. I actually did that 2 times yesterday! I managed to hit the 8 point mark the first and the 7 point mark the second time!
Maybe your sister can have you over for a week or so. If you ever manage to come to germany you definetly have to try Schnitzel. That is, if you like Pork ^^
Well, archery is kinda expensiv if you want to have your own bow. It took me a while to find something I was really interested in. Some of the failed attempts where Balette, horse riding, Yu-jutsu and soccer. I was also in my schools theatre club last year. Maybe I'll go again next year, but I don't know.
If having my friends over every other day to play Minecraft till my switch freezes a hobby? If yes, then that. Besides that, my switch gaming collection consists of Mario Oddyssey, Breath of the wild, let's sing, Minecraft and little nightmares. I play Helix jump on my phone like the obsessed little thing I am, I roleplay on Wattpad (That is, when the people I'm roleplaying with are on) (I almost spelled Wattpad Wattüad. Stuped ü being right next to p!!!), browse through tumblr and watch interviews of Hamilton cast members and Animation memes. School is the most annoying place on earth but I just have to push through it and participate in the classes so yeah.
Are you still in school too?
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I love pork.
Archery sounds like a lot of fun, I have shot a bow and arrow be for but it was in my sisters back yard and it was just a normal bow, not a fancy one. I would like to try some more but it costs money and I would have to go outside.
I'm really bad a video games because I like to complete them and when I cant I get really frustrated (
yah Im in school, its the pits. I am taking a pottery class right now though, which is fun, but there is one girl in my class who thinks she is the best artists ever and she wants everyone to know it. I'm all for being proud in what you crate but she is really full of herself.
what classes are you taking?
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Going outside? Yah, tell me about it. I only ever go out side when I have to or while getting ice cream or on conventions. Asides that, my cutains are allways closed.
Also, people who are full of themselfs? Tell me about it! I know so many bitches that I stopped counting! I only did pottery ones at a friend's birthday. I did made a horse and it wasn't really something for me
About the whole classes thing, I'm still in middle school. 7th year to be exact. The only class that I CHOSE to have is french. Asides that I'm going through the pits of hell that are called german, math, geography, physics and sex ed. Yeah, it sucks! Usually we stay in the same classes until 8th grade, but we were to many children so we needed a 4th class. I went into that class because I just wanted to get away from that teacher. I still have her in english though. It's funny, she once gave me a B in my resume (Is that what it's called) and you should have seen my mom! She was realy pissed! So now I'm a srtaight A student in that subject. My new homeroom teacher is teaching Geography, history, german, biology and french. I'm gonna visit our partner city, Rumilly, with her and some of my class mates. Also I'll probably go on one of these language travels to britain and am SO hyped for that! And, even though it ads 100+ € to the allready high price, I'm going to do the Harry Potter Studio tour and just can't wait!
The most hellish part of school must be the people though. Why? Because the only person that went to my school that was a HUGE part of the Undertale fandom(You could listen hours to him talk about AUs) has graduated last year and now there's no one at my school anymore who plays Undertale asides from me ;-;
Luckily the keyword is 'MY school'. Because on the Gymnasium just down the road I know one person who plays Undertale! He has 2 more friends whho also play the game and love it and I'm going to meet them this saturday. ONE OF THEM HAS A SANS COSPLAY OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But asides that, I have two friends who like Hamilton. They aren't part of the fandom but like the music! (I'm Angelica in our group of 3)
If you ever wanna RP things like Undertale or Hamilton you can allways message me! I'm ALLWAYS looking for people to RP with because I have like 1 on going RP with 2 other people and it's KILLING me! I could literally sit around and RP for hours on end, simply to continue the story! I wanna trick my friends into RPing with me by writing a book with them. (Have you seen 'Friention')
Talking about friends-'s gonna be a dumb question, I know- but do you considder me a friend? Because I shure do! ^^
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It's cool that you are going on a class trip to Britain, and you get to see the Harry Potter studio you are so lucky!
I have never seen Friention what is it?
Yes I consider you a friend (^~^), I don't think thats a dumb question at all!
I'm sorry it took so long for me to respond, I've been having some problems with my technology for the past few days.
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Technology can be a bitch, I know. For example I didn't have a school computer account for a whole year! But I have it again so me is happy!
And OF COURSE I had to misspell it! I meant 'Friendfiction'. If you still don't know what I'm talking about, then here: youtu.be/4UvA3vwL9xI
Yay! I'm so glad you do because, like I said, don't have many friends that are into the same stuff that I am! ^^
Also, it's not really a class trip, it's more like a "You go there to improve your english and experience the British colture. Maybe make some new friends if You're lucky!" trip. There will most likely mostly be rich people there, because my friend's trip did cost around 1500+ so yeah.
Have you seen "Love, Simon."?
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I will g=have to check out Friendfiction, Thank you for sending me a link (^~^)
I'm also glad you think we are friends!
I absolutely love Love Simon. I have yet to read the book though, I already have so meany on my list.
Do you like books?
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OF COURSE! I love reading! And writing is another thing I love doing in my free time! It's allways been like that- even in kindergarden! My friends would craft something and I'd sit in a corner and read XD
My homeroom teacher recently handed out ordering files for books and I ordered the movie-book version of Love Simon alongside 5 other books. You don't want to know how much that'll cost (my parents)
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Reading is how I spend most of my time in school. I really should pay better attention, but books are just so much more interesting then maths.
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I know the feels! Today we had a Maths test and tomorrow English! I think I did allright in maths, I'm comparably good at it. And I don't worry to much about enlish since it's probebly what you guys learn in pre-school. But I think allready told you about the incapability of my classmates -_-
My phone of course decided to be a bitch again during the Maths test by starting to play music through headphones the moment I was done. The best part about that had to be the fact that I am seated not a meter away from the teacher's desc, and some of my classmates noticed the music playing as well, but kept quiet. My way around the situation? Make noise! Since I was done I stardet agressively and LOUDLY scribbling on some paper to make as much noise as possible without disturbing anyone because even though I'm in the advanced course, most of my classmates took the full double lesson plus the twenty minute break to finish! (We have Maths 4 times a week, one double hour on wednesdays and inbetween those 1 1/2 hours is a twenty minute break) The teacher let those who were done out onto the yard 20 minutes before finish so we could have a break. I, of course, raced to the bathroom and turned my phone of.
The books arrived on monday and guess what? I finished reading Love Simon in TWO DAYS!!! I read 90 pages on monday and 220 pages yesterday, insane, am I right?! XD
School in general is a bitch, but according to everyone around me I have the most motivation that I ever had to get good grades. Either because this is one of the most important half years since it decides if we go to realschool or mainschool or because I have a bet going on with my mom: I get 50,- € if I'm either on the same grade or higher than one of my friends, what I don't do for a straight 50! XD
What kind of books do you read? Have you heard of the never ending story by Michael Ende?
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I read pretty much anything I can get my hands on, but Tarry Pratchet is my favorite.
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I never heard of it, to be honest. What is it?
What are you doing for Halloween? I'm gonna cosplay Chara at school and go out with my friends in the evening as an Undertale Cosplay-group (We have me as Chara, a Sans, a Papyrus and a Gaster. The one cosplaying Papyrus hasn't started on his cosplay yet though) and we're gonna scare some children!
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Terry Pratchet is an author, he wrote the disk world stories. He is very funny if you ever need a book you might look him up.
For halloween I am doing trunk or treat with my family, we are dressing up as Over the Garden Wall and I get to be the beast (^~^)
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Yeah, I will, thanks!
I actually had to look up what over the garden wall is and I haven't seen it. Probably because the only TV-programm we have that plays cartoons is Kika. And even their they don't really play anything 2D animated. It really sucks because it was basicly all I had growing up when I wasn't at my grandma's. But what we did have on there was Sesame street. Did you hear the news about Ernie and Berd(Was that the yellow one's name? I think so!) being gay for each other?
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I usualy have to watch cartoons on pirating websites. Its not preferable but sometimes my Netflix just wont cut it.
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Yeah, I used to do that a lot too, and still sometimes do it! If I can't find something on Netflix I look on Watchbox. If I can't find it there I check Proxer- They have literally EVERY anime out there! But some of their streaming services aren't the best.
Do you know the seven deadly sins? I binge watched the first season in two days- yesterday and today.I haven't binge watched an anime in what feels like an eternity, honestly!
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I love the seven deadly sins, it is a good one. I love to binge watch anime, it my favorite past time. (^~^) Right now I'm getting caught up on My Hero Academia.
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Oooooh! My Hero academia! I've seen, like, 6 episodes XD and I own the first Volume of the manga! Do you know Assassination Classroom?
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Assassination classroom is the bomb! But it made me cry so much.
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Me too! And I just watched 365 days and had to cry AGAIN
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I can't watch it again its just too sad.
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Yee... AC's ending was sad... I didn't really expect it... (I'm so onna cosplay Naisa tho!)
Whichreminds me! Do you have any ships?
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so.... I don't really get what's going on this page that Sans wanna give papy something but dont give him??
also, love the expression of Sans
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Give it a few more pages and if you still don't get it then ask me again and I will explain. Its hard to understand sometimes without the context of the fallowing pages, but I can only upload one page a week. I would tell you now but i don't wanna give anything away on accident. (^~^)
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