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Goodness gracious, for some reason this page was a pain but I am quite happy with the result! Sorry for being so late with it!
Big thanks go out to ~Ayemae ! She suggested I use a blue tone for the shading instead of black and I definitely think it was beyond worth it! As well I decided to mess around with his collar area coloration so it would look better with his skin color.
I nicknamed this page "The Hands Page" cause that's pretty much all it is lol
Unblurred Federico from panel 3: [link]
(Unblurred is totally not a word lol)
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Favorite panel: 2 & 3Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 215
I think it's good that you're taking your time with this. It's turning out beautifully.
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Thank you!
Indeed, I hope the extra time pays off in the end
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How dare you continue to torture me!? I want to see him speak!
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You have improved sooooo much since the beginning of this comic.
The lineart is mad good and mad smooth, I absolutely love it. The coloring gives off a very cool vibe that seems to emphasize how Federico really is, apparently a cold monster? ;3 Or is he?
I love how stunned she looks-- and I also seem to really like her hand in the fourth panel.
This is so good. I am hooked. *reaaad*
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I knooow, right? Federico looked like some noodly stick man in the beginning ohmygosh haha.
Glad you think so too!
Could be! But I ain't tellin >:3
Thank you so much! I am overjoyed to hear you like it <3
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;3 hurr hurr. Federico is a sexy beast.
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I HAVE WAITED TO WEEKS FOR THIS...it..it,
IT WAS SO AWESOME I LOVE YOUR ART N STYLE N *DIES*
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I AM HAPPY THAT YOU ARE HAPPY THEN!
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XD IM SUPER HAPPY XD
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Yesssss, Kailani... GIVE IN TO THE SEXINESS THAT IS FEDDY!
O lawl. :'D
Still no talking, but a helluvalotta hands so it's all good. XP
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OH LAWD
Quite so. xD Do not fret, though, much talking will be soon...
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ugh I love the shadows on panel 4 slkjfgsldjfslf
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DO NOT FRET
WORDS WILL BE SOON
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Wow, the shadowing really makes the characters just jump off the page! You've improved a lot!
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I like your new shading style it gives it a more 3D-ish look
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Thanks! Yeah, it kinda does, doesn't it?
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your late... *taps foot as if about to scold you like your mommy* i ANNOT believe your so late- either that or your just so fast it seems like your late becaus eyou were so fast it went around the world keeping me in the same time zone and-hahahahahaha. im joking. i love you, dont hurt meh!!!
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I know I am a bad horrible person!
Haha!
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*hugs* we have something in common then ^^U
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o wow that is really good. what program do u use? cuz all i have is paint
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I use Photoshop Elements 3.0
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o cool
ya i dont have the technology
dats why im a traditional artist!
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Indeed! And hey, traditional artists are some of the bests!
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i havent been able to post anything for a while but everyone has noticed a change.
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Hahaha, the "Hands Page" is very suiting. xDDD But it is a very GOOD hands page~
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Man it looks AWESOME with the blue tones!
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Thanks! I definitely think so too. Shame I didn't realize it earlier!
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Hmmm, just a hint of blur in panel 3 to add highlight to his hand, subtle but nice touch! =^^=
Excellent meeting by default, barring the custodial staff, there is little doubt as to who is whose intended...
Kailini has retractable claws on her hand? I did not catch that from earlier pictures, but I like how you have handled it here. I'll keep that in mind as a reference should I ever do something similar...
Conversely, Are those two-tone gloves that Federico is wearing? Are his fingers just pointy, or doe he have nails? It doesn't look bad, I'm curious, though...
Finally, you really have to watch these verbose panels, too much dialogue can bog the viewer down and really hid your excellent art! 
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Yup, indeed. All the Ambivian characters (plus, of course, Kailani, and Zamora as well) have retractable claws. C:
Nope, not two-toned, he simply has blue fingers. 
And he actually does have "claws" but that are, um, "imbedded" in his finger tips, I suppose is the way to explain it. There is no actual nail on the outside, but inside, rather. His skin goes over it. They aren't very sharp when his hands are relaxed, but when he "clenches" his fist the skin is pulled tighter and the nail is not only more noticeable but they are sharper.
Hope that explains it. Not too long and I will actual show this in the comic itself for visual aid. :]
I know! It's terrible ain't it? Haha!
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so cute!!!! i totally can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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No problem, you should publish this comic so the whole world could read it and be amazed
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I really love this 
O3o And this page is also really like...intense. It's all emotional cause it has no words xD I imagine some epic love song playing. Or something. but I think that's just me >__>
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