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Amorphous-blob — BFOI Y2 Round 7 - SEE COMMENTS
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Published: 2015-04-21 10:57:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 912; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 1
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GREAT ARCEUS IT'S OVER
/throws tablet across the room
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Before I give you all the link to my entry, here are some DISCLAIMERS
- Entry contains mild amounts of blood. It's at most pg-13 amounts of blood, but it does exist.
- Images may be overly large and take a while to load. Non-terrible internet recommended.
- On that note, it's best if you have a screen width of at least 900 pixels.
- Please use the newest version of Firefox or Chrome! I'm not sure if the images will display properly in other browsers...
- I'm a failure at page numbering, so sometimes it might seem like some pages got skipped. It didn't. I just can't count.
With that over with...
CLICK HERE FOR THE LINK TO MY BFOI Y2 ROUND 7 SUBMISSION
If the website goes down for some reason, please tell me and I'll try to get it back up ASAB! Meanwhile, here's a folder with all the comic pages, in case everything broke and died and I can't fix it. Note that it is actually all the pages despite the janky numbering (I'm bad at this).
Trainer apps and things:
Tom: amorphous-blob.deviantart.com/…
Hadyn the Ranger: battle-frontier.deviantart.com…
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MISCELLANEOUS COMMENTARY
p2 - the geography of Mt. Mauna is naturally formed by "whatever was most conveniently dramatic at the time"
p11 - tom, that is not how you train pokemon
p12 - caves caves caves caves
p14 - I REALLY LIKE DRAWING CAVES
p16 - Rex is talking about this Copernicus and this Luna .
p17 - Space images thanks to NASA and the Hubble Telescope:
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Ob…
commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Fil…
p23 - WE'RE TOO BUSY FOR YOUR ANGSTY SELF-DOUBTING, REX. Also, that final panel is like... 95% of the script that I cut out 
p25 - ...remember how last time I joked that the number of pages I draw increases by 2 per round?
Well...
haha....
haha...
hahahahaha....
In other words, I'M NEVER WRITING SOMETHING SO ANGSTY AGAIN
I'M SORRY REX, YOU SEEMED LIKE A GOOD IDEA 3 YEARS AGO
This is probably the first time in BFOI I disliked my script more than I disliked my art... I'm not sure if that's saying something about my script or my art though.
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Comments: 28
I've been reading through a lot of the Ohana Islands Y2 stuff before Y3 happens, and I just thought I'd let you know that (at least) I can't get the link working? it comes up with an error thing, then a webhosting thing
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Ahhhh looks like my free hosting ran out! The formatting is kind of off from the original version, but you can read it in my stash here: sta.sh/2mj9tbkoqbj
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Opalfiredragon 's mom
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Dem caves. I'm just gonna steal a little of those painting skills, don't mind me. : D
But seriously, awesome entry! I really like your art style, and the emotion came through in the story (Poor little Zippy looked so sad!). I hope Tom is going to be okay! Cause.. cause that's a lot of blood.. :[ Save him, Rex!
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^o^ Caves are really fun to paint! You just make things up as you go along. Highly recommend, 10/10, would paint again.
Thank you~
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p17 is absolutely beautiful, and this whole round blows my mind! Great job!!
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This must've been both a joy and hell to finish, but wow am I blown away!! The amount of time and effort that was put into the round is just a little too mind numbing for me to comprehend...all of the character's personalities and thoughts and actions just seem to weave together to create such a suspenseful yet powerful entry!! I have to agree with Trainer48; there's totally an ending with that cliffhanger, and we're all dying to know what happens next, it's so captivating!!
I just can't think of anything more to say, I'm just that blown away by the amount of work and skill in this entry. So happy you were able to make it and share with us this wonderful entry!!
ITS OK ABOUT THE CAVES, CLEARLY WE REALLY LIKED THEM TOO
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Ahhh, thank you for your kind words *-* This round had ... way too many pages ..... I'm really glad people are enjoying it though! It makes all the work worth it, haha ^-^;;
I blame the admins for giving me a location that's MORE CAVES, CAVES ALL DAY EVERYDAY, THERE'S NOTHING BUT CAVES
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Goodness, what an amazing round! You certainly went all out, and it shows beautifully! I think we all could learn something from how you portrayed your characters, and all the suspense.
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*-* Thank you!! This round was significantly more effort than I planned on putting in, haha.
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Wow, that was such a huge build-up! Amorphous, I'm jealous of your ability to create suspense, and I don't think you should worry about your script, everything was conveyed perfectly. I feel you're still building up to something big, and I really hope you get a chance to follow through with it, because you're hinting at the penultimate direction of your story and we're all here reading thinking, "GAH! Must know more!!!"
I was really waiting for Rex (having accepted Tom's death as Tom himself has) to burst in and get amongst the action of battle, but after a second read-through I realized that he's flying in to teleport Tom away, right?
And overall, I loved your art in this round! The best analogy I can come up with is this. If your previous rounds have been episodes to a series, then this round is the movie. More time and effort has gone into this than normal, and it shows. Congratulations on finishing the round a whole 24 hours ahead of deadline, and best of luck in passing onto the next round! I'll be eagerly waiting for the results!!!
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Ahhhhh, thank you!! T-T I've been staring at this script for so long that I can't tell good from bad anymore, haha.... It's like, reverse Stockholm Syndrome
Rex does what Rex does. We'll see what happens next :>
The episode length increased, but the production costs also went up T-T Thank the admins for the extension! I definitely wouldn't have made it if not for the few extra days...!
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Just a quick add-on. I realized there was so much more that I appreciated in this that I never mentioned. Pory's little battery charge thing made me laugh for its cuteness and brilliance. And then the entire page with Rex and Arceus, was the most grandiose culmination I think I can recall in the BFOI. It was an utter joy to feel the pace and the dialogue building up between them, and the drawings you had of the legendaries, the earth, the universe throughout it all. I can't tell you how much I appreciate the way you made Arceus look, as if an entire galaxy or something is confined inside of him! I'll stop fan-girling now. Good luck! ^U^
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>A< Ahhhh you're seriously too nice. Thank you! I had a lot of fun drawing Arceus :>
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Oh my goodness...I'm so glad you finished!!! ;A; -pats-
Them caves tho'
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Th..thanks... ^q^
Caves are really fun to draw, ok?! ;A;
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I got through the first few pages and was like "Wow! This is really neat!" and then it was like like LOL THAT WAS JUST THE INTRO and I was all JDAFSKLJSADFSAK.
But in all honesty this was sooooooo goooooooddd!!! You're crazy for saying you didn't like your script! U8<
I love how surreal and atmospheric it was, bouncing between characters, locations, and even visions. The page with the 'left eye' but and the planet and stars was just hypnotizing! I also like how you focus on conversation between the Pokemon themselves. It's something different that you don't see in other people's entries.
BUT DID YOU JUST ACTUALLY KILL HIM?! FADSJFLAKDFL FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
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Ahhhh thank you for all your kind words!! I've stared at this script for so long that I can't tell good from bad anymore, ahaha T-T
maybe
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HYPE HYPE HYPE HYPE BEEN LOOKIN' FORWARD TO THIS, LET'S GO.
COMMENTS TYPED AS I GO THROUGH.
Kinda freaked out that I was missing something for the first ten pages, but the pacing was silent and AWESOME. AND OH, GOD, MY HEART.
ALMOST LIKE FATE. HA. HA HA HA H A H A H E L P M E
CAVES CAVES CAVES CAVES LOVE 'EM SO MUCH AND YOUR LOVE SHOWS THROUGH
PAGE SEVENTEEN, SHIT JUST GOT REAL. YOUR PAGES ARE SO PRETTY--!
YOUR SCRIPTING IS BEAUTIFUL, SHHH. I GOT FEELS FROM THE RIGHT EYE/ LEFT EYE STUFF. JUST SHHH.
NO, DON'T DO THIS TO ME. T O M
OH GOD, MY HEART. DID YOU JUST-- I-- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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<3
I'VE BEEN WAITING TO DO THIS FOR YEARS
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I CAN KINDA TELL, YEAH. <3 GOOD JOB. so, is Tom dead?
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holy heck this is fantastic!! Your art style is as amazing as ever !!
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