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Whoo boy back to pages now that classes are over! I wanted to be sure to get this one out before I go on vacation this week (which starts tomorrow). Glad I didn't forget!

Not entirely happy with how panel 1 came out with the room introduction since it was much more interesting in my head, and also because the other half of the room is entirely cut off, but you'll see it again in upcoming pages so I'm more okay with it for now.

So now that I learned how to actually perspective (still terribly) I hope I can start improving my convergences and whatnot on my pages. This page is an awful example since it was started prior to when I began learning, but I did implement some concepts, such as character sizes in perspective. Something that was unfortunately difficult because all characters in this scene are different sizes (Vernil is shorter than Kailani, and the maid I chose for slipping is conveniently the tallest maid) so it's still a bit off. But it'll get better with time!

And as well, our lovely Vernil gets her proper introduction to Kailani! It's about time.
As well, some additional (new) maids are seen here! I still need to make a lineup of each of them, maybe with some descriptions since I don't know when each of them will be introduced. It won't be for awhile no matter what, and none of them are overly important to the plot, so I think it'd be cute to have them all visually together. Plus it'd help me to keep track of them all!

Next page will be yet another scene change with some old characters making their reappearance. Excited for that~ I hope you guys will be too!

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Favorite panel: 3
Least Favorite panel: none

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives/size inconsistencies

Copyright 2008-2015 © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.

Description
Next page: The Selection - Ch2 page 18
Previous page: The Selection - Ch2 page 16
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
FAQ: [link]

Whoo boy back to pages now that classes are over! I wanted to be sure to get this one out before I go on vacation this week (which starts tomorrow). Glad I didn't forget!

Not entirely happy with how panel 1 came out with the room introduction since it was much more interesting in my head, and also because the other half of the room is entirely cut off, but you'll see it again in upcoming pages so I'm more okay with it for now.

So now that I learned how to actually perspective (still terribly) I hope I can start improving my convergences and whatnot on my pages. This page is an awful example since it was started prior to when I began learning, but I did implement some concepts, such as character sizes in perspective. Something that was unfortunately difficult because all characters in this scene are different sizes (Vernil is shorter than Kailani, and the maid I chose for slipping is conveniently the tallest maid) so it's still a bit off. But it'll get better with time!

And as well, our lovely Vernil gets her proper introduction to Kailani! It's about time.
As well, some additional (new) maids are seen here! I still need to make a lineup of each of them, maybe with some descriptions since I don't know when each of them will be introduced. It won't be for awhile no matter what, and none of them are overly important to the plot, so I think it'd be cute to have them all visually together. Plus it'd help me to keep track of them all!

Next page will be yet another scene change with some old characters making their reappearance. Excited for that~ I hope you guys will be too!

---

Favorite panel: 3
Least Favorite panel: none

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives/size inconsistencies

Copyright 2008-2015 © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.