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Alexlayer — The KiGo Syndrome
Published: 2008-06-07 20:29:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2371; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 11
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Description The KiGo Syndrome

This girl was good, she thought. A good partner for her crime-fighting activities, she dared to consider. Granted, she had been thinking of dropping this “hobby” of her during the latest months, but… the devils belongs in hell and angels in heaven, or so one might say. The point? She might not be Kim Possible, but old habits die hard.

Truth to be told, she hadn’t “remember” Jen ‘til some days ago, when they both met for the actual first time at the cafeteria that was close to the college she had applied to. Just then, all of her fakes memories about Jen started to suddenly appear in her mind, some more clear than others, the clearest one being her visit at the hospital when her niece had been born. Just now she was verifying just how good Jen was, and she had to admit, the brunette teen did cut it.

Not that this had been expected, let alone asked. This mission of sorts was something that came totally out of the blue and they just happened to be at the right place and at the right time. Jed had invited her to spend some girl’s time together but the date got canceled just before they went in the club. Had they gone in one minute before, they probably wouldn’t have noticed the four police cars going at full speed with the red lights on and the siren’s volume at their peak.

She just had to ask for it.

Jen didn’t like the idea. She was far keener for having some fun playing bowling or pool than getting into this, but regarding her… well, it had been almost three month without the thrill and she just needed it.

And while she wouldn’t say it out loud, she was glad she followed her instincts that lead them to what they were doing now: Chasing a bank robber through the buildings’ roofs and under no light but the full moon’s. Yeah, she had actually been missing this.

Both crime-fighting girls wouldn’t let go of the sight of a thin silhouette that was always at least four buildings ahead of her. Whoever the thief was, he or she was sure damn fast and agile. Still, they were confident that they could do this…

That’s it, until they had to cross over some old building which’s roof fell down as soon as they landed on it. She barely managed to avoid falling inside thanks to Jen’s push, but the self-sacrificing brunette ended up falling inside because of that. Worried, she looked down at the girl, who seemed to have had a bad fall, but as soon as Jen noticed her looking down at her, she didn’t seem pleased because of her concern.

“What are you doing!?” Jen exclaimed “Go after her, or she’ll get away!”

Seeing that her one-time partner was okay and more worried about the case than her health, she decided to follow her wish and keep after the robber, now even faster and even more determined than before. After all, this was their job.

‘You won’t get away…’

Not a minute had passed before she was actually quite near the thief, whom she could tell apart as female by now. Yet, it was right when she felt that she was about to reach at her that the thief jumped into an alleyway… and she followed, only to get a bad sight: A huge web of ropes and cables that not even her could avoid. Trying to stop herself on them and see what she could do from there was futile too. By the time she realized, she was hanging from said cables and upside down, quite close to the ground by with her hands and leg way too tied up like for breaking free.

‘So much for a hero…’ She told herself ‘I’ve been wearing off these last two months’

And as if feeling humiliated alone wasn’t enough, the thief she had been chasing just had to appear in front of her, now letting herself be seen as a redhead in a leopard-skin cat-suit which looked quite familiar.

“Wait, wait!” She exclaimed “There actually IS a Sheela of the Leopard People!?”

“Flesh and blood, Blondie, it’s all real” The thief claimed while approaching the younger girl, but stopped when she got to see her face clearly. “Now you wait me! Kim Possible!?”

“Her lost twin” The blonde girl sarcastically lied “Why? You meet her?”

“Around a couple of weeks ago, but man! You sure could have fooled me, my dear… Rim Possible?”

“Ren Reilly” The girl corrected her.

“Well, Ren… you stopped me from robbing the bank, I stop you and your partner from sending me to prison. Doesn’t that sound fair enough to you?”

“Is this how villains negotiate nowadays? Wow, things change a lot in two months”

“Now that I got you in the mood, I got a new proposal to offer”

Now ‘mood’ had a whole new meaning in her dictionary “And that is?”

“Haven’t you ever thought about taking up the role of the evil twin?” Sheela asked, getting dangerously close to the supposed lost twin.

Ren laughed. This was way too direct. “Why would I do that?”

“Oh, baby…” The woman began… caressing the teen’s face “If you only knew the privileges of living as I do”

“Thanks, but I’m not interested in any of that” She replied straightforward.

“But if you’re anywhere close in personality to your twin, then I know just what you desire”

Ren gulped “And… what’s that?” She asked, not being able to hide the nervousness caused by having the redhead’s face so close to hers.

“Your own Sexy-And-Bad Girl in Cat-Suit” She replied, denoting word by word, as her lips grew closer to the blonde’s ‘til they finally meet in a quite weird yet -undeniably- passionate kiss which, cursed may be the -hot- thief’s word, Ren couldn’t help but to return.

So delicate… both demanding and generous at the same time. Even as weird as it was being upside down, it seemed like the felonious woman was using that to make this even better. Regardless of how many fake memories she had, this was, in fact, her very first kiss… and Sheela was making sure to make it a wonderful one. She wasn’t really sure why she was going along with it, specially up to the point they were know: Dancing their tongues against each other. Probably because, even though she could barely admit it to herself, she had been felt lonely lately, and this… this was simply too good like to let it pass by.

Ren actually felt sad when the kiss ended, being left only with Sheela’s smirking face as she walked backwards. They both then heard fast and approaching footsteps, and looking to their side, they saw Jen running toward them.

“Think about it, okay?” Sheela told her giving her one last wink before jumping toward the nearest wall, starting to climb the alleyway with the agility of a cat. By the time Jen reached up to Ren, the thief was nowhere to be seen.

“Sorry” Ren apologized “She got away”

Jen looked at Ren, not replying instantly. “So it seems”

The blonde teen waited… wondering if she’d have to spell. Apparently, so it was: “Can I get a hand here?”

The brunette looked up “Oh, sure” She replied, starting to try to unwrapped her friend from the cords and ropes.

Ren did notice that Jen was distracted, and that could only mean only one thing in her mind: She saw them.

“That woman…” Ren began, trying to break the ice “She was Sheela, of the Leopard People, the same from the comic books”

“I see” Jen replied, and for a moment Ren thought that was all she was going to say “I’ve met her before”

“Really?”

“Yeah, from what I heard, she got her inspiration from the very same comics you’ve mentioned, becoming then the living incarnation of that character”

“Well, that explains it”

“She’s not really good at fighting” Jen followed “But she’s sure really good at escaping”

“Do you think that we actually fell on traps made up by her?” The teen asked.

“It’s possible”

“So… anything else I should know about her?”

“I… think you know the rest already”

Yeah: She had seen them, and now she couldn’t even focus on untying her for some reason.

‘Don’t ask her…’

Should she cut the cables? No, that could make things worse.

‘Don’t you dare… just forget about it!’

Maybe she should climb up her friend and pull her up. That might help…

‘Don’t, seriously. Don’t!’

Or maybe she should roll her over…

‘Aw, screw it!’

“You and Kim… have it really bad for villainess, don’t you?”

For once, Ren was sure her expressions and her currents feelings were something the original Kim Possible never experienced.

“I know-!”

“You couldn’t help yourself, could you?” Ren interrupted her.

“Believe me, I couldn’t”

Yeah, so she thought

“Just get me down”
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Comments: 20

rickx1 [2009-11-11 15:44:43 +0000 UTC]

...so if understand correctly, shego has a blonde aprtner in justice, who she tags along with to catch kim's twin sister who happens to be half jaguar?
wtf japan.....

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Alexlayer In reply to rickx1 [2009-11-11 21:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Er... not exactly. Although I wouldn't blame you for being confused...

Ren is not Kim's twin, but a clone of her who dyed her hair blonde to differ herself from the original. She made her own living somewhere else, and this is the first time she finds herself trying to catch a villain in a long time.

Jen is another teen hero who crossed paths with Kim before, and recently met Ren.

Sheila is simply a thief who goes around in a leopard cat-suit, and a lesbian, as you have seen.

The original Kim is hooked up with Shego, and Jen knows this. That's why she made that comment. So... I hope that clears it up.

Thanks for the comment.

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rickx1 In reply to Alexlayer [2009-11-12 15:10:09 +0000 UTC]

it makes more sense, and it's waaay more disturbing.....

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toaofshyakugan [2008-06-18 04:33:10 +0000 UTC]

plotbunnies are a horrible disease, arent they? so many different breeds...they outnumber insects 20-1.

gotta say though, good concept(even if I havent read any of blackbird's stuff) but your grammar and sentence structure could really use some work buddy. I'd consider investing in a beta or editor, it helps, trust me.

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Alexlayer In reply to toaofshyakugan [2008-06-18 05:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment. And yeah, I know my grammar still has problems, but it's not so easy for me since English is not my first language.

Anyway, thanks for the advice. I hope you have enjoyed the story.

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toaofshyakugan In reply to Alexlayer [2008-06-18 20:13:10 +0000 UTC]

no? What is your first language?

and I did, very much so. Hope to read more from you some time =3

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Alexlayer In reply to toaofshyakugan [2008-06-18 22:58:39 +0000 UTC]

My first language is Spanish, but I've been studying English since I was a child, though writting in English is still a challenge, I gotta admit.

And don't worry, there will be soon more of my work. Hope you like it. ^_^

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toaofshyakugan In reply to Alexlayer [2008-06-19 04:17:55 +0000 UTC]

ah, English - Learning Japanese - will be learning Spanish xD

and that's good to know =3 your work is really god

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Alexlayer In reply to toaofshyakugan [2008-06-19 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]

How hard is Japanese to learn? I've been thinking about studying it too.

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toaofshyakugan In reply to Alexlayer [2008-06-20 20:34:24 +0000 UTC]

incredibly. there are multiple ways to say certain words, and certain words in japanese can mean different things in other languages (one word I know of, but dont remember it exactly, means bolth bridge and chopsticks xD) then there are the different ways to write things (katakana, hiragana, and kanji)

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Vash-Nevershade [2008-06-08 13:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Nother good story, I wonder what will happen next?....hint hint.

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Alexlayer In reply to Vash-Nevershade [2008-06-08 16:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but I have no idea of what will happen next. I just had to write this down or it wouldn't stop bugging my mind. Anyway, glad you liked it.

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aoleitao [2008-06-08 12:13:50 +0000 UTC]

I liked your last work a lot. A story short, however very good, I liked the way like you worked with the details, it is worth a lot to emphasize that you get to give a very real note to the characters when it describes them, the facts sound flowed.

Very good!

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Alexlayer In reply to aoleitao [2008-06-08 16:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad you liked it. OH, and in the sidenotes, the next chapter of Jen's fic is progressing quite well.

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aoleitao In reply to Alexlayer [2008-06-09 00:10:02 +0000 UTC]

That´s a real good new! I´m waiting for you to post the poster.

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MistiqueFour [2008-06-08 08:20:56 +0000 UTC]

A smile, twinkel and comment for you. Just like you wanted.

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Alexlayer In reply to MistiqueFour [2008-06-08 16:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Victory!!

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headheadhunter [2008-06-08 00:06:31 +0000 UTC]

interesting. had fun reading it.and good to know that more than good looks got past on to ren from kim.

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Alexlayer In reply to headheadhunter [2008-06-08 00:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

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headheadhunter In reply to Alexlayer [2008-06-08 00:18:12 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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