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Description Unable to fall back to sleep, Ellin found herself getting out of bed. Her feet carried her out past her sleeping roommates, and into the cold hallways of the school. She wondered for a moment if she was sleepwalking, before remembering that she was in fact awake.

She had dreamed of dragons again.

It was odd - Ellin couldn't remember having such a dream before, yet it felt so familiar that she was sure it couldn't be the first. The clarity of the dream remained in her mind as she walked, and it was so strong that she could still see the dragons around her. Most of them ignored her, as a vision should do, but some turned their heads to watch her as she walked past. Ellin continued walking, not thinking of where she was going - she simply walked through the crowd of dragons as if they were real and the stone walls around her were a dream. For a fleeting moment she worried about walking into a wall.

It was warm where the dragons were, and the sun was shining bright above their heads. Looking around, Ellin saw that she was suddenly alone. She paused. Movement in the corner of her eye made her turn. It had been blending in perfectly with the brown and green landscape, but now that it was moving she could see another dragon walking toward her. It - she - was quite a bit taller than Ellin, she saw when the beautiful creature came close enough. The dragon came so close that she could feel the warmth of its breath, and she was sure that if she touched it she could feel the texture of the scaly skin.

Ellin gently reached out for the dragon's shoulder, as the creature turned its head to look at her. With a small shock, Ellin noticed that the dragon's green eyes matched her own. The corners of her mouth turned up in a little smile, and somehow she saw her smile reflected in the dragon's features. Her hand was now merely an inch from the dragon's shoulder. She took one step closer, and a thrill ran through her body as she felt her dragon's warm, soft skin beneath her fingers. She closed her eyes for a moment...

When Ellin opened her eyes again, the vision was gone. She could once again feel the cold of the stone floor on her feet, and the only light came from the lamps placed at regular intervals along one wall. But she was not alone.

Mr Arag stood a short distance away, right outside the door to his rooms. "So you've met your dragon now, have you?" His voice was soft and steady, but his eyes held the shine of excitement.

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Heeee. I hope you guys like this, because I put loads of time into it. I still think it could be much better, but considering my current skill level I'm fairly pleased with it. I'll probably open it up again in a few months and see what magical changes occur.

This is a scene from my story Dragonstone. Hey look, for once Ellin isn't wearing a school uniform! Wheee! Also, you might recognize the dragon from this sketch . That's right, this is Ohagad in full color. Incidentally, 'ohagad' means 'leader' in dragon language.

Why, yes, I do enjoy giving you guys teasers for my stories.

Anyway, I am certainly open for crits on this piece. Don't just give me a bunch of 'omg that's amazing I love it'...I like to know what other people think could be changed or made better in my art. It helps me out, you know?

Also feel free to ask questions about the story, but I don't guarantee that you'll get many answers.
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Comments: 20

PeaceOhmuian0025 [2015-07-14 22:16:51 +0000 UTC]

This is AWESOME!!!!

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Honey-Glazed-Hemlock [2011-07-08 07:34:15 +0000 UTC]

And thus the bond was made... ^_^

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Anavar In reply to Honey-Glazed-Hemlock [2011-07-08 08:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Or was it merely strengthened?

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Novarock [2010-09-25 00:41:43 +0000 UTC]

very nice work! ^^

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YummiMookies [2010-06-10 19:18:35 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!

Although somehow, it looks off in certain places...
Other than that, I was blown away

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amolina45 [2010-06-06 16:19:33 +0000 UTC]

wonderful picture

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snurtz [2010-06-03 03:51:51 +0000 UTC]

WHY HAVE I NOT READ THIS STORY?? I WANT TO OMG I WANT TO.

Anyway, I love the expressions because they show exactly what you're portraying. WIN.

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Anavar In reply to snurtz [2010-06-03 05:53:52 +0000 UTC]

You haven't read it because I haven't written it yet. XD

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snurtz In reply to Anavar [2010-06-03 12:25:51 +0000 UTC]

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dragonfiend [2010-05-31 19:42:11 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could draw and colour this good.

The corridor on the left there...that's a dorm hall, yes? My brain is screaming public bathroom hallway ><

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Anavar In reply to dragonfiend [2010-05-31 19:59:13 +0000 UTC]

LOL. Yes, it's a hallway. Not a bathroom. XD

Also thanks.

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CrystalTwilight [2010-05-31 18:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Ah, it's fantastic! And the little bit of story there makes me want to read more of it.
And you want crit? Well, uh, lets see...

Ellin looks a bit like she's floating above the ground, mostly on her left side.
Ohagad's front feet seem to blend in with the background less than her back legs but they're pretty well blended in.
Her neck also seems a bit... squished somehow.
Mostly I think the characters don't blend in with the background properly, they seem to be floating above it a bit.
The background blends nicely with itself though.

I love the little details though, especially in the plants on the ground on Ohagad's side.
And the colouring is brilliant (:
I'm sorry that I can't give tips on how to make them blend better, I have no experience in that area :/

It's lovely to see Ohagad in colour!
(Oops, I accidentally typed Ohmagad at one point. Looked like Ohmygawd. I'm so sorry o__o)

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Anavar In reply to CrystalTwilight [2010-05-31 19:10:51 +0000 UTC]

XD

Thanks for your input.

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CrystalTwilight In reply to Anavar [2010-05-31 19:56:09 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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Linitha [2010-05-31 18:43:09 +0000 UTC]

This is so cool

I wish I could dream of dragons -facedesk-

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dndchick [2010-05-31 16:31:16 +0000 UTC]

I love this artwork, it is absolutley lovely. I do agree with the previous post, some texture on Ohagad would be appreciated, as she does look flat. Also, I'm not sure if this was your goal, but Ellin and Ohagad look much more 3D and real-ish than the backrounds. All I have to say, all in all, I love it

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Anavar In reply to dndchick [2010-05-31 17:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I definitely need to work on getting them to fit into the background better.

Thanks for your comments.

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nekachan [2010-05-31 15:15:23 +0000 UTC]

This picture is just win. But as far as improvements, I definitely think you should set aside some time to work in a scale-like texture into Ohagad's body. Structure and color is absolutely wonderful, but without some kind of texture he still looks a little flat.

Meep. I hate giving thoughts like these. I stink with texture and my skills aren't up to par with yours. I am unworthy!

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Anavar In reply to nekachan [2010-05-31 17:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Bwaaah, I did put texture on Ohagad. ;A;
And why do people always automatically assume every dragon I draw is male, even when I state otherwise?

Anyway, thanks for your comments.

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nekachan In reply to Anavar [2010-06-01 01:03:19 +0000 UTC]

I could make out some very faint texture, but I think you might wanna go bigger. I'm sure a higher resolution would show yours though. o3o

As for gender confusion...erm...I don't read. But you know this XD

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