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NOTE: THIS PAGE IS TO BE REPLACED IN THE FUTURE.Next page: [link]
Previous page: [link]
Prologue: [link]
Chapter 1: [link]
FAQ: [link]
You get to see the first of Finnie, the crazy foster-mother lady who can never stop smiling! :D You'll hear more of her later.
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Favorite panel: 2 & 3 Least Favorite panel: 4 (Tanner's right arm looks a bit awkward) Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 90
I didn't remember they were on colours now xDD lol.
But great work as usual, and i think you managed to do awesome job with the poses and how they all seem to have their opinion on the whole Selection-thing :3 I love the bright colours you use, and definitely PNG is so much better than JPG ! Faving this n.n
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XD I forget at times too. I almost started this page in grayscale!
Hehe Thanks! :3 I've learned to show off the personalities of the chars first or else people get confused later on.
Indeed it is! XD
<33 Thank you!
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Haha, good for you :'D
NEED MOAR SELECTION :3
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ohhhhhhh
i gotta read this whole thing nao!
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Oooh Jenelle's hair in the second panel looks so beautiful and realistic! <8D I love it!
XD LOL big words. Those triplets are so cute!
FINNIE SCARES ME. D8 I know I have crazy characters but waaaahhh! I'm such a hypocrite. XD
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<8D Hurrah! Glad you like it and its uberness XD
X3 Indeed they are. And what's even cuter is their name initials spell "A B C" XDDD
O rly? *evil* mwuhahahaha!
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Dude, I love this comic
Lol, BIG WORDS ._.
I envy your amazing-tastic comic skizills
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:333 awww yay! I'm glad!
Big words indeed! D:
Thank you so much <33 I always try the best I can!
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lol, Jenelle reminds me of eudora so much! XD And Tanner's expression looks so funny in panel five. Nice work!
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XDD As she should! hehe
:3 Thank you!
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I like the forth panel the best, I like the blue guy alreadyc ^-^
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<3 Oh yes, you gotta love Tanner! XD
:3
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Ahhh, man, I could look at this forever!
The amount of detail and effort you've put into this, heck, ALL the pages of your comics are staggering. All the small little accessories on Tanner... the happy face sticker on his chest in panel 3 makes me grin. XD
I really like the shading on this. Its subtle and makes the comic easy to read, yet its noticeable and avoids making the characters look flat.
Panel two has to be my favorite. The line art on that panel really caught my eye for some reason. I love Jenelle's hair, as well as her eye. 
Plus.
Coolest. Couch. EVER! I want one! D:
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:3 aww, yay!
I always loved tiny details (lol like the pants chains) though sometimes I do tend to go overboard. I fear sometimes that's not a good thing since I never want to overcrowd a page XD;; But I'm glad your opinion on it is a positive one :3 For the shading too!
<8D I'm glad you like that stuff! Makes me feel like all the hard work didn't go to waste! :3
I totally want one too! D: It'd be most uber!
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YAAAY!!
Finally I get to obsess over Tanner more~<3 *glomps him*
And don't complain about this, Filly. It looks awesome. xD
I wouldn't have even noticed the things you pointed out in the artist's comments if you hadn't said anything about it.
Oh yes, and the new font looks good. It works well.
I look forward to these every time I see there's a new one listed in my... list... of recent pictures...thing. (Whatever it's called. xD) So yes, you have big a fan of these comics!
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XDD daww, Tanner is loved! :3
XDD oh wells, all is good!
Glad you think so! <83 I think the same thing.
Uhh... I always call it my devBox XD Um... dev.. dev... yeah I dunno.
Well, I shall keep working on more pages and not let you down! <8D
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This is pwn <8DDD
The only thing I have to crit on is in the first panel, Tanner has bows and in the third, they disappear, unless he had taken them off. <8o
Man I love this comic <8D Keep 'em comin'!
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Oh yeah, he had a bow on his ear. I guess it fell or something XD Maybe Kailani took it off. And the bow on his tail most likely fell off as he's flailing his tails around like a retard XD
<8D Thank you!! And I shall!
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XD Tail-flailing is fun
OH THAT'S LIKE A TONGUE TWISTER MAN XDDDD Tail flailing! 8D *retard grin*
No problemo <8DDD
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Tail flailing tail flailing XDDD it is!!
<33
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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
*glomps ya head and noms it*
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<8DD YAY! *arm wave*
OMG NOMING MY HEEEAD! *flails and runs in circles*
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*lets go* ....your head tastes like chocolate ^^
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yup X3333333333
TASTEEEEY!!!!
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yay i look all emoXD ....ill say thats a good thing i love tanner hes cools XD and its...its...THE LADY WHO CANT STOP SMILING!!!!
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Emo Jenelle with her big poofy hair XDD
<8O SMILING LADY OF DOOM!
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You know ... it might not be a good idea to point out everything you see as flawed xD because people might not even notice, otherwise and it's just the Artist's Self-criticality
But anyway.
Again, I'm very curious to see how things will go (but I thought they were all already selected when they were little? Is it just they're not .. er.. "collected" until later?)
And with the pose thing .. is it overdone? I don't know. I think it fits her well (as do the other poses for the other characters -- it's pretty neat looking at all the little details you added). It just really seems like a talking-and-pondering-on-something kind of pose. (Why is she putting happy stickers on Tanner? XD)
Good job with the paneling this time bytheway.
(and oh gosh those little kids seem irritating .. but only because the one going "Big words!" reminds me of my friend's little sister, and I have a bit of trouble with little kids. Erm.. that's not a criticism though, just a statement :3)
My main suggestion would be. . perhaps make Finnie look a little older? She seems like she's as young as the rest of them
(Maybe she just tries real hard? ^><^)
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Well, I like to point the stuff out cause I hate it when people crit me on things I already know cause it's just not a fulfilling critique in my opinion since I'd prefer them to mention things I don't know. So that's why XD
Yes, they were already selected but they aren't allowed to be mates until the children are of the age of 15, which is the legal mating age, because any younger and it would be considered pedophillia. :o
And that's never good.
Ooh, why thank you. :3 glad you think it fits. I guess I just worry about people coming up and going all "ohhh you copied dat from meeee!"
She's taking a sticker off actually XD There was one on his forhead in the last page so.. I guess she took off that one
ooh, yay, I didn't fail! <8D
Oh gosh, I'm not a fan of little kids either. Only one 5 year old I ever liked and she was my friends little sister. She wasn't a total brat like most little kids are.
Ya know, I was actually pondering on that same subject. But then I remembered that Ambivians have extremely long lifespans (if a single one would live a healthy life where they never got sick or anything, they could live to be past 1,000 years of age. Though most Ambivians die by the time they get about 200 from various reasons.) Finnie is about 300 years of age, maybe a little older, but because of their lifespans being so long getting the appearance of old at that age wouldn't be good and instead be a sign of unhealthy life style. The only major aspect of her being old is that she has 4 tails (they grow new tails as they get older) and her colors are rather dull.
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Ooh, very nice!
I really like Jenelle's hair in the second panel for some reason, I think it looks incredibly realistic 8D
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<8D Thank you! Yeah, I love her hair, it's so... poofy and shiny XD
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No problemo ^^
XDD 'Tis very.
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Yay page 8!!!! 
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XDD I thought you said page B and I was like "whaaaat?". Silly me! X3
Aww, thank you greatly :3 The character designs took quite awhile to create believe it or not.
Aw, I'm sure you could! Don't doubt yourself! <83
Thank you!
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Big words! XD
Haha, poor Tanner.
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XD But of course!
Thank you! :3
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