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*sigh*
At last. The time has arrived!

Oh, wait, what's this?
Do you guys remember these little bitty things there?

Hmm. What is it that's so similar?
Oh right.
WE FOOLED YOU.
Those were his colors all along.
Right in your face.
THE ENTIRE TIME.



Ah, but now that it's over I must find something else to torture you with.
But don't worry I will. Oohhhh I wiiill...

I'll let the page speak for itself. Enjoy!

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Favorite panel: 4 & Last
Least Favorite panel: 6

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives. Again. :< Oh, and the panel arrangements. I don't really like them. They don't flow right to me.

Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!

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Comments: 332

TheOrichalcumSpider [2010-07-08 16:18:59 +0000 UTC]

rember that poll [link] you did to see if anyone figured out when he would apper i got it right

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AlfaFilly In reply to TheOrichalcumSpider [2010-07-13 19:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha duuuude you did! xDD
That's intense!

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TheOrichalcumSpider In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-07-13 19:40:35 +0000 UTC]

bwahahahaha

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DoctorCritical [2010-03-24 00:56:38 +0000 UTC]

AH he's so KYOOT. He's been my favourite from the very beginning. ^^

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AlfaFilly In reply to DoctorCritical [2010-03-25 23:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! Glad you like him! 8D

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Falcolf In reply to ??? [2010-03-09 01:09:39 +0000 UTC]

OMG he's frigging gigantic! Whoa, and colourrrrrssss!

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AlfaFilly In reply to Falcolf [2010-03-18 19:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Quite! xDD
Thanks!

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AnimeWolf13 In reply to ??? [2010-02-18 23:36:10 +0000 UTC]

F i have to admit..... Fredorico's hot...in a way
ok he's tall....i lik tall guys!

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AlfaFilly In reply to AnimeWolf13 [2010-02-23 19:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness! xDD Even 12 foot tall guys?

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AnimeWolf13 In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-02-24 15:31:09 +0000 UTC]

yes the b da best xP

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Miiroku In reply to ??? [2010-02-09 03:18:47 +0000 UTC]



I am one happy Blue.

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AlfaFilly In reply to Miiroku [2010-02-10 20:19:04 +0000 UTC]

As you should be!

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Tesso [2010-02-04 12:50:23 +0000 UTC]

AHHHHHH! I didn't see this till noooow!!! OMG I looooove it! and the way you shaded IS epic, you did a very wonderful job on fredorico's suit, he's so amazeinnnnnng!!!! I love the little details you put here!

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AlfaFilly In reply to Tesso [2010-02-04 19:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 8D

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sickvilkas In reply to ??? [2010-02-02 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]

when i saw the thumbnal i was like "HOLY SH** FEDDYS A HUGE MOFO" lol. awusmly amazing as usaul -round of applause-

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AlfaFilly In reply to sickvilkas [2010-02-03 22:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, indeed. xD
Thank you!

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sickvilkas In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-02-03 22:58:17 +0000 UTC]

haha welcome! :3

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21gunbunnies In reply to ??? [2010-01-31 19:27:29 +0000 UTC]

I love this comic, can't wait to see more
I did a character based on this comic [link]

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AlfaFilly In reply to 21gunbunnies [2010-02-13 22:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, forgot to reply to this! xD
Thank you s much! 8D
Hope more is to come!

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Ayemae [2010-01-31 05:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Whoa whoa whoa, whoa. There's like... a huge error on this page. Whoa... I'm really not sure how you missed it, but thankfully, as big as it is, it's something that's easily fixed, so I went right ahead and fixed it for yah. Here you go:

[link]

That aside... This page came out well! I see what you're saying about the layout. Unfortunately the reveal panel is so big, and where it is makes your eyes go to it before the last two panels of just Kailani, but to be honest I don't think a really big problem. The only way I can think to really fix it is to redo the page completely, and I don't think it's such an issue where that would be worth it.

The diagonal divide between the first and second panels doesn't look right to me. I see that you did it to get that tail action in, but it would probably work a bit better flipped, since the diagonal is going from right to left and English-speakers read from left to right.

Lastly, that last 'ta-tok' is just barely touching Kailani, but that's an easy fix. XP Great job!

(...You know, I know I always say how I never really think character designs are a big deal unless they're needlessly misleading, but must his sleeves really be purple again that red? It clashes and makes my eyes a little sad, and... some people will take his cyan-ness to be humorous since such a big reveal is of made of him. *hypocrite, hypocrite* Oh and um, some cyan or cyan-like color somewhere else on his design like for example maybe a darker version the sleeves might help to make his head less... floaty...like... and lead your eyes around the design more.)

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AlfaFilly In reply to Ayemae [2010-02-01 02:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh jeezus!
... I died inside xD
Multiple times.
I love it.

Thank you muchly! Good point with the diagonal panels!
I will take the tips and see what I can do!

(Purple? Eh? His sleeves are... blue. He doesn't have any purple on him Is it your screen? And his skin is supposed to be more teal than cyan. Unless your term for cyan is different? This is cyan for me: [link] This is teal: [link]
I do agree with his head looking... floaty. I figure it possibly might be the shading because in page 38 it looks fine as I tried a different shading method. Whenever I post it could you see if it still looks the same? My monitor is really dark so a lot of things look different for me. If so I might ponder on color alterations. :] I'm wondering if maybe I changed the brown collar thing to something lighter it would blend it in a tad more?

Ultimately I don't care if people don't like his skin color. I know that's probably a big no-no but I really don't. It's just one of those things that I'm happy with and think it fits. Ugh, I feel selfish saying that but it's true.)

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Ayemae In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-02-01 03:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I do see teal, but I think I assumed he was cyan because of the fact that it's dark in the room he's in. Sorry 'bout that. The sleeves definitely look like an indigo/purple kind of color to me though...

Hey, if you don't care, that's fine. It's your comic.

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AlfaFilly In reply to Ayemae [2010-02-01 03:55:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... maybe it's the back-lighting that makes it purple... Ugh, red and purple together are such a clashing mixture, I would hate to not be able to fix it.

I really appreciate your concern though! I always wish for my character designs to be appealing to the audience. If you ever happen to find anything, don't fret to mention it.

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BlankBeauty17 In reply to ??? [2010-01-31 03:59:16 +0000 UTC]

WOW! I never knew you were this creative, Filly. I can't wait until I find out what happens next!

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AlfaFilly In reply to BlankBeauty17 [2010-02-10 20:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I try to update every other Wednesday lol hope to make it once a week in the future though.

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bebegirlmemow22 In reply to ??? [2010-01-27 06:01:24 +0000 UTC]

-GASP-



EETTTTSS FEEEEEDDDYYYYYYY-sparkle sparkle-



I HAD A SPAZZ ATTACK WHEN I SAW THIS~

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HowlMaster In reply to ??? [2010-01-26 22:18:41 +0000 UTC]

His face is like "Yes im late but im 12 feet tall what are you gonna do about woman >:U"

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AlfaFilly In reply to HowlMaster [2010-01-27 05:51:36 +0000 UTC]

...
Best comment ever.
I smell parody.

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HowlMaster In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-01-27 12:26:53 +0000 UTC]

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Chanethedemongirl In reply to ??? [2010-01-26 16:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Ohmahgosh < = o hes aqua blue gray? Hmm nice combo, and he looks kewl . Dang that'd make me highly nervous if I was in her situation O_O . Just cuz typically I'm alittle edgy of guys and some ppl I don't know.
Plus that'd be just plan weird XD but nonetheless he looks nice ^^ in a creepy cool way

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Sooper-Wolf In reply to ??? [2010-01-25 18:56:11 +0000 UTC]

I WANT TO HUG HIM

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kittydemonchild In reply to ??? [2010-01-25 04:45:21 +0000 UTC]

... *glomp*

8V ...

... OH HAI!

U HAS ANYTHING TO SAY TO ME?

~ my initial reaction ~

Freakin' finally! I thought he was brown.
He makes my legs feel numb just looking at how tall he is.

Nice lighting. 8V Looks great on my dark screen.

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AlfaFilly In reply to kittydemonchild [2010-02-16 20:16:30 +0000 UTC]

UM
YO MAMMA

Nope. No browns for him. Though one would typically not assume that such an angry looking guy would be so brightly colored. :U

Thank yooou~

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kittydemonchild In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-02-19 18:22:25 +0000 UTC]

*cries*

I guess he reminded me of yoooou.

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AlfaFilly In reply to kittydemonchild [2010-02-23 18:59:39 +0000 UTC]

DAWW
I am so honored.
We are twins, eh? C:

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kittydemonchild In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-02-27 07:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Daaawww! Your bro is tall!

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AlfaFilly In reply to kittydemonchild [2010-02-27 20:45:40 +0000 UTC]

What? You're saying I'm short? Is that it?! >:C

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Moonstruck-badger In reply to ??? [2010-01-24 04:32:00 +0000 UTC]

He looks sad D:

BUT HE FINALLY APPEARED!!!

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dragonsnouts In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 16:32:04 +0000 UTC]

I now know what 12 feet looks like. ._.
FEDDY R C0LURFOL BAW

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Himura-Desiius In reply to ??? [2010-01-23 09:35:06 +0000 UTC]

............................................AWESOME!
he is so friggin huge! I forgot how big this guy is!

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AlfaFilly In reply to Himura-Desiius [2010-01-24 19:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Quite so! XD

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moonspirit-twilight In reply to ??? [2010-01-22 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

wow, kailani really is emo! *can see the mushrooms*
for some reason i think i like him better in black and white. but i can't say im not satisfied! oh man! looking at him feels good.

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CerberusReigns [2010-01-22 09:43:28 +0000 UTC]

We had his colors the whole time? YOU CRUEL, CRUEL PERSON.

That's probably my new favourite plz account.

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purpleduckling In reply to ??? [2010-01-22 02:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, he's not nearly as scary as Reuben described him.

Aquarium colours all along?
WARNING! contains added tricksy.

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TheDarkestPrince In reply to purpleduckling [2010-03-06 20:36:39 +0000 UTC]

YUP. AQUARIUM COLORZ ALL ALOOONGZ

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BloodStainednight [2010-01-22 02:22:50 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you gave the emotion of sympathy to him, he looks so kind and soft <333 I want to hug him.

LOVE THIS.

Favorite page so far

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lil-ill-white-boy [2010-01-22 02:20:34 +0000 UTC]

yipe!

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lil-ill-white-boy In reply to ??? [2010-01-22 02:20:27 +0000 UTC]

yipe!

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Shroudheart61 In reply to ??? [2010-01-22 01:47:35 +0000 UTC]

*has spazz attack and dies* WHEN I SAW THIS I GOT SO EXCITED I ALMOST COMBUSTED~~~~~~~



BUT... Now I haz to waaaaaait.....*goes to die in corner naow*

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tbolt In reply to ??? [2010-01-21 23:27:25 +0000 UTC]

At long last the unveiling of the world's biggest diplomat! =^^=

(will I be heard above the fangirl shrieks here )

I don't know, the layout seems good to me, I think I understand what you are talking about, once you get past frame 5 the last panel commands attention, which is as it should. I like the progression of events that leads to Kailini seeing Federico for the first time, excellent dramatic flow!

Bad thought:

The pair stare at each other for a minute, the silence only broken by the sound of two hearts beating in the night. Federico opens his mouth...

"I'm gonna wait till the midnight hour!
That's when my love comes tumbling down!
I'm gonna wait till the midnight hour,
When there's no one else around!
I'm gonna take you girl and hold you..."

Frantically he moves to silence his cell phone ringer...

"Yo! Feddy! Dood! It's Biff, from the academy!

I heard you was gettin' hitched tonight! Come on! Why'd you keep it a secret from the boyz? We had a bachelor party planned that would have measured on the Richter scale! Has she seen the Feddy monster yet? Does she..."

Federico crushes the device in his hand, drops it to the ground and crushes it again under his heel...



The beauty of fellow men, when you want to see just how low the least common denominator is! =^^=


Other bad thought:

When looking at the last frame, I remembered another song from the past: Existential Blues" by Tom "T-Bone" Stankas. If you ever get the chance to look it up, give it a listen, you might find it to be quite epic =^^=

The verse in particular is...

I was on a QUEST
Walking down the road today, doo-dah, doo-dah
I was walking down the road
I was looking for the truth of life
When I came across all these little people, little people
Little people all around me.

They looked up at me and said "Hey Mister, are you tall?"
And I said "Yes I'm tall, but who are you weird little wonders?"
And they looked up at me with their big bloodshot eyes and said
"We are the lollipop kids, the lollipop kids, the lollipop kids
We are the lollipop kids, we'd like to welcome you to munchkin land."

(You really have to listen to the song to fully appreciate it =^^= )

Keep up the amazing work! The art in your comics is more than a cut above 99% of what I see out there, and the fact that you do it all by yourself makes it a double achievement!

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