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After knocking Obi wan down the shaft during their duel on Naboo, Darth Maul performed another force push to send Obi wan further down the shaft. Obi wan was able to grab a vent in order to survive the encounter. Meanwhile, Maul would escaped Naboo after realizing the droid army was deactivated and the battle was lost. The sith lord then returned to his master to complete his training

Following his election as chancellor, Palpatine recruited Dooku to the Dark Side. Although he already had an apprentice, Palpatine offered Dooku a to be the head of a new order of Dark Jedi that would be established upon the commencement of the Sith's reign of the galaxy. Sidious trained Dooku in the ways of the Dark Side, which he in turn would pass on to the sith's acolytes. As Dooku was not taught any sith secrets, it would not be a violation of the Rule of Two. When the Clone Wars draws near, Dooku served as the leader of the Separatists due to his political influence and capability to lead them.

Believing himself to be the successor of the Sith, Maul sought out an apprentice for himself to aide him in overthrowing his master. Sometime between during the 10 year period before the Clone Wars began, Maul returned to his home planet of Dathomir and requested the aide of Mother Talzin and the nightsisters to find him an apprentice. After inspecting the candidates offered by the Nightbrothers, Maul selected his brother Savage Oppress to be his apprentice and had the Nightsisters transform him into a monster who would be a worthy apprentice. Maul kept Savage on Dathomir under the protection of the Nightsisters so that Sidious would not be able to sense him. Maul trained Savage from a distance, providing him guidance.

As the Clone Wars dragged on, Maul sought to seize power for himself. When the war began, Maul was appointed as Supreme Commander of the Separatist Droid Army (General Grievous is one of the top commanders under Maul). First he planned to assume control of the Confederacy when he felt Dooku was no longer needed. The laws of the Confederacy of Independent Systems stated that if the head of state becomes incapacitated during a time of emergency, the supreme commander will take his place. Under this scenario, Maul as the supreme commander would become the new head of state if Dooku were to die. To achieve this end, Maul sent his apprentice Savage to Serenno to kill Dooku with the aide of an invisibility spell and the poison dart given by Talzin. With this aides combined with his years of training under both Maul and the Nightsisters, Savage succeeds in killing Dooku. After Dooku was killed, Maul would take over as the new head of state of the Separatists and while pinning Dooku's death on the Jedi, thereby making him a martyr.

After Maul assumed control of the Confederacy, the Clone Wars became an actual war for power between Sidious and Maul. The exchange of secrets between the Republic and the Confederacy as previously done between Palpatine and Dooku came to an end. Palpatine knew he could not simply have Maul killed because he needed the threat of the Separatists to secure his accumulation of power in the Senate; the Separatists would not likely survive long after losing both Dooku and Maul and would be compelled to surrender before Palpatine could declare himself Emperor. Maul used the Separatists' massive droid armies to their full potential and launch a series of campaigns to deal serious damage to the Republic which is what Dooku was trying to avoid.

In order to deal be able to deal with Palpatine, Maul returned to Dathomir and had Talzin and the Nightsisters perform the same ritual as she performed on Savage to increase in own physical capabilities and force potential such that he could rival Sidious. Maul's speed, strength, and power were enhanced to the point where he could match his master's strength.

When the time came, Maul launched a massive assault on Coruscant in order to face Palpatine and bring down the Republic. While the droid army launched a massive attack to distract the Jedi and their forces, Maul uses his Scimitar's cloaking capabilities to slip past the Republic's defenses and go after go after Palpatine. Sensing his apprentice was coming for him, Palpatine waited in his suite in 500 Republica for Maul to face him despite the Jedi and security forces insisting that he take shelter. Maul easily butchered his way through the clones and Jedi in his path to reach Palpatine's suite, where his master was waiting. As the two Sith Lords ignited their red blades, the duel for the future of the galaxy and the final lesson between master and apprentice commenced.

Art done by Amenoosa

Commissioned art own by GeneralDodders

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Comments: 42

bardock737 [2024-12-09 05:23:45 +0000 UTC]

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FictionGarden [2024-07-08 03:53:48 +0000 UTC]

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DragonSlaer54 [2021-06-08 03:33:33 +0000 UTC]

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GeneralDodders In reply to DragonSlaer54 [2021-06-11 11:13:58 +0000 UTC]

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DragonSlaer54 In reply to GeneralDodders [2021-06-11 11:37:47 +0000 UTC]

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GeneralDodders In reply to DragonSlaer54 [2021-06-11 11:41:21 +0000 UTC]

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nhearn34 [2021-03-30 17:54:11 +0000 UTC]

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josepets In reply to nhearn34 [2021-05-27 00:22:31 +0000 UTC]

He seemed to believe in the Rule of Two in the real timeline, so likely it would be similar to Palpatine's relationship with Vader (Savage) and a couple dozen inquisitors and dark Jedi

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nhearn34 In reply to josepets [2021-05-28 03:06:23 +0000 UTC]

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Andruril93 [2019-11-26 15:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!  Dang, that is quite the story.  And the artwork, Sithsational! (not a pun, a cheer word)

Darth Maul is my favorite Sith, even more so than Vader.  So this of course makes it better for me, having him Really reach his full potential.  Awesome and badass!!

Question, is this actually "part one" in a series of "what if" scenarios?  If so, what order do the rest go in?

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Amenoosa In reply to Andruril93 [2019-12-04 17:17:21 +0000 UTC]

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Andruril93 In reply to Amenoosa [2019-12-04 17:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely!  It's great!

And yeah, the commissioner told me all about it.  And like I said, you really breathe life into his ideas!

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Amenoosa In reply to Andruril93 [2019-12-15 11:48:20 +0000 UTC]

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Andruril93 In reply to Amenoosa [2019-12-15 13:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, awesome!!

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GeneralDodders In reply to Andruril93 [2019-11-27 19:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Maul is my favorite Sith too.

What I have been doing is commissioning Amenoosa to draw different scenes from my personal Star Wars fanfiction. I do not have the time or talent to put my ideas to paper so all I can do is commission other people to draw my ideas for me. All the pictures to the side here under "More from Amenoosa" are scenes from my story. In terms of chronological order, this is how they go from earliest to latest in the story:

1.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar….
2.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
3.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
4.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
5.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
6.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
7.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
8.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
9.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
10.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
11.) www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…

This pictures here don't have a particularly place in the sequence; they just take place during the Clone Wars:

www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…
www.deviantart.com/amenoosa/ar…

There are a few others coming out still

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Andruril93 In reply to GeneralDodders [2019-11-27 20:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! This really IS a full series!  Looks awesome!

And yeah, I understand where you're coming from.  All I myself can do is make PhotoShop pieces with existing sources.  They may turn out good looking, but there's only so much you can do with photo manipulation.

I'll be sure to read more of it all at some point.    These idea seem quite well thought out and executed, and his work really brings it out.
It's just I kinda have to motivate myself to read full fanfics these days.  Guess it's just how I roll.
Question though   does this series fully follow a lasting dark path for the Galaxy?  Or might there be a good resolution at some point?  Just wondering.

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GeneralDodders In reply to Andruril93 [2019-11-28 03:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Ultimately the story does get a happy ending, but I am unsure exactly how that will happen. Basically in my story the Rebellion ends up fighting the Confederacy instead of the Empire, but I don't have all the details worked out. Also, I am only having Amenoosa draw scenes from my story I want to see so the whole thing won't be posted.

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Andruril93 In reply to GeneralDodders [2019-11-28 12:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, okay good.  And that makes sense, I hope you get a good idea for that at some point.

Ohhhh, does that mean that the fanfics in your gallery are significantly longer?  And these are just single scenes from them?

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GeneralDodders In reply to Andruril93 [2019-11-28 13:19:12 +0000 UTC]

There are no written fan fictions. As I previously said, I am no writer so I don’t have the skills to put my ideas to paper. The only way I can bring my ideas to life is by hiring other people to draw them for me. All my ideas and stories are locked up in my mind.

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Andruril93 In reply to GeneralDodders [2019-11-28 13:35:32 +0000 UTC]

You mean you didn't write this one?
What if Darth Maul was not cut in half?After he knocked Obiwan down the shaft, what Darth Maul should have done is use force push again to force Obiwan down the shaft even further so that he could not get out. Obiwan would not die because he would get out of there the same way as Maul did when he fell by grabbing a vent. Maul would then escape Naboo realizing the battle was lost. Obiwan would stil train Anakin as Quigon would speak to him through the force asking him to train the boy.
Sidious would still recruit Dooku but he would not become a sith apprentice since Maul is still alive. Sidious would still train Dooku in the dark side but he would not teach him any sith practices. Since Dooku can't be a sith Sidious would have to offer him another place in the new order. My idea is he could offer to make Dooku the head of a new dark Jedi order, in which Dooku would pass on Sidious' teachings. Since they are not sith it doesn't violate the Rule of Two. Dooku's first recruit for this new Jedi order would be his former apprenti

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GeneralDodders In reply to Andruril93 [2019-11-28 13:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Well I wrote that but that really isn’t a full fledged fanfic. I was just spouting some ideas I had from my version of the Star Wars universe. But really that’s all I have on paper.

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Andruril93 In reply to GeneralDodders [2019-11-28 13:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh, okay.  That makes sense.  Now I getcha.

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AlvinADChipmunk [2019-07-22 21:31:46 +0000 UTC]

Maul vs Sidious between Master and Apprentice. It is a Sith way. Other than that, this is amazing artwork from what I'd look upon it.

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Amenoosa In reply to AlvinADChipmunk [2019-07-26 20:01:49 +0000 UTC]

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AlvinADChipmunk In reply to Amenoosa [2019-07-26 20:10:35 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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LuciusShades96 [2019-05-06 04:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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Amenoosa In reply to LuciusShades96 [2019-05-15 06:32:30 +0000 UTC]

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christeam122 [2019-03-19 16:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Amenoosa In reply to christeam122 [2019-03-20 07:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 

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christeam122 In reply to Amenoosa [2019-03-20 14:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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bushye [2019-02-17 05:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Darth maul is awesome.

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Amenoosa In reply to bushye [2019-02-17 19:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 

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bushye In reply to Amenoosa [2019-02-18 16:53:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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DarthWill3 [2019-02-04 03:33:01 +0000 UTC]

"Treachery is the way of the Sith."

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zacharyknox222 [2018-12-15 01:00:48 +0000 UTC]

i love it!

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Amenoosa In reply to zacharyknox222 [2018-12-15 11:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 

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zacharyknox222 [2018-12-15 01:00:43 +0000 UTC]

i like it!

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WOLFBLADE111 [2018-12-14 15:25:28 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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Amenoosa In reply to WOLFBLADE111 [2018-12-15 11:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 

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WOLFBLADE111 In reply to Amenoosa [2018-12-15 13:11:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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ShinobiDigidestined In reply to WOLFBLADE111 [2018-12-14 17:12:28 +0000 UTC]

I agree: AWESOME.

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Amenoosa In reply to ShinobiDigidestined [2018-12-15 11:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks 

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