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Published: 2012-11-13 18:47:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 13647; Favourites: 110; Downloads: 390
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Description Hey!

So I've decided to upload this unfinished manga-styled comic that I did earlier this year. It's an idea that was quite close to my heart at the time and that I needed to get off my chest. However, working it out and turning it into a short story took two months and during those two months my life transformed a lot (due to unrelated factors) and what happened was that before I was done I had lost all connection to it - I still felt the story, but while when I had started working on it I had this urge to get it out, two months later I really needed to leave it behind in the process of growing as a person. Now I look back at it and think how terribly sappy and emotional and cheesy it is, but I know how much it meant to me at some point, so I will share it for everybody who might currently be in a phase where they can connect to it.

The ending is slightly rushed and the whole thing is missing background inks and screentones, but all the core elements are there. So please read it if you're interested, and let me know what you think or if it induced some feels.


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aniwablue [2012-11-23 21:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, well draw!

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Edarneor [2012-11-14 21:53:10 +0000 UTC]

I dont get it, how come the girl opens the door twice?? in page 7 and 10??

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GeeHALE In reply to Edarneor [2012-11-18 07:22:07 +0000 UTC]

It's a different scene...

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Edarneor In reply to GeeHALE [2012-11-18 11:55:28 +0000 UTC]

then why is the man visiting her second time?? i dont get it 0_o

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GeeHALE In reply to Edarneor [2012-11-18 21:13:47 +0000 UTC]

to pick up another parcel. that's the whole point I guess, she decided to keep sending the parcel to het home so he can pick it up from her. Because she likes him.

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Edarneor In reply to GeeHALE [2012-11-19 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

well there's nothing in the text that indicates it's ANOTHER parcel.. how are we supposed to know this? O___O

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GeeHALE In reply to Edarneor [2012-11-19 01:28:58 +0000 UTC]

hahah you're funny! Well, there are scenes in between pages 7 and 10, so that shows that it's a different time and the parcel didn't happen one after another.

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Edarneor In reply to GeeHALE [2012-11-19 13:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, there's not a single one about how she GETS another parcel...
actually there's not much of a plot anyway for me to complain.. looks like just random pages stitched together

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GeeHALE In reply to Edarneor [2012-11-22 07:44:52 +0000 UTC]

ok...

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Eniat [2012-11-13 21:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Wahaha this entire page is filled up with so much cute!

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Morigalaxy [2012-11-13 19:05:08 +0000 UTC]

omg. this is such a good manga....if it's okay to call it that. I love following it. I like reading this a lot. I can relate! please continue it! XD can't wait for the next page. Great art too!!

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Zolaida [2012-11-13 19:01:54 +0000 UTC]

My precise reaction if I would see that through my peeking hole! Unfortunately we don't have one so I'm always opening them in my pajama pants Dx

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randomacity [2012-11-13 18:55:54 +0000 UTC]

man this is great.

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