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Round two for artist-at-the-ready original character tournament.Opponent Audition | Round 1
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Murmeli is way too much fun to draw in his original book form. Had fun writing his dialogue too.
Also brief appearance of Chan.
Murmeli (c) ~Amarathimi
Chan (c) =Aluhnim
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Question: Would "The fight?" be "The first?" in the second-to-last panel?
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That makes more sence, yes.
Thanks for the suggestion. Fixed.
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First time I've felt sorry for Murmeli! He is kind of adorable as a book. XD Great job with the dialogue! I'm really enjoying this so far.
No typos that I noticed on this page! ^^
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It's hard to be arrogant and sassy when you are a small old book. XD
Thank you so much. ;v;
No typos? How is that even possible. :'D
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It is possible because I had already checked this page
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I feel like he would have managed it if he'd at least had his magic, but three out of three definitely nixed it for him. XD
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Very true. XD
(had to google what nixed means)
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Turn that pillar below you into a hollow pipe, genius.
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I'm pretty sure judges have taken that into account. I imagine that the force field is inside the pilar too. XD
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Ah, yay! Murmeli! XD
And I see you used the 'treat books with care' line. XD
Oooh, so much suspense. :3
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Yep. Murmeli lines in your round may have influenced be a little. XD
Mission accompliced!
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