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ForbiddenStaring at the list of student, the teacher was pronouncing name after name, or rather surnames, in alphabetic order, annotating whenever a kid was present or absent. She was just about to reach the only student whose surname started with “P” when her cell-phone suddenly starting to vibrate.
‘How many times do I have to tell everybody not to call me during my work-time?’ She thought displeased, but just stood up and said to her students: “I’ll be back in a moment, kids”
Walking out of the classroom, she picked the phone up, took the call, and placed it against her ear.
“What’s up?”
“Miss Go, it’s me, Amy” She had recognized the voice anyway, it was from the woman who was working at Middletown school as a nurse as a temporary job, and if the nurse, who was obviously there for treat any children that could somehow get hurt, was calling her, that could only mean… “Could you come and pick up your student, please?”
‘Same old story…’ She thought while exhaling a tired sigh, “I’ll be right there, Amy”
After making a silent prayer hoping that her students wouldn’t start ramping while she was out, she closed her cell-phone and headed towards the infirmary.
The place was, in Miss Go’s opinion, way too girly. The nurse’s favorite color was pink, and so she redecorated the whole infirmary with said color and… some other decorations. It was pretty, she’d admit, just not her taste. It could sure do without so much pink, she thought.
“Oh, hi dear” Amy, the overweight but sympathetic nurse dressed in a white lab coat, said.
“Hi, Amy” She said, and then started to look into the small bedrooms of the infirmary, which were separated from the main room by just transparent curtains. It wasn’t hard to spot the only one that had someone resting on the bed.
“Thanks for taking care of her” Miss Go said right before walking into the bedroom, meeting a little redhead with a bandage in her forehead, who just gave a shy smile to her teacher.
“I knew it would be one of you two” The older woman said. There was no need to explain who the other one was between them.
The little girl giggled and smiled, and her teacher couldn’t help but to eventually return the smile. She couldn’t understand what it was but… there was something about this girl that somehow would always manage to cheer her up.
“Come on, you’re making me start the class late”
With that said, the twelve years old girl rose up from the bed and walked after her teacher. They both said goodbye to the nurse and headed towards the classroom.
“Why do you always get into these troubles?” The concerned teacher asked. “You’re gonna get hurt one of this days, and not just with something that Amy can take care of”
“Those kids were mean” the girl replied “They tried to hurt Tara”
“I know!” She retorted “But… uh, forget it”
“It’s not a problem, really!” The little girl, stopping her walk and taking and pretentious posture “Just remember: -”
“Everything’s possible for a Possible” Both teacher and student said in unison.
“Exactly!” The redhead student approved happily.
“Doy…” Miss Go said turning around to face her. She looked concernedly at the late-preteen girl, but then let out a sigh and just smiled at her “You just love to make me worry, don’t you?”
And once again, Kim Possible gave her teacher one of those timid smiles that for some unknown reason she loved so much. Miss Go once again turned around and started walking again. The tween followed her, placing herself right beside her and raising her hand to gently grab her teacher’s. The pale-skinned, black-haired woman returned the gesture by caressing those little fingers.
They stayed like that until they reached the classroom.
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Comments: 16
Zenarraus [2011-07-02 14:57:15 +0000 UTC]
Sounds really good so far, definitely got my interest piqued. :3
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Alexlayer In reply to Zenarraus [2011-07-04 18:45:12 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it. ^^
Dunno if I'll ever write more of it, though.
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Zenarraus In reply to Alexlayer [2011-07-05 12:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Aww tis a shame, but I know how it goes when writing. ;3
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Berserkeroo [2011-07-01 21:33:09 +0000 UTC]
Excellent story. I'd encourage you to continue if you see fit. :3
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Alexlayer In reply to Berserkeroo [2011-07-02 04:51:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, as soon as I get a solid plot for it I'll start writing it.
But glad you liked the cookie.
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Here2staffu [2010-04-06 07:36:35 +0000 UTC]
I found this the other day, like literally the other day, and it's an idea that I've never seen before. The idea of Shego being Kim's teacher: yes. The idea of Shego being Kim's teacher before she's in high-school? Never seen it before. I say, good on you. Maybe you could update sometime? It's such an interesting and cool story that it makes me want to read more. You should post it on ff.net, which gets a lot more traffic in terms of fanfiction than dA.
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Alexlayer In reply to KittySquyres [2008-08-18 18:30:05 +0000 UTC]
I'd like to, but I really don't know how
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KittySquyres In reply to Alexlayer [2008-08-18 19:51:07 +0000 UTC]
lol im not entirely sure either (i hope im replying to the right message if not and this sounds weird ignore it ive had no sleep and lots of caffiene) Maybe (and this is just what I personally would like to see) since you started the fic with Kim being like 12... maybe make the next chapter skip ahead a few years? maybe Shego isnt Kims teacher anymore but every once and a while subs? and see where it goes from there? I dunno lol but what you started was something i had been looking to see and strangely enough NO one had done it yet! of course lol i thought the characters would be older but we can make do, yeah? lol. its a good fic, im sure you can think of something
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Alexlayer In reply to KittySquyres [2008-08-18 20:13:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the help, but honestly, though, the last thing I could do would be to skip some years. The IDEA of this story, hence why it's called "Forbidden" was about Shego having some serious dramatic self-issues for, being basically an adult, starting to have feelings and desires for her 12 years old student. Hence the drama. But alas, I don't know how to keep it up
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KittySquyres In reply to Alexlayer [2008-08-18 21:16:23 +0000 UTC]
well lol since you dont want to skip years... think about this: do you want her to go through with the relationship? or just have thoughts about it? Think about the issues that would arise fom either situations and put those forth.
For example if shego were to go through with this: how far would she go in it? what would be the repercussions of her actions? could they stick together or would it be a fling, or would they be torn apart?
If shego just has feelings but doesnt do anything about those feelings, how does she go about getitng rid of them, or dealing with them?
i dunno just throwing out some ideas. if you really dont want to do anything with it thats fine, its just that I can see SO much potential with this story. This is something no one else has done yet(believe me I've bookmarked just about every KiGo story out there)and you can do so many things with this. No one else seems to have explored this avenue yet, and with what you have written so far, i believe you have the potential to go all the way. Just saying. I hope you continue with it, but then, I can only offer ideas. Sadly, I do not possess the creativity nor the drive to write it myself, so I guess you could say that my reasons for you wanting to continue this are selfish, as I wish that I could do it. but I can't. I'm not lying, and I'm not sucking up. You truly have the potential to make this something good. Something different.
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headheadhunter [2008-05-15 17:49:00 +0000 UTC]
hey just read this cant believe I mist it when i first visited your gallery.any think its a really interesting story the fact that kim seems to be more younger than in most fics and there relationship develops from a student teacher point.makes me wonder how far they might take things so early .nice job and hope you get more inspiration to do a second one
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SalemSaori [2007-09-29 17:17:57 +0000 UTC]
So that's the famous fic that's set to explore the origins of Kim and Shego's rivalry from the teacher-studen relationship point of view.
There's a couple grammar mistakes (when her phone suddenly starting should be started, obviously there for treat should be to treat or for treating, etc) but you've gotten so much better at English I'm not even gonna go further into it.
The only complain I can really make is that it's less than subtle. Being that you want to make an issue of the whole temptation/forbid, her attraction towards Kim appears almost natural. It just seems a little obvious and forced that the teacher should be so particularly drawn to her from the very start. IMO it should sound a bit more like a mundane teacher-student thing. But remember that's just the feeling I got and mostly everything else is quite top-notch
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