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Published: 2014-02-08 04:22:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 13767; Favourites: 527; Downloads: 120
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Description The head and tail probably could have been more realistic, but I tried so many different versions that now none of them look right, but I'm happy with this one.  Anyhow, this is not meant to be a realistic run cycle, but more of a playful lope that you would never actually see.
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Comments: 277

Falcon01733 In reply to ??? [2014-02-19 02:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Checked it out! Much much MUCH better  Let me know if you want commentary on anything else!  You're definitely going places

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Aliuh In reply to Falcon01733 [2014-02-20 00:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I certainly will.  Your point of view has proven quite helpful.

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Avariah-Chan In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 13:48:03 +0000 UTC]

This is so good! <3

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Aliuh In reply to Avariah-Chan [2014-02-08 14:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Avariah-Chan In reply to Aliuh [2014-02-08 17:25:46 +0000 UTC]

No problemo ^^

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HappyRainbow3 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 12:36:15 +0000 UTC]

This is cool

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Aliuh In reply to HappyRainbow3 [2014-02-08 14:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Scar-Finger In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 12:05:22 +0000 UTC]

I have never tried to animate a dog, so I may be wrong, but I think that the problem with the tail is that it is to stiff. It mostly bends at the middle, like a plank, instead of moving like a... wave, or whip? I am unsure  how to explain. I think you want the highest point to sort of roll from the base of the tail to the tip.

Also, you might want the base of the tail to be a bit thinner. Maybe.

Once again, this is just my uneducated guess, so I could be wrong.

Other than that, it looks really great. Good job. ^^

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Aliuh In reply to Scar-Finger [2014-02-08 14:38:38 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly what you mean.  I know what the tail should do, but no matter how many times I try I just can't seem to get it to do it. DX  I'll certainly be trying again.


Thank you!

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Sonitia In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 11:50:38 +0000 UTC]

To me it looks like the head/neck should move more, to give it a bit more natural flow. The tail is a bit awkward looking, yes, I think it might look better if it.. Bent more? xD

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Aliuh In reply to Sonitia [2014-02-08 14:36:20 +0000 UTC]

I going to try a whole different head movement to see what that's like.  This seems to be the most commented on. XD Yeah, I think it just needs to bend more in the middle and I think the tip is flicking at the wrong time.

Thanks!  

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Sonitia In reply to Aliuh [2014-02-08 16:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Good luck~!

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Aliuh In reply to Sonitia [2014-02-08 17:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  I made the changes and updated the animation if you had any further input.

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Catpop In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 10:54:18 +0000 UTC]

I feel like the head and neck are too stiff, perhaps you could loosen the joints up a bit to give it a more natural movement.

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Aliuh In reply to Catpop [2014-02-08 14:32:07 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean.  Thanks!

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SeaSuds In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 10:45:02 +0000 UTC]

I think you have the movement of the legs right but because there is very little movement in the spine or head it sort of looks more like a horse galloping rather than a canine running. If you take a look as this image here (sillydragon.com/muybridge/Plat… you'll see that the curve of the spine is very apparent and that is some sections it actually curves higher than the head. Also when a canine bounds forwards it drives it's nose forwards and this movement is usually a split second before the body itself moves. This gif here is a good example of what I mean: fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/201…

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Aliuh In reply to SeaSuds [2014-02-08 14:31:18 +0000 UTC]

I wan't sure what the head would do because it was a loping canter of some kind, and I can't say I've ever seen a dog canter. XD I'll try the head thrusting forward to see what it looks like, but I didn't think it would do that because its such a gentle run.  I'll try changing the spine too.  I'm now noticing the middle section might be too short as well...


Thank you for your suggestions.

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BlackWolf543 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 09:21:11 +0000 UTC]

hmm it think it needs to be more like your avatar movement wise, but then again, not sure how a shath'kun moves XD

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Aliuh In reply to BlackWolf543 [2014-02-08 14:32:49 +0000 UTC]

They would move like any dog or wolf.  Do you mean the head should move that way?

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BlackWolf543 In reply to Aliuh [2014-02-09 00:44:04 +0000 UTC]

yeah and i think its moving up and down too much,otherwise its pretty good! good job

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Aliuh In reply to BlackWolf543 [2014-02-10 21:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll try a few move head movements to see what looks better. 

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0-Cynder-0 In reply to ??? [2014-02-08 04:22:57 +0000 UTC]

R.I.P fangs lol XD

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Aliuh In reply to 0-Cynder-0 [2014-02-08 04:24:07 +0000 UTC]

XD

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0-Cynder-0 In reply to Aliuh [2014-02-08 04:26:36 +0000 UTC]

YOU KILLED THEM!

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Aliuh In reply to 0-Cynder-0 [2014-02-08 17:55:08 +0000 UTC]

XD

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0-Cynder-0 In reply to Aliuh [2014-02-08 17:58:00 +0000 UTC]

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