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Published: 2010-08-17 03:16:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1744; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 11
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I was actually going to scrap this... but I decided not to. I put too much effort into the background, since I normally suck at them, to call it scrap.This is just a small 'illustration' to a story I was planning on posting... when I get around to it. I have it written... all thirteen pages of it actually, but it's not a one shot. It actually has chapters, and I may write more to it if it gets enough credit when I post the first one.
Anyway, it's just a small doodle I did of Mina during a scene in the story I'd like to write. Basically I thought it'd be ironic if she actually did get bitten by a werewolf, and this is her getting ready to change.
I'd imagine that it would hurt a lot if you broke every bone in your body and they rearranged themselves slowly until you were shaped like a wolf. It would probably hurt a lot, and that's what she's about to endure.
So I decided not to scrap it because I really like how Mina turned out too.
And also because I want a little feed back on it. I feel like I could improve on her. Her arm looks too long and the tears... I don't know if I like them or not.
So please tell me what you think!!
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wow, i would love this. has the story been posted?
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It has and I see that you have found it.
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yep, found it ^^ lol pointless question
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This story sounds little sad, but I like this picture.
And Mina has the miniskirt! ^^
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It does have it's moments where it's kind of devestating, but it all works out in the end. ^^ And I couldn't lose the miniskirt, it just looks so good on her!
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Thanks!
Oh, and I never commented it but I really liked your crossover story between MaTC, gargoyles and... I forgot what the other one was, if there were more shows than that... I nearly cried at the ending though.
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Awwww
Thank you ^^
And yeah it was a really touching ending I was going for that
The other was Beauty and the Beast... Great show, more on the adult side butI think you would probably like it
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I'll be sure to look it up! ^^ That way I'll have a better picture of the characters, lol. Thanks! :3
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very good, only issue I can see, is I thoguht the tears were eyes at first D: Id make them a bit mor obvious that theyre tears, but otherwise just swesome :3
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Yeah I tried doing that while sticking to the original cartoon style but there's honestly only one scene where it looks like she's crying, and I could barely even tell... T.T
But thanks for the comment and feedback!!! I'll be sure to work on it ^^
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YEahhh she's supposed to be fourteen-fifteen... ish. xD Her skirt's a little high though... >.>;
Thanks!!!
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