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Published: 2012-02-23 18:05:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 225; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Might have a tad too much pure black shadows in panel 5. I'll probably add more sound effects to make the panel feel claustrophobic.Related content
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I meant the girl's hair up front. Now that I've tilted the screen slightly, I can see the difference. Maybe a lighter brown outline for the darker hair colors would work, or gray for the main character's black hair. Also, yes, ease of change is the reason I love digital art so, so much.
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I think brightening the black hair in panel 5 would make it work. I kind of like the pure black shadows. Also, I just think adding too many sound effects in there would make it a bit difficult to make out what you're looking at. I don't know, it's probably just me. This is pretty awesome, by the way, not that I'd expect anything less from you. XD
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Thanks. You mean the main character's hair? I gave it a slight hint of brown in this panel, but I usually draw it jet black. I'm thinking a white outline around his black inking might do better to make him stand out. I'll play with it some. Nice thing about inking and coloring digitally is I can add more text without ruining the art, so if I don't like it I can pull it out.
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Ohh I've felt that way in a class before, just wanting to GET THE HECK OUT OF THERE
Liking it so far
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Most people form school gave me the same "been there" reaction. 
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Well it is a universal feeling, regardless if it's work or classes, there's just one that bugs you so much that you just want to get up and leave but you can't without making a scene so you just sit there trying not to break something..XD
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