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Music (play it LOUD): [link]They had been left in the dark for days, blindfolded and tied down, deprived of all but the most necessary doses of food and water. When finally the torturous movement of their transportation stopped they were unceremoniously shoved into a pen far too small for all six horses. The blindfolds were ripped from them at the same time as the noise hit their ears; the screaming monstrosity of a crowd of humans, all yelling and clapping and stomping inches from the fence. Hungry, tired, and overwhelmed, the horses went mad in their pen, rearing and screaming, lashing out at each other in mindless fear.
He had no time to adjust or make sense of his surroundings before the pen flooded with human children, all of them barely high enough to see over the horses' withers, screaming as they plunged between the rearing beasts. Hands grabbed at his mane and flanks, legs scrabbling for purchase on his sides as they fought to find a seat upon his great back. Frightened and overwhelmed, he reared again and again, feeling bodies deflect off his hooves. Hands clamped cruelly at his mane, short legs tightening around his barrel and he thundered forward into another horse, reeling away at the impact.
The screams around them grew louder as the ground in the pen gradually cleared, the still-standing children dragging their fallen comrades away. When he had a moment to breathe he saw the other horses similarly mounted, the children insignificant weights upon their backs. The screaming grew to deafening levels before a lead was looped over his neck, the small weight flinging itself off his back as hands tugged on the rope. Left no choice but to follow, he trotted nervously after the human, gait high and uneven.
The stable he was put into was blessedly quiet and cool, with fresh water and hay, but he was too keyed up to eat, ears swiveling nervously as the other five horses were led past. It was a long, exhausting night and he finally dropped into a light doze, still brimming with unanswered questions.
Jager hasn't always been the composed creature we know him as. At the age of two he and five other Nordanners were exported from Skagenrak to Rakernon, the central city out in a wasteland controlled by dragons. They were bought as mounts to Slayers, the protectors of Rakernon and its out liars.
Slayers are trained from the age of ten, and after two years of intensive training the group that's survived so far (usually no more than about twenty out of an original forty) are let loose on the pen of horses to try and mount one. Prior to the ceremony they are given no training on horses and are exposed to the creatures as little as possible, so it becomes a bloodbath as they leap desperately at the giant horses, all of whom have been carefully mistreated to put them in an aggressive mood and help weed the children down further.
This successfully culls the trainees down to six hopefuls, who must undergo four more years of training (most of it now on horseback) before they are able to be called full Slayers.
Rest assured that the nordanners are taken very good care of after the initial ceremony. They are actually considered more valuable than the humans, and in the morning will be fed and watered properly, taken out and gently exercised, wiped down of all the accumulated sweat, etc. The trainers (most retired Slayers) have just come to realize that they get better results when the horses are riled up and spooked.
This new style of shading is bad-fucking-ass for nighttime and dramatic lighting scenes x3
I'm borrowing several other nordanners for the purpose of this plotline. From left to right;
Ran
Daze
Matty
Jager
Kal
Gala
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Comments: 43
Gemirolls [2013-05-22 09:31:48 +0000 UTC]
This story is amazing! You are such a good writer!
Gala looks beautiful as well, I really can't wait to see/read more :>
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Kamieno [2013-05-20 00:15:47 +0000 UTC]
Ooh yes, the juicy, gory details are finally revealed! Beautiful picture and very attention-grabbing story, loved every second of it. c:
I'm guessing you haven't spell checked it since you showed it to us on the jm? XD
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alexpeanut In reply to Kamieno [2013-05-23 20:35:34 +0000 UTC]
I meant what specifically did I get wrong?
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Kamieno In reply to alexpeanut [2013-05-23 20:44:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're serious xD just a couple of spelling errors.
Here:
Hungry, tired, and overwhelmed, the horses went mad in their pen, rearing and screaming, lashing out at each other in mindless fear. (tired was tried before)
Hands clamped cruelly in his mane, short legs tightening around his barrel and he thundered forward into another horse, reeling away at the impact. (maybe change the italicized word to at?)
I hope you don't get mad at me for pointing these things out LOL
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alexpeanut In reply to Kamieno [2013-05-23 20:45:12 +0000 UTC]
Lol of course I was serious. Why wouldn't I want to improve?
Thanks c:
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Kamieno In reply to alexpeanut [2013-05-23 20:47:57 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to nit-pick and bitch at me whenever you feel like it.
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sayna-jaye [2013-05-19 18:32:36 +0000 UTC]
Whoaaaaa, this is an intense story! Very interesting, I'll definitely be checking out more of your writing.
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alexpeanut In reply to sayna-jaye [2013-05-19 18:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm quite flattered c:
I have plenty of plans for this bunch going forward.
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sayna-jaye In reply to alexpeanut [2013-05-19 18:46:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm looking forward to it!
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EmeraldTheWolf [2013-05-18 23:30:18 +0000 UTC]
oh and Galadriel has a star on her forehead ^^ [I only know because I designed her lol]
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alexpeanut In reply to EmeraldTheWolf [2013-05-19 01:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry, do you have a picture with it visible?
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EmeraldTheWolf In reply to alexpeanut [2013-05-19 01:40:17 +0000 UTC]
here you go ^^ [link]
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alexpeanut In reply to EmeraldTheWolf [2013-05-19 02:23:17 +0000 UTC]
Right, of course D: I am an idiot, I'll be fixing that as soon as possible, sorry.
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EmeraldTheWolf [2013-05-18 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]
crazy story! wow! and dramatic image! very gorgeous work!
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ShadowRaven1 [2013-05-18 22:16:41 +0000 UTC]
No words..... .
Seriously Zan this is amazing. I love the idea and you can feel the panic in this image.
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alexpeanut In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-05-19 13:29:24 +0000 UTC]
This new shading style is beast.
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Bast-et In reply to alexpeanut [2013-05-19 18:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Hey Alex, would you mind if I added this awesomeness to Daze's gallery? It's the easiest way to keep up with his pictures and stories, and I'd love to see this one there as well
Also, just wanted to say, I love the idea of slayers you have going on here. Lots of room for development and growth, and this was a very dramatic introduction to the story. Can't wait to continue reading about Jager's past.
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alexpeanut In reply to Bast-et [2013-05-19 18:43:13 +0000 UTC]
Isn't that what I just approved a couple minutes ago? c:
Thanks! I tend to massively overplan these people's pasts, so it's always nice to be able to share some of the world building.
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Aarogyc [2013-05-18 20:36:01 +0000 UTC]
That music was perfect O.O I'm even more glad you're using my boy now, this is very cool. A little terrifying, but cool xD
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alexpeanut In reply to Aarogyc [2013-05-19 13:28:59 +0000 UTC]
I spent a good half hour on yt looking for music lol.
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QueenHalloween [2013-05-18 20:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, this is freakin badass. Dang... LOL.
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