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AndrewMartinD — Galactic Smackdown: Audition Part 4
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Published: 2015-01-13 05:53:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1167; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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COVERPart 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Part 4: (you are here)
omg so much dialogue, I tried to space it out as much as I could with it still being pleasant to read, let me know if there are any glaring issues for you guys.
Poor Jazz this must be hitting close to home (! ?HM)
Anyways, thanks so much for reading i wub roo guys
Julius Chorster (c)
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Comments: 38
If I would receive a penny from every time I see Willy Wonka reference in GS auditions... whatever XD
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They don't like fishes... Daemon is sad.
Also Jazz, you still have wound ~
But yes, it was really short, which is sad, but still great entry. Hope to see moar!
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LOL the willy wonka references are so common, willy wonka might make a guest appearance.
I'm glad you enjoyed it :'D I'll try to make my rounds longer!
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Wonderful characters! Gosh I really love this audition and the story is real promising- Goodluck in the tournament!
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This is fantastic, the characters are very charming, and I actually laughed at the Chocolate Factory bit XD
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LOL glad ya enjoyed it!
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I say bring it the Faunortarian knight will fight with you or against you hahaha nice job hope to face you in battle
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Haha awesome!! Thanks man, same to you >u<
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If we do let ower fight be one for honor
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WITH JUSTICE space justice of course
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Nooooo with honor and with swords
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Haha, this was awesome! Love all the Wonka references and how Manny wants to go all out to get that chocolate. Amazing job!
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Oh gosh they're both cute nerds I can't decide which is my favorite. Guess I'll have to love them equally : D
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Oh Manny. you adorable alien you. You'll learn about Earth stuff better soon. X'D
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Earth Pop Culture references 101 !!
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He needs to take that class
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THIS IS FANTASTIC
awesome work! awesome doesn't even begin to cover it--
You'll get in for sure ;o;
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waugh thanks right bak atchoo ;u; im eagerly awaiting the rest of yours!
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OHH man this page is the best
the willy wonka stuff was hilarious oomg!
Manny and Jazz are so adorable and badass haha!!
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TEHE Im glad I thought I went overboard with the chocolate jokes
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OOOOH MAN
this audition was wonderful, the bgs were on spot and the humor was great AAA
Also that reference, guess I'll have to make one too, you've tempted me! Good luck to you, can't wait for the cover and refs, and jazz and Manny are incredibly wonderful dorks and I like them a lot. Let's hope we make this one andrew!
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Waugh thanks so much ;u; were gonna make this a rad one
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Plot twist, Willy Wonka was behind everything and the Zerlot Promethium is actually his new brand of rock candy!
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Oh my god it all makes sense o___o
this is perfect
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