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alyxcaptor β Final Chapter: Part Four
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They took Samus into the airlock"What are you going to me Chang? what's your plan?" Samus once again asked for her captor's motives.
"My dear, your weakness offends me, you have made my life's work in vain. if i knew you were such a pathetic example of a warrior i would have not travelled back in time at all" Chang said as his guards chained Samus's legs together...
"What's this....chains?" Samus was shocked as within seconds the guards wrestled her arms behind her and chained her arms aswell.
"The journey back to our homeworld isnt a safe one, not even with this ship's advanced weapons. To make sure of a safe passage through thier space we've struck a deal with....the locals" Chang explain
"...me?" Samus stopped struggling for a brief moment in horror of what she was hearing, knowing that she could end up in aliens hands. she didnt even know where she was, she could be sold to a race who hadnt been discovered by the federation yet.
"Yes my dear....you will be our branch of peace to our hosts" Chang replied as one guard held samus tight and the other grabbed a mask and headed towards the fallen heroine.
"Whats that...you will NOT stick that on me! dammit let me go!" Samus protested but to no avail.
"During the great war we made your people wear these slave masks when we captured them...now you will wear it, as one last sign of my power over you" Chang explained further as the mask was forced onto Samus's face.
Samus was humiliated as she was brought over to the centre of the airlock and forced to face the door that would soon open.
"This is where our fates will part Samus Aran...If you survive, i would like to face you again sometime" Chang said as the door between him and the airlock shut closed.
Seconds later the outer door began to open, with no fight left Samus closed her eyes and dropped her head. She heard the footsteps of someone or something walk towards her and the guards who held her up.
Samus was too ashamed to look up as the guards spoke to whoever they were giving the great bounty hunter too.
"We present you this gift from General Chang for safe passage through your space...he says you will not be displeased with her" The Guards said
"No...no i dont think i will..." said the voice. a voice that Samus reckonised all too well.
She looked up in a mixture of horror and shame to see Weavel standing over her.
"The Space Pirate army will grant you safe passage through this system for this gift....it was nice doing business with you" Weavel said as he looked straight into Samus's worried eyes.
THE END.
...TO BE CONTINUED?
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Comments: 11
ahhhh Weavel nooooo (amo ese hunter... enserio)
me gustarΓa saber como terminarΓ‘ esto -.-
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I love the paradox implied here; time travel stories are fun for stuff like that, and having Chang be the one ultimately responsible for the death of his people speaks of his hubris and Samus' inevitable escape.
As for the "to be continued," I have only one thing to say.
Yes, please.
Consider me something of an addict to your work.
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ive done a small spin-off christmas special extention to the story ill post up soon, just to see "what happens next"
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You are an absolute saint.
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Now that's an insult! And that mask looks soooooooooooo ugly even on her pretty face
A dawn shame Radimus is one of mine, he would help her kick her way out of this ... and she probably woudn't B grateful at all
Anyway ...
Nice story!
I like it very much!
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cheers, its shame i couldnt find a better mask anywhere on the internet :@
its just abit too big, if only it was abit smaller in size it might work alot better.
afterall a slave mask isnt really a statement of fashion intent, lol
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Guess U can say that
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im sure i can make larger panels for you, that shouldnt be a problem.
as for old requests im still looking for a cage...where she is a slave...that was your request right?
either way i tried to do a crap version in this story at the start, but its just still not a real cage :@
im sure samus can blast a big thing for you in the next part of the story...if i can figure out a way to do it.
that or ill just do a one off picture for you
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ps. "Interesting how Chang pieced together what must have happened."
im glad someone got the subtle subplot. i didnt wanna make it too obvious, since he came back to stop this war i didnt really want him to change his mind after beating samus. thus he was the one that convinced his race to go to war afterall.
altho i was maybe gonna continue it at a later date and turn him more towards "the dark side" after samus gets her revenge on him.
i duno...since i did the whole change history thing i can do whatever i want now in an alternate reality haha.
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And we're back to the Space Pirates.
Not a bad story, overall. Interesting how Chang pieced together what must have happened. (Considering Samus weak, they launch their attack on humanity.) Not enough bondage scenarios for my tastes, but then again, you aren't making this purely for my tastes. And you already did that with your last Samus story.
You know, like my earlier request to see Alyx actually successful once in a while, I think it might be an idea to do so with Samus. In her power suit. Blasting the living hell out of something large and dangerous. Or many large and dangerous things. Just to prove that this girl is actually capable of something other than getting caught and abused all the time. I mean, I enjoy seeing it as well, but still, moderation.
As an aside, don't suppose you could make a larger resolution picture of Samus in shackles with the mask on? Maybe both Panels 2 and 4.
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