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Well I made another one lol.... not much to say with this but I think I did a pretty good job with this one but the program I was using had a word limit in the amount of text in one text box so I had to make a few and because of this I couldn't go back and correct all of it so I didn't even bother looking for anything spelled wrong lol....so if you see any just leave a comment below and I'll add it to the description so I can correct it but anyway~ enjoy~ and please leave a comment and/or fav this~*CORRECTIONS*
In the 7th paragraph it typed "Who are!? you show yourself"well it should be "*Who are *you!? Show yourself!*" like so~
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Comments: 29
AlexTGFan In reply to Core1948 [2016-12-07 20:57:32 +0000 UTC]
As long as you're alive anything can happen!
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aabcehm [2015-06-11 19:45:22 +0000 UTC]
The sorceress in this story is the same one who was defeated in your librarian story, isn't it?
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AlexTGFan In reply to aabcehm [2015-06-11 20:17:38 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Most of my newish captions are loosely connected, meaning you will see similar country, and character names/appearances. Not counting the Sailor Mercury one.
Captions with connections: Birth Of a Hero?, The Librarian, A promise of Friends, Dream Fulfilled, Ultimate Treasure (this one), The Blue Nobles, and TG caption 5th.
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firefightandothers [2014-08-30 23:00:28 +0000 UTC]
This is actually really good. Just a shame it has so many errors.
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AlexTGFan In reply to firefightandothers [2015-09-28 08:02:02 +0000 UTC]
When did you comment on this... I like to make a habit to always reply but you somehow hid from me for a year...
Anyway, yea I'm pretty blind when it comes to looking for errors mostly because I just rush through it out of excitement after writing it at a snails pace for hours..... probably shouldn't do that. Improved a lot compared to my old ones at least...
Last, and definitely not least, thanks I appreciate your comment! ^^
(PS, sorry for being so late )
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firefightandothers In reply to AlexTGFan [2015-09-28 12:57:40 +0000 UTC]
It's all right. You have no obligation to reply to my comment. Anyway, I'd recommend letting something you wrote sit on your computer for at least a day, before going over it again for errors. You'll be surprised how much even a day will do.
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AlexTGFan In reply to firefightandothers [2015-09-28 16:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Giant obligation! Especially when you don't get that many comments! Took your time to read my stuff and comment praise/criticism afterwards. Least I can do is say thank you ^^
Thanks for the advice btw. What I've been thinking of doing is just saving my text like a smart person so I can easily fix any errors I miss at a later date and update. Hehe...
Now you deserve a glomp
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firefightandothers In reply to AlexTGFan [2015-09-28 16:54:08 +0000 UTC]
All right. I hope that works out for you.
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VermillionFenrir [2014-03-01 06:37:25 +0000 UTC]
wow.... the end was perfect!
You could turn this into an awesome series! ever want to write a book, novel, or even manga ? this could be a good one! ^^
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AlexTGFan In reply to VermillionFenrir [2014-03-05 06:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Thanks for the praise! Maybe one day I'll write a book.......one day far far far far far far far far away from today~
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VermillionFenrir In reply to AlexTGFan [2014-03-06 10:41:20 +0000 UTC]
I also would make my story to be real one day, still far away too XDD
well, good luck anyway ^^
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AlexTGFan In reply to jbh14 [2013-10-05 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I appreciate the comment
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Jack-O-Lance [2013-10-03 11:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, interesting story! It almost seems it could become (a) sequel(s) or pehaps turned into a series!
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AlexTGFan In reply to Jack-O-Lance [2013-10-04 03:57:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, The character in this story actually has been appearing in my other ones you just have to connect the dots
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AlexTGFan In reply to GobboKilla [2013-09-05 22:37:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol its not that great but thanks I appreciate the comment
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GobboKilla In reply to AlexTGFan [2013-09-10 14:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Well, I think it IS great^^
don't get a too low opinion of yourself~
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AlexTGFan In reply to 98Sparkz [2013-09-01 03:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Lol yea thanks for the instantaneous comment XD
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98Sparkz In reply to AlexTGFan [2013-09-01 07:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Ikr? But I read it owo was good one ^_^
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