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Andorada β Innocence
Published: 2015-11-20 23:30:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1969; Favourites: 255; Downloads: 0
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An Β exercise for recognizing values, light and shadow. Using mainly airbrush. I prefered to use tracing in order to enjoy the process, while practicing the use of values.This is the original photo . I am very open to get advices about how I can improve
Trying to express the suffering of so many innocents around the world...
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Thank you!
What about this?Β
I took into ccount your notes
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Beautiful! Just define the lips
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They are actually defined, in a layer underneeth - if you look closer you can guess some texture. It is just that I am not yet able to make it good enough, and it looks better like this. Having them too raw takes away fromher feminity. I still need to practice that area...
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Yeah
It's No Biggy, It Looks Beautiful Already Anyway
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I did not know about the nameΒ Chiaroscuro, even though I did play a bit with shadow and light on basic objects. I found some videos:Β
www.youtube.com/watch?v=7uwR14β¦
www.youtube.com/watch?v=8a0m9Dβ¦
Is this what you mean?
With the hair I have serious problems, and last time I asked for advice I got feedback that it looks like a peruca - I tend to make too many lines and it gets too much volume. I see that now I went on the other extreme 
As to the shoulder area - there are two strong sources of light: left and right - I thought of having a slight blur shining efect and not have a perfect cut of the shape, to give it a bit of a dreamy feeling.
Regarding the mouth I was wondering if it is better with less definition - since the focus is on her sadnes, where the expression of the mouth should play a role, but the eyes and the tear sould attract the attention. Also, at my level of skill, if I try to apply more contrast on the borders of the mouth, I loose some sweetness and softens in the expression. Thank for highlighting this - I will try to finda way to have both.
I will work on the details you suggested and I send you a version, if you like - I am curious if I manage to do it as you imagine it. (With the hair I am not sure I can do it much better at this point 
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Yes! Chiaroscuro is exactly that and with the shoulder, that effect was honestly beautiful i just wanted to make sure you knew that in scales, definition is a must!
I am still a student learning so I thought i'd give you tips on what i've learned in realism which is my strong point (but not my focus ^^")
If you need help, i'm always available to critiqueΒ
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well done! Caputred the emotions in her eyes very well! ^^
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The sadness, emotions and pain in the child's eyes are so real
Beautiful
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Thank you
I was very sad while working on this piece - sad that there was a conflict in the first place, and sad that usually the innocent people have to suffer, on all sides...Β
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I had already requested it to the gallery
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Oh, I see 
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Wow I really love it. Β I've seen many styles but your really stands out. My congratulations on this wonderful piece
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Thank you, Lukas - discovering while drawing feels really good
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This drawing.... it's perfect! That face's expression is just so fitting to the title, along with the tear falling out...
Amazing work once again, Andorada!
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Thank you, my dear!
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Thank you!
Sorry, I thnk I left you hanging with some replies, I hope I get to the bottom soon!
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...wow this is beautiful ....i like it...
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Wow, you've made this look even lovelier than the original picture.Β
(It looks somewhat like Robert Sheehan! A teeny tiny version of him, lol.)
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I am glad that you like it!
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Wow, really very well done! This is amazing... and I think you have truly captured that "suffering of innocents" 
Keep up the good work!
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I was watching the live transmission from Paris while working on it...
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Stunning work. The lighting is superb and the eyes show so much expression 
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Thank you so much!
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