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alyxcaptor — Part Seven
Published: 2009-12-09 00:35:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 8131; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 150
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A Dark shadow slowley moved down the tunnel and towards Alyx, too dark to realise what it was Alyx pulled her the cloth that bind her wrists and legs more and more."Alyx...i would like you to meet our pet, She'll enjoy your company im sure of it" Becca said as she broke out into further laughter
Soon the grunts and noises from the shadow became all too obvious to the helpless resistance member.
"Goodbye Alyx, your friends will find you...but only what's left" Becca shouted
Alyx screamed into her gag as the shadow moved into the light, all the time getting closer to her as the fear grew inside her.
From out of the shadows stepped a zombie, only feet away from Alyx who couldnt get free, screaming into her gag, gripped with fear as her two captor's above watched in sick pleasure at the horror that was about unfold.
The End.
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Comments: 5
Wow. Heroines in your story meet with a lot of grisly fates. Am I right that each of these stories are meant to be independent of their predecessors?
I do have one suggestion. The heavily shadowed scenes in this tale were perhaps too dark. I understand that sets the mood, but often they were so dark I couldn't make out the scene. It might help to tweak the shadows.
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tweek shadows...got ya! ill try and remember for the next dark scene i do.
they are all independent but yet somehow all tied in together. the original idea was to show what alyx went through before the events of half-life 2.
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Ah, I see.
Then I hope someone jumps to Alyx's rescue soon, else she won't make it to Half-Life 2.
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ooooooooow! Great story! I like this very very much, good ending
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